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1. "at 5:30 to 6:00 am" was corrected to "between 5:30 and 6:00 am". When expressing a time range, the preposition "between" is used with "and" to connect the two time points. This construction is more grammatically correct and natural in English when describing a time span.

2. "put contact lenses on my eyes" was changed to "put on contact lenses". The phrasal verb "put on" is commonly used for wearing items, including contact lenses. The phrase "on my eyes" is redundant because it's understood that contact lenses are worn on the eyes.

3. "I never miss EMS massage" was modified to "I never miss my EMS massage". Adding the possessive adjective "my" makes the sentence more natural and personal, implying that this is a regular part of the speaker's routine. A countable noun in the singular form, such as "massage," cannot be used without an article or an identifier.

1. "It will be almost six years" was expanded to "It will be almost six years this August". This addition provides more specific context to the time frame. Without this clarification, the statement could be interpreted as referring to the present moment, which would be inaccurate given the starting point of August 2018. By adding "this August", we clearly indicate when the six-year mark will be reached, aligning with the information provided about the start date.

1. "more moist" was corrected to "moister". While "more moist" is grammatically acceptable, "moister" is the comparative form of the adjective "moist" and is more concise. In English, one-syllable adjectives typically form comparatives with "-er" rather than using "more".

2. "spots and wrinkles have faded" was modified to "my spots and wrinkles have faded". Adding the possessive adjective "my" makes the sentence more cohesive and parallel with the earlier part of the sentence where "my skin" is mentioned. It also clarifies that the speaker is referring to their own spots and wrinkles, maintaining consistency in the personal nature of the description.