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海外展示会で商品の特徴を聞いてみよう

Asking about the features of a product
あなたは展示会で商品の特徴について質問しています。
海外展示会で輸入して自社で販売する商品を探しています。気になった商品があったらその特徴、価格を聞いてみましょう。
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Do you have any questions about our product?
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Do you have any questions about our product?

Yes, what is the different point from other product? I consider if we introduce a talent management system in my company. I don't have a authority to decide, but I have to report my superior. What is the strength point of your system?

自然な表現

Yes, what is its difference from other productsI am considering introducing a talent management system to my company. I don't have the authority to decide, but I have to report to my superior. What is the strong point of your system?

1. "Different" is an adjective, while "difference" is the noun form of it.
You may also say: "How different is this from other products"?
2. Since you used "other", the noun should be in its plural form.
3. Use the continuous form here because you are currently thinking about it.
4 & 6. "To" is the preposition we use to indicate some "direction".
5. Be specific about this, so use the definite article "the".
7. "Strength" is a noun, while "strong" is the adjective form of it.
The main difference between this product and the others is a quality-price balance. In my opinion, this is a very important point.

My company has 50,000 employees. Do you have any volume discount about the license? I'd like to know total cost and the minimum price to contract.

自然な表現

My company has 50,000 employees. Do you have any volume discount about the license? I'd like to know the total cost and the minimum price for the contract.

1. This is also a specific item as you are referring to the cost "of the products" already mentioned earlier, so use the definite article "the".
2. "Contract" is usually used as a noun. If you want to use it as a verb, it's best to use it in its infinitive form.
You may say: "I'd like to know the total cost and the minimum price, so your company can be contracted to supply those products."
We offer a 15% discount if you buy more than 20,000 units. You also only need to buy 1 license for the whole company. Is this OK?

I thought we need 1 license for one person. But it's not correct? we buy only 1 license and all employees can use it?

自然な表現

I thought we need one license for one person, but it's not correct, is it? May we buy only one license and all employees can use it?

1 & 5. Spell out numbers from 0-9 except when referring to time and age.
2. Avoid starting your sentence with a conjunction. Besides, you may connect such to the previous statement.
3. You may add this tag question to the statement to make the question smoother.
4. Capitalize the first letter of the first word at the beginning of the sentence.
*To ask a question, you may use modal verbs like "may" for permission.
If you buy a company license then that can be used for all employees in your company. Does that make it clearer?

OK, thank you for clearing. How much the fee in a year in short?

自然な表現

OK, thank you for clearing that up. How much is the fee in a year in short?

1. Review the phrasal verb "clear something up".
2. Do not forget your helping verb. This question of yours didn't have a verb.
The price is five hundreds dollars. I think this is a really good price considering the quality of the product.

Well, our budget is four hundreds dollars. Your price is not affordable for us. Could I negotiate the price?

自然な表現

Well, our budget is $400. Your price is not affordable for us. Could I negotiate the price?

1. We only spell out numbers from 0-9 except when referring to time and age. Since this is a big number, write it in numbers.
*Do not forget the correct symbol for the currency.
  • remarkable(注目に値する、優れた)
  • material(材料)
  • salespeople(販売員)
  • manufacture(製造する)
  • manufacturer(製造業者、メーカー)
  • Could you tell me the difference between A and B?(AとBの違いを教えてもらえますか?)
  • I'd like to know more about what you mentioned earlier.(先ほどのお話をもう少し詳しくお聞きしたいと思います。)
  • What is the material?(材料は何ですか?)
  • His recent behavior might be a problem associated with issues at home.(最近の彼の行動は、家庭内の問題に関連したものかもしれません。)
  • Do you have this in another color?(これの色違いはありますか?)

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