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海外旅行でどんな国に行きたいか話してみよう

Talking about which country you'd like to visit
あなたはどんな国へ旅行したいか話しています。
海外旅行に行く目的は人それぞれです。どんな国に行きたいか、何故行きたいかを伝えてみましょう。
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What country would you like to visit?

There are a lot of countries I want to visit, but I hope to travel to Myanmar and Vietnam most. My husband and I were supposed to visit them during the Golden Week holiday last year, but we had to give up our plan due to the coronavirus outbreak. I think I will be able to go to Vietnam once the virus is contained, but I'm not sure about Myanmar. I cannot help praying for the safery of people there.

自然な表現

There are a lot of countries I want to visit, but I hope to travel to Myanmar and Vietnam most. My husband and I were supposed to visit them during the Golden Week holiday last year, but we had to give up our plan due to the coronavirus outbreak. I think I will be able to go to Vietnam once the virus is contained, but I'm not sure about Myanmar. I cannot help praying for the safety of the people there.

1. Consider correcting the word spelling.
2. Use the article "the" when referring to something specific or familiar.
The pandemic has robbed us of our day-to-day activities and I hope everything is going to be okay soon. Why do you like to visit these two countries?

Well, Myanmar was my husband's choice because he wanted to visit World Heritage sites there. Actually, he likes historic places. I was also interested in the country as I hadn't been there before. Regrettably, I won't be able to visit the country in the foreseeable future because of coup. On the other hand, I chose Vietnam because I am a big fan of Vietnamese cuisine. We planned to stay in Danang, which is a popular beach resort. We will definitely visit there once the virus is eradicated.

自然な表現

Well, Myanmar was my husband's choice because he wanted to visit World Heritage sites there. Actually, he likes historic places. I was also interested in the country as I hadn't been there before. Regrettably, I won't be able to visit the country in the foreseeable future because of the coup. On the other hand, I chose Vietnam because I am a big fan of Vietnamese cuisine. We planned to stay in Danang, which is a popular beach resort. We will definitely visit there once the virus is eradicated.

1. Use the article "the" when referring to something specific or familiar.
I also love seeing historic places. Have you ever been to Vietnam before? By the way, your sentence construction is good, keep it up!

Oh, I'm glad to hear that! Thank you for the encouragement. Well, I've never been to Vietnam, but I know Vietnamese cuisine very well. I have a favorite Vietnamese restaurant, which is near my previous workplace. I used to have lunch there at least once a week and also had dinner from time to time. I quit my job more than five years ago, but I still go there whenever I miss their food. I think that Vietnamese dishes are not only tasty but also healthy because they contain a lot of vegetables. Don't you think so?

自然な表現

Oh, I'm glad to hear that! Thank you for the encouragement. Well, I've never been to Vietnam, but I know Vietnamese cuisine very well. My favorite Vietnamese restaurant is near my previous workplace. I used to have lunch there at least once a week and also had dinner from time to time. I quit my job more than five years ago, but I still go there whenever I miss their food. I think that Vietnamese dishes are not only tasty but also healthy because they contain a lot of vegetables. Don't you think so?

1. Great job! Here's an alternative expression you can use in this context.
Yes, I really support you. Doctors also encourage us to eat Vietnamese dishes. What are your plans for this Golden week?

My Golden Week holiday this year started last Friday and lasts till the day after tomorrow. I have no plan to go out throughout the holiday because of the pandemic, and actually I have done nothing special so far. As advised by the government, I've been trying to stay at home to prevent the spread of the virus.

自然な表現

My Golden Week holiday this year started last Friday and lasts till the day after tomorrow. I have no plan to go out throughout the holiday because of the pandemic, and actually, I have done nothing special so far. As advised by the government, I've been trying to stay at home to prevent the spread of the virus.

1. Introductory words, phrases, or clauses are always followed by a comma.
Oh, that's so great! At least you are really trying to prevent the spread of the virus. What will you be doing indoors?

I'm learning English at home. I try to take at least one speaking lesson on line each day. I really want to take more lessons, but that's difficult because I need to write multiple scripts to do that. Unfortunately, I have other things to do. Aside from speaking lessons, I try to read news articles in English so that I can enhance my vocabulary. I hope my efforts will pay off sometime.

自然な表現

I'm learning English at home. I try to take at least one speaking lesson online each day. I really want to take more lessons, but that's difficult because I need to write multiple scripts to do that. Unfortunately, I have other things to do. Aside from speaking lessons, I try to read news articles in English so that I can enhance my vocabulary. I hope my efforts will pay off sometime.

1. Consider removing the space between the two words.
  • local people(地元の人々)
  • overseas(海外,海外で)
  • by plane(飛行機で)
  • an outlook(視野)
  • a solitary journey(一人旅)
  • What is the most famous landmark?(一番有名な観光名所は何ですか?)
  • cultural difference(文化の違い)
  • I'd like to travel by ship.(船で旅をしたい。)
  • Why are you interested in psychology?(なぜ心理学に興味を持ったのですか?)
  • For the first time in my life, I finally felt free.(私は生まれて初めて、自由になれたと感じました。)

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