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あなたが考えるWeb業界でのキーパーソンについて説明してみよう

Talking about the key person in the web industry
あなたは今のWEB業界において誰がキーパーソンか同僚に伝えるところです。
Web業界であなたが注目する人物について話してみましょう。
Who do you think is the key person in the web industry today?
 
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Who do you think is the key person in the web industry today?

Although it is not an individual, I think that the key person in the web industry is GAFA. It is an acronym which stands for Google, Apple, Facebook, and Amazon. They are the world biggest platformers which have a superpower in the web industry. Many people are using their products and services on a daily basis nowadays all over the world.

自然な表現

Although it is not an individual, I think that the key person in the web industry is GAFA; it is an acronym which stands for Google, Apple, Facebook, and Amazon. These are the world biggest platformers which have a superpower in the web industry. Many people are using their products and services on a daily basis nowadays all over the world.

1. Use a semicolon (;) to link two independent clauses that are closely related.
2. Use 'these' here (plural of 'this') referring to specific things or people just mentioned.
I agree. Those companies have made and are still making a big impact on people's lives. How are those 4 companies doing in your country?

Those four companies have been quite successful in Japan as well. I also use the services provided by all of them regularly. Although I am not very familiar with the web industry, the CEOs or founders of GAFA are the most famous and influential persons when it comes to the web industry. Even I know the name of the CEO of Apple who is Tim Cook. Probably, they are the most famous business person in the world now.

自然な表現

Those four companies have been quite successful in Japan as well. I also use the services provided by all of them regularly. Although I am not very familiar with the web industry, the CEOs or founders of GAFA are the most famous and influential people when it comes to the web industry. Even I know the name of the CEO of Apple who is Tim Cook. Probably, they are the most famous business people in the world now.

1. You can also use 'people' as a plural of 'perosn'.
2. Since you said 'they are...' you need plural here (persons or people).
Yes, he is quite popular. What's your personal opinion of Apple and Tim Cook? A big portion of the general public thinks he and his company are innovators in their field. Would you agree?

Yes, I agree with you. Apple is an innovator in their field for more than 10 years. I most frequently use Google and Apple among GAFA. This is because I use an iphone every day which is produced by Apple and I use Gmail on a daily basis. I sometimes use Facebook to talk with my friend once or twice a week. Also, I use Amazon to buy some commodity goods once or twice a month.

自然な表現

Yes, I agree with you. Apple is an innovator in its field for more than 10 years. I most frequently use Google and Apple among GAFA. This is because I use an iPhone every day which is produced by Apple and I use Gmail on a daily basis. I sometimes use Facebook to talk with my friend once or twice a week. Also, I use Amazon to buy some commodity goods once or twice a month.

1. 'Apple' is 3rd person singular so you need 'its' instead of 'their' here.
2. Correct spelling.

関連単語

  • influence（影響を与える）
  • large company（大企業）
  • venture company（ベンチャー企業）
  • key person（キーパーソン）
  • web industry（web業界）

関連フレーズ

  • He is growing up very quickly and will become the key person.（彼はとても早いスピードで成長しているので今後キーパーソンになると考えています。）
  • I think ~ is the key person of the web industry because…（…という理由で~がweb業界のキーパーソンだと考えています。）
  • He continues to make popular products.（彼は人気のあるプロダクトを作り続けている。）
  • He invested in many venture companies in the web industry, and services he invested in are attractive.（彼はweb業界の多くのベンチャーに投資をしているので、彼が投資したサービスには注目が集まります。）
  • He has so many friends on Facebook and his posts are very influential.（彼はfacebookの友達がとても多く、彼の投稿は非常に影響力がある。）

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