レッスン詳細

自動運転車について話してみよう

Talking about autonomous cars
あなたは友達に、自動運転車について話しています。
自動運転車をみかける機会が多くなってきました。知っていることについて話し合いましょう。
You are talking about autonomous cars.
 
このレッスンを始める
Writingレッスンの例
Best Teacherで実際に行われている直近のWritingレッスンです。
作成したスクリプトは講師により添削されます。
You are talking about autonomous cars.

I drove Morioka to Akita, two and half hours during the Obon holiday, and Morioka to Jodogahama, two hours driving. I took a break every hour but was exhausted. I hope autonomous cars will be more developed and popular.

自然な表現

I drove from Morioka to Akita, two and half hours during the Obon holiday, and from Morioka to Jodogahama, two hours driving. I took a break every hour but was exhausted. I hope autonomous cars will be more developed and popular.

1. and 2. The preposition was missing here before the phrase. That's why we added "from."
Long-distance driving is really tiring. Who did you go there with? Did you visit your hometown during Obon holiday?

Yes, I did. I visited my hometown Morioka, northern part of Japan. My husband, 13-year-old son, ten-year-old daughter, and seven-year-old son went to my mother's home with me. I came back to my mother's home after I dropped my family, I felt my right leg pain because of driving.

自然な表現

Yes, I did. I visited my hometown, Morioka, in the northern part of Japan. My husband, 13-year-old son, ten-year-old daughter, and seven-year-old son went to my mother's home with me. I came back to my mother's home after I dropped my family, and I felt my right leg pain because of driving.

1. The sentence can work without the additional information "Morioka." That's why commas are needed before and after the phrase.
2. The phrase was incomplete, so we added this phrase.
3. The conjunction is needed after a comma to join two independent clauses.
I believe that was a hectic drive. That would have been solved by driving an autonomous vehicle. Which other advantages does it possess?

I believe we can enjoy transportation with car drivers more. When I drove the car, my daughter told me about something she found but I couldn't see it because I needed to concentrate on driving. I hope autonomous vehicles will be more popular and cheaper than previous ones.

自然な表現

I believe we can enjoy transportation with car drivers more. When I drove the car, my daughter told me about something she found, but I couldn't see it because I needed to concentrate on driving. I hope autonomous vehicles will be more popular and cheaper than previous ones.

1. A comma is needed before the conjunction to connect two independent clauses.

関連単語

  • technology（技術）
  • accident（事故）
  • traffic（交通）
  • disadvantages（不利(益)、損失、不便）
  • obstacle（障害）

関連フレーズ

  • There are both pros and cons regarding this topic.（このトピックについては、賛否両論あります。）
  • What is your opinion?（あなたの意見を聞かせてください。）
  • In order to make progress, one has to do careful research.（進歩するためには、慎重に調査をしなければなりません。）
  • She was deeply affected by what had happened.（彼女は何が起こったのかを深く考えていました。）
  • I prefer driving alone.（一人で運転する方が好きです。）

こんな方にオススメ

  • 日常
  • 上級
  • その他
  • 議論する