自動運転車について話してみよう

Talking about autonomous cars
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自動運転車をみかける機会が多くなってきました。知っていることについて話し合いましょう。
You are talking about autonomous cars.
 
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You are talking about autonomous cars.

My car has an autonomous system. I sometime use it during a long road trip in the U.S. If we drive long distance, driving in autonomous mode is a good option. When My husband and I traveled to New Mexico from Arizona, we used it. We found it wasn't harder than we expected although it took seven hours. Additionally, almost all roads in the U.S. are straight and wide. It's just right for U.S.' road.

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My car has an autonomous system. I sometimes use it during a long road trip in the U.S. If we drive a long distance, driving in autonomous mode is a good option. When my husband and I traveled to New Mexico from Arizona, we used it. We found it wasn't harder than we expected, although it took seven hours. Additionally, almost all roads in the U.S. are straight and wide. It's just right for U.S. roads.

1. This is the correct adverb of frequency.
2. "Distance" is countable, so use "a" to quantify it.
3. This was not used to begin the sentence, so don't capitalize the first letter.
4. Use a comma to separate clauses.
5. Country names work as adjectives. There's no need to make them possessive nouns.
I am pleased to hear that you enjoy driving your autonomous car. What were your initial fears about driving such a car?

I didn't believe that system for the first time but it's smarter than I thought. I also use the autonomous taxi called Waymo in Arizona. It's operated by Google and it drives without a driver. I was very surprised that for the first time. Waymo has many cameras and radars to identify people, other cars, and obstacles. I even think that it drives safer than human. Although Waymo runs local roads now, driving freeway trial has started.

自然な表現

I didn't believe that system for the first time, but it's smarter than I thought. I also use the autonomous taxi called Waymo in Arizona. It's operated by Google, and it drives without a driver. I was very surprised experiencing that for the first time. Waymo has many cameras and radars to identify people, other cars, and obstacles. I even think that it drives more safely than humans. Although Waymo runs on local roads now, the driving on the freeway trial has started.

1, 2. Use a comma to separate clauses.
3. Say either this or "I was surprised about that when I took it the first time."
4. Use an adverb to describe the verb.
5. You're referring to more than one human, so use the plural form.
6, 8. Use this preposition when referring to roads, streets, and the like.
7. "Trial" is a count noun, so it requires a determiner.
9. "Freeway" is specific, so use "the".
How did you feel the first time you were in such a car? Were you not scared of accidents? Didn't you feel like reaching out for the steering wheel at times?

Yes, I did! I really wanted to grab its steering wheel! It was so strange because drivers' seat was empty but its steering wheel was moving itself. I was so scared, so I screamed every time it turned intersections. But now it's cozy for me because I found it to be safety and we don't need any tip. I sometimes see articles about accidents by Waymo though, the serious accident rate for Waymo is low.

自然な表現

Yes, I did! I really wanted to grab its steering wheel! It was so strange because the driver's seat was empty, but the steering wheel was moving itself. I was so scared, so I screamed every time it turned at intersections, but now it's cozy for me because I found it to be safe, and we don't need any tips. I sometimes see articles about accidents by Waymo, though the serious accident rate for Waymo is low.

1. The seat you're referring to is specific, so use "the".
2. There's only one driver at a time, so use the singular form.
3. Use a comma to separate clauses.
4. You're referring to something specific here, so use "the".
5. Use this to indicate where the turns were made.
6. The conjunctions "and," "but," and "so" are typically not used to begin a sentence, so connect them to the previous sentence with a comma, omit them, or replace them.
7. Use an adjective to describe the noun.
8. When speaking in the general sense, use the plural form.
9. In most cases, the comma comes before, not after the conjunction.
  • technology(技術)
  • accident(事故)
  • traffic(交通)
  • disadvantages(不利(益)、損失、不便)
  • obstacle(障害)
  • There are both pros and cons regarding this topic.(このトピックについては、賛否両論あります。)
  • What is your opinion?(あなたの意見を聞かせてください。)
  • In order to make progress, one has to do careful research.(進歩するためには、慎重に調査をしなければなりません。)
  • She was deeply affected by what had happened.(彼女は何が起こったのかを深く考えていました。)
  • I prefer driving alone.(一人で運転する方が好きです。)

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