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Recently I like reading 'Reading explorer' issued by National Geographic.It's very interesting and I think it's effective for me to improve my English level.
Recently, I like reading 'Reading Explorer' published by National Geographic. It's very interesting, and I think it's effective for improving my English level.
Before you asked , I don't know there is a level of the book. As I confirmed it , the book that I have been reading is B1 to B2 of CFER correlation.I have been reading 'Reading Explorer 2'. I have already finished reading 'Reading Explorer 1'.
Before you asked, I didn't know there were levels of the book. After checking, I found that the book that I have been reading corresponds to B1 to B2 of the CEFR . I have been reading 'Reading Explorer 2'. I have already finished reading 'Reading Explorer 1'.
2. "Didn't" (simple past tense) is the correct verb form to refer to a past event.
3. "Were" is correct here to keep the past tense consistent. It is in the plural form to match "levels."
4. "Levels" is correct in the plural form to refer to multiple levels.
5. The phrase was revised to improve clarity and flow.
6. "Corresponds to" was introduced to better express the relationship.
7. The definite article "the" is required here to refer to the specific framework.
8. The spelling was corrected ("CEFR" - Common European Framework of Reference for Languages).
9. "Correlation" was removed to avoid redundancy.
10. A required space was added.
I like a plastic pollution problem.After reading the book , I listen some news about it because I'm interested in. It's very shock to me.
I like the topic of plastic pollution . After reading the book, I listened to some news about it because I'm interested in the subject. It's very shocking to me.
2. The indefinite article "a" is not required when referring to "plastic pollution" as a concept (used as an uncountable noun).
3. "Problem" was removed to avoid redundancy.
4. A required space was added.
5. "listened" (past simple tense) is correct here to refer to the event from the past.
6. The preposition "to" is required here to indicate the object of listening.
7. "The subject" was introduced to complete the thought and improve the sentence structure.
8. "Shocking" is the correct adjectival form in this case.
After reading , I listen the relative news much more , such as biodegradable plastic , the activity of cleaning the plastic wastes on the see . And I use a reusable shopping bag as possible as I can.I write down the key words , biodegradable plastic , using reusable bag or bottle. Yes, I do. I talked to my wife about this topic , but I guess she didn't feel the reality of the pollution.
After reading, I listen to related news much more often, such as about biodegradable plastic, and the activities of cleaning plastic waste from the sea. In addition, I use a reusable shopping bag whenever possible. I write down the keywords: biodegradable plastic, using reusable bags or bottles. Yes, I do. I talked to my wife about this topic , but I guess she didn't fully grasp the reality of the pollution.
2. The definite article "the" is not required when referring to unspecified "related news".
3. "Related" is the correct adjectival form in this case.
4. "Often" was added to better express frequency.
5. The preposition "about" was added to improve the flow and indicate the topic of "related news".
6. A conjunction "and" was added to connect two items on a list properly.
7. "Activities" is correct in the plural form to refer to multiple activities regarding cleaning plastic waste.
8. "Plastic waste" is correct as an uncountable noun in this context.
9. The preposition "from" is correct here to indicate origin.
10. The spelling was corrected.
11. Starting sentences with a conjunction (but, and, so) is not recommended. Instead, use an appropriate transitional/introductory phrase.
12. The phrase was introduced to improve conciseness and sound more natural.
13. The spelling was corrected.
14. A colon was introduced to introduce the list that follows properly.
15. and 16. Plural forms are appropriate when referring to things in general.
17. The phrase was introduced to make the sentence sound more common and idiomatic.
Usually she doesn't react anything.So I give her additional informations.For example , according to the news , the advanced countries send their plastic garbage to Indonesia illegally. It makes Indonesia difficult to deal with it. Tofu is very popular diets in Indonesia , and many Tofu factories use the plastic garbage as the fuel for burning . During burning the plastic garbage , the tiny plastics are scattered to the air and contaminate into the Tofu.It's very dangerous for Indonesian eating Tofu.But Tofu is tasty and cheap diet , so many Indonesian eat it everyday.
Usually, she doesn't react at all. Therefore, I give her additional information. For example, according to the news, developed countries send their plastic waste to Indonesia illegally. This makes it difficult for Indonesia to deal with the problem. Tofu is a very popular food in Indonesia, and many Tofu factories use plastic waste as fuel for burning. When burning plastic waste, tiny plastic particles are scattered into the air and contaminate the Tofu. This is very dangerous for Indonesians who consume Tofu. However, Tofu is a tasty and cheap food, so many Indonesians eat it every day.
2. "At all" is a more natural expression in this case.
3. Starting sentences with a conjunction (but, and, so) is not recommended. Instead, use an appropriate transitional/introductory phrase.
4. "Information" is the correct word form in this case (uncountable noun).
5. "Developed" is a more commonly used term when describing countries.
6., 11., and 15. "Waste" is a more appropriate and technical term in this case.
7. The relative pronoun "this" was introduced to maintain a closer connection to the previous statement.
8. The sentence was restructured to follow a more natural word order and improve clarity.
9. The indefinite article "a" is correct before singular, unspecified countable nouns/noun phrases.
10. "Food" is a more appropriate term when referring to "tofu".
12. The definite article "the" is not required before "fuel" when it is mentioned in a general sense.
13. The subordinating conjunction "when" is more suitable here to introduce the time clause.
14. The definite article "the" is not required when referring to "plastic waste" in general terms.
16. The phrase was revised to improve clarity and sound more natural.
17. The prepositoin "into" is more appropriate when describing particles dispersing in the air.
18. The preposition "into" is not suitable in this case.
19. The relative pronoun "this" was introduced to maintain a closer connection to the previous statement.
20. and 25. "Indonesians" is the correct term to refer to the people of Indonesia.
21. The phrase was introduced to improve clarity.
22. Starting sentences with a conjunction (but, and, so) is not recommended. Instead, use an appropriate transitional/introductory phrase.
23. The indefinite article "a" is correct before singular, unspecified countable nouns/noun phrases.
24. "Food" is a more appropriate term when referring to "tofu."
26. "Every day" is correct here to act as an adverb of frequency ("everyday" is an adjective).
関連単語
- an author（著者）
- fiction（フィクション，作り話）
- literature（文学）
- quote（人の言葉や文章を引用する）
- best seller（ベストセラー）
関連フレーズ
- I always use this app to translate Japanese to English.（日本語から英語への翻訳にはいつもこのアプリを使っています。）
- On the other hand, not everyone agreed.（一方で、すべての人が賛成したわけではありません。）
- From the author's perspective, the events were an omen of things to come.（筆者の視点では、この出来事は前兆であった。）
- In conclusion, climate change poses a real threat to humanity.（結論として、気候変動は人類にとって真の脅威となります。）
- In my opinion, Cicero was〜.（）
こんな方にオススメ
2. The book title was adequately capitalized.
3. "Published" is a more commonly used term when referring to books.
4. A required space was added.
5. A comma was added to separate two independent clauses and improve the flow.
6. "Improving" was introduced to improve conciseness.
7. Alternative expression: "proficiency".