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I would like to point out that Amazon Go stores trials of its new technology. You are tired of walking with your pockets full of change, or always forgetting your purse? No problem, just pay with your palm. That could be a payment method at Amazon Go.
I would like to point out that Amazon Go stores are having trials of its new technology. Are you tired of walking with your pockets full of change, or always forgetting your purse? No problem, just pay with your palm. That could be a payment method at Amazon Go.
It is a new technology in Seattle, Washington, USA. According to Amazon‘s website, it's a free and contactless service that let you use your palm to pay or identify yourself. Your details are used to create a unique palm signature.
It is a new technology in Seattle, Washington, USA. According to Amazon‘s website, it's a free and contactless service that lets you use your palm to pay or identify yourself. Your details are used to create a unique palm signature.
I consider the service to use customers' palm signature, they can compensate for goods with their palm by holding it over the payment device. This technology will grant customers using their palms as an ID to enter Amazon Go stores. Amazon says the signature information will be the way it treats any other personal information. I'm afraid if the information discloses, there is trouble.
I am curious about the palm signature, because they can compensate for goods with their palm by holding it over the payment device. This technology will let customers enter Amazon Go stores just by using their palms as an ID. Amazon says they will treat signature information the way it treats any other personal information. I'm afraid if the information is leaked, there will be trouble.
2. No need for "service to use" here.
3. You need a conjunction to connect this clause to the previous clause, so I put the conjunction "because".
4. This is a more natural way to phrase this.
5. This clause needs a subject and a verb, so I added "they will treat..."
6. When some private information is released to the public, we say that it is "leaked".
7. This is something that has not happened yet, so use the future tense "will be".
関連単語
- discover(見つける)
- interesting(面白い、興味深い)
- lately(最近)
- trend(流行、傾向)
- accidentally(偶然に)
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- The latest trend for web services is...(最近の流行のウェブサービスは...)
- What factors do you look for in a new web service?(新しいウェブサービスのどういった要素を見ますか。)
- There is a new mobile game that was released last week that is very fun.(先週リリースされた新しいゲームのアプリはとても面白いです。)
- How do you find new web services?(新しいウェブサービスはどこで見つけますか。)
- I like the new news application because it gives me the latest updates on my favorite topics.(自分の好きなトピックに関しての最新の情報を届けてくれるので、この新しいニュースアプリ好きです。)
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2. This is the more natural word order when asking a question.