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自宅付近に最近、不審者を見かけることを伝えよう

Reporting to the police that there is a suspicious person in your neighborhood.
最近、近所で怪しい人物を見かけます。警察に通報してみましょう。
海外に行くと、日本より治安の悪い地域がたくさんあります。もしものときでも落ち着いて対応できるように、事前にシミュレーションをしておきましょう。
How may I help you today?
 
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How may I help you today?

I feel that the suspicious person is following me to my house after work. His height is about 1.9 m tall and he was wearing leather jacket, pants, boots, and sunglasses. In addition, he has shotgun. I think he is a terminator and his mission is to terminate me.

自然な表現

I feel that the suspicious person follows me to my home after work. He is about 1.9-m-tall, and he was wearing a leather jacket, pants, boots, and sunglasses. In addition, he has a shotgun. I think that he is a terminator and his mission is to terminate me.

1. Use a different word choice. Use "home", instead, since this is where you live, while one can own a house without ever leaving there.
2. Use a different word choice. Either refer to him being this tall or to his height being that much. Note that height and tallness are synonymous, so it is redundant to use them both.
3. and 4. Make sure to use hyphens for compound words.
5. Use a comma in front of a conjunction to separate two independent clauses from one another.
6. Use "a" to indicate that you are referring to merely one such jacket among many others.
7. Use "a" to indicate that you are referring to merely one jacket among many others.
8. Use "that" to introduce an explanation in regard to what you think.
I am sorry about the insecurity that you feel. For how long have you been seeing the person in your neighbourhood? What time of the day or night do you usually see him?

He wanders in front of my house around the clock. Lately, I have been hearing motorcycles' noisy noise outside my house. Last night, I had a dream that human beings are attacked by AI robots. Then, I'm the person who can command humanity and beat robots.

自然な表現

He wanders in front of my house around the clock. Lately, I have been hearing motorcycles' loud noises outside my house. Last night, I had a dream that human beings are attacked by AI robots. Then, I'm the person who can command humanity and beat robots.

1. Use a different word choice. This would be a more usual term in this sense.
2. Use the plural to indicate that there are multiple noises involved.
I see. Our patrol unit will visit your neighbourhood and watch out for him, and he will be questioned once caught. Do you have any other reports to make?

Thank you officer! However, I have one more concern. Terminator can change his appearance to anything and anybody. Could you prove me that you're not a terminator. I'm sorry that I'm a cautious person, so I can't help confirming it.

自然な表現

Thank you, officer! However, I have one more concern. Terminator can change his appearance to anything and anybody. Could you please prove to me that you're not a terminator? I'm sorry for being such a cautious person, so I can't help making sure of it.

1. Use a comma to separate the greeting from the name or the title of a person you are addressing.
2. Use "please" to phrase your request in an even politer manner.
3. Use "to" when referring to a direction.
4. Make sure to use a question mark at the end of an interrogative sentence.
5. and 6. Use a different word choice. This would be a more usual way of saying it.
I understand that you are cautious and worried about your life. Do you have security cameras around your house?

Yes, I do. Let me see, I may have a picture of a suspicious man. Here it is! I've never seen this man before. Do you have any information related to him? I wonder if he was just strolling around my neighborhood.

自然な表現

Yes, I do. Let me see... I may have a picture of a suspicious man. Here it is! I've never seen this man before. Do you have any information related to him? I wonder if he was just strolling around my neighborhood.

1. Make sure to use an ellipsis to indicate that something was omitted from a sentence.
Wow, this security camera is so clear we shall get all that we require. How many people do you stay with?

I stay with 5 people. I have a 6 years old son, so I'm worried about this situation. Many people say that Japan is a safe country, but is this all good? It indicates that they don't take care much of their safety.

自然な表現

I live with five people. I have a six-year-old son, so I'm worried about this situation. Many people say that Japan is a safe country, but is all this good? It indicates that they don't take much care of their safety.

1. Use a different word choice. This would be a more usual term in this sense.
2. and 3. Avoid using numerals for small numbers unless you are referring to typically numerical data.
4. and 6. Make sure to use hyphens for compound words.
5. There is no need for the plural here since, here, the noun "year" is used as a part of a compound adjective to describe another noun.
7. and 8. Use a different word order. This would be a more usual way of saying it.

関連単語

  • prowler（不審者）
  • noise（騒音）
  • wander（ぶらつく）
  • awkward（不器用な）
  • suspect（疑う）

関連フレーズ

  • Lately, I have been hearing awkward noises outside my apartment.（最近アパートの外から奇妙な音が聞こえます。）
  • He was wearing a black cap with a t-shirt and jeans.（彼は、黒い帽子にTシャツとジーンズを着用していました。）
  • I feel that the suspicious person is following me to my house after work.（仕事帰りに、不審者は家まで私の跡をついている気がします。）
  • What does the suspicious person look like?（不審者はどのような容姿ですか。）
  • He wanders in front of the apartment every day.（彼は毎日アパートの前をうろうろしている。）

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