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The discussion whether dogs or cats make better pets has around for a long time. Dog lovers say their pets are loyal and loving. Cat lovers believe their pets are self-reliant and effortless to care for.
Nonetheless, comes to being good for your health, new analysis says dogs may be better from Japan!
The discussion of whether dogs or cats make better pets has been around for a long time. Dog lovers say their pets are loyal and loving. Cat lovers believe their pets are self-reliant and effortless to care for.
Nonetheless, when it comes to being good for your health, new analysis from Japan says dogs may be better!
The study has found that holding a dog may help older adults stay healthier by Japan's National Institute for Environmental Studies
The study followed about 11,000 people aged 65 to older in Tokyo for four years. It found that dog owners were 40% less likely to get dementia than without dogs. Meanwhile, that is another study, following 6,200 people over two years, found dog owners were also 20% less likely to see a decrease in their muscle strength.
A study by Japan's National Institute for Environmental Studies has found that owning a dog may help older adults stay healthier.
The study followed about 11,000 people aged 65 and older in Tokyo for four years. It found that dog owners were 40% less likely to get dementia than those without dogs. Meanwhile, another study following 6,200 people over two years found dog owners were also 20% less likely to see a decrease in their muscle strength.
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3. This word fits the context better.
4. Always end a declarative with a period.
5. "age + and older"
6. Add this word to complete the clause.
7. Remove these words because they are redundant.
8 and 9. Remove the comma since it unnecessarily interrupts sentence flow.
Interestingly, the researchers found no clear health impact for cat owners.
One of the researchers behind both studies believes because dog owners walk with their pets. This action gives the owners a chance to exercise. However, also gives them chances to encount and talk with people as they walk with pet, both of which are important for staying healthy.
If you are thinking about getting a pet, a dog might not just make you happy. It could also help keep you healthy as you get older.
Interestingly, the researchers found no clear health impact for cat owners.
One of the researchers behind both studies believes this is because dog owners walk their pets. This action gives the owners a chance to exercise and talk with people as they walk with pets, both of which are important for staying healthy.
If you are thinking about getting a pet, a dog might not just make you happy; it could also help keep you healthy as you get older.
2 and 4. Remove these words because they are redundant.
3. Use "and" to join related statements together.
5. Use the plural form when talking about nouns in general.
6. Use a semicolon to link two independent clauses that are closely related.
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- monarchy（君主政治）
- feel closer to~（〜をより身近に感じる）
- heartens（励ます）
- makes progress（前進する）
- a day of remembrance（追悼の日）
- elementary students（小学生）
- sumptuous meals（豪華な食事）
- Province government（省政府）
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- They should have used the money for something practical instead of just wasting it.（そのお金を無駄にするのではなく、何か実用的なことに使うべきだった。）
- This kind of thing happens all over the world.（こんなことが世界中で起こっています。）
- Do you follow the Olympics very closely?（オリンピックをよく見ていますか？）
- Unfortunately I did not watch any of it because I was very busy.（残念ながら、私はとても忙しかったので、全く見ていません。）
- I was very impressed by their wealth of knowledge.（彼らの豊富な知識に感銘を受けました。）
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2. "has + pp"
3. Add these words to complete the clause.
4. Put these words here for fluency.