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About a year has passed since the Noto Peninsula earthquake that occurred on January 1, 2024, but the recovery of the affected areas is still lagging behind.

The main factors behind this are as follows:

1. Geographical factors and vulnerability of infrastructure
The Noto Peninsula has limited access to transportation, and the destruction of major roads has made it extremely difficult to transport supplies and provide support.

2. Labor shortages due to population decline and aging
The region's population is declining and aging, and there is a serious shortage of young people to take on the role.

自然な表現

About a year has passed since the Noto Peninsula earthquake that occurred on January 1, 2024, but the recovery of the affected areas is still lagging behind schedule.

The main factors behind this are as follows:

1. Geographical factors and vulnerability of infrastructure
The Noto Peninsula has limited access to transportation, and the destruction of major roads has made it extremely difficult to transport supplies and provide support.

2. Labor shortages due to population decline and aging
The region's population is declining and aging, and there is a serious shortage of young people to take on reconstruction tasks.

1. This is a better way to say this because a noun is needed after a preposition
2. This is a more usual and natural word to use in this case.
That sounds like a really difficult situation. The combination of damaged infrastructure and labor shortages must make recovery even more challenging. Has the government or any organizations implemented specific measures to speed up the reconstruction process?

Normally, in the case of such a large-scale disaster, a national reconstruction budget is prepared and Self-Defense Force rescue units are deployed.

Unfortunately, in the case of the Noto Peninsula earthquake, former Prime Minister Kishida did not prepare a special reconstruction budget right away.

He decided not to send the Self-Defense Forces.

As a result, the river banks remained damaged in the earthquake, and the victims of Noto entered summer and a typhoon arrived.

As a result, they suffered flood damage.
This secondary damage is clearly a government mistake.

自然な表現

Normally, in the case of such a large-scale disaster, a national reconstruction budget is prepared and Self-Defense Force rescue units are deployed.

Unfortunately, in the case of the Noto Peninsula earthquake, former Prime Minister Kishida did not prepare a special reconstruction budget right away.

He decided not to send the Self-Defense Forces.

As a result, the river banks remained damaged in the earthquake, and the victims of Noto entered summer when a typhoon arrived.

As a result, they suffered flood damage.
This secondary damage was clearly due to a government mistake.

1. We need this relative pronoun here referring to 'summer'
2. This is a clearer and more natural way to express this idea
That’s really unfortunate. Delayed government action can have serious consequences, especially in disaster recovery. Has there been any public response or criticism regarding how the government handled the situation? Are there any ongoing efforts now to address the damage and help the affected communities?

Of course, the Japanese government has come under heavy criticism.

Moreover, during the same period, while saying that it could not allocate a budget for the reconstruction of the Noto Peninsula, Fumio Kishida promised several trillion yen in aid to Ukraine.

Elon Musk has exposed the activities of USAID and kickbacks in aid to Ukraine.

It seems that Fumio Kishida has also received huge kickbacks.
For these politicians, it seems that supporting Ukraine and getting huge kickbacks is more important than helping the Japanese people.

自然な表現

Of course, the Japanese government has come in for heavy criticism.

Moreover, during the same period, while saying that it could not allocate a budget for the reconstruction of the Noto Peninsula, Fumio Kishida promised several trillion yen in aid to Ukraine.

Elon Musk has exposed the activities of USAID and kickbacks in aid to Ukraine.

It seems that Fumio Kishida has also received huge kickbacks.
For these politicians, it seems that supporting Ukraine and getting huge kickbacks is more important than helping the Japanese people.

1. This is the correct word to use here because it collocates with the word, criticism
That’s a serious accusation, and I can understand why people would be frustrated if they feel their own country’s needs are being overlooked. Have there been any protests in Japan pushing for more accountability regarding disaster response and budget allocation? Also, how are the local communities coping with the slow recovery process?

The opposition parties have not been very active in this disaster.
Even now, apart from a few opposition parties, there is no protest against the reconstruction of the Noto Peninsula.

Let me explain: even now, more than a year later, there are many areas where the water supply has not been restored.

Local governments do not have the money to spend on reconstruction.

Many elderly people survived the winter earthquake and tsunami and made it to evacuation centers.
However, more than 200 victims have died in evacuation centers.
If you ask me, they were practically murdered by the country.

自然な表現

The opposition parties have not been very active in this disaster.
Even now, apart from a few opposition parties, there is no protest against the lack of progress in the reconstruction of the Noto Peninsula.

Let me explain: even now, more than a year later, there are many areas where the water supply has not been restored.

Local governments do not have the money to spend on reconstruction.

Many elderly people survived the winter earthquake and tsunami and made it to evacuation centers.
However, more than 200 victims have died in evacuation centers.
If you ask me, they were practically murdered by the country.

1. This is a clearer and more natural way to express this idea
That’s heartbreaking to hear. It’s shocking that so many people have died in evacuation centers due to poor conditions and lack of support. How are local residents responding to this situation? Are there any grassroots efforts or volunteer groups stepping in to help where the government has fallen short?

In reality, the Japanese media should be reporting on the condition of the disaster area.

The Japanese mass media say that they cannot allocate a budget to the Noto Peninsula because it is a depopulated area, but they praise the aid to Ukraine.

And they don't report that politicians are receiving kickbacks from the aid money.

Look, whether Japan is a developed country is not determined by skyscrapers, industry, GDP, etc.

A country can be called a truly developed country by how well it can support people in a weaker position.

自然な表現

In reality, the Japanese media should be reporting on the condition of the disaster area.

The Japanese mass media say that they cannot allocate a budget to the Noto Peninsula because it is a depopulated area, but they praise the aid to Ukraine.

In addition, they don't report that politicians are receiving kickbacks from the aid money.

Look, whether Japan is a developed country is not determined by skyscrapers, industry, GDP, etc.

A country can be called a truly developed country by how well it can support people in a weaker position.

1. This expression is clearer and more common because 'and' cannot begin a sentence
  • government(政府、政治)
  • governor(州知事)
  • mayor(市長、町長)
  • resignation(辞任)
  • election(選挙)
  • Who do you think our next mayor will be?(次の州知事は誰になると思いますか。)
  • Do you think he will raise our taxes again?(あなたは彼がまた税金を上げると思いますか。)
  • Are you satisfied with our new governor?(あなたは新しい州知事に満足していますか。)
  • When are we having the next election?(次の選挙はいつですか?)
  • I can't trust the government anymore.(もう政府のことが信頼できません。)

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