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I went to work today. My job is part time clerk, it has turm.
Last week, We finished to one of the task ahead of schedule.
This week try to new task then I communicate with my coworker to work smothly.
It was fan and new experience. Because our office is sirent and working task is differnce each other. I enjoyed talking with my corworker.
Go back to home I was cooking my dinner. I made cucumber salad and Yakisoba nudle. Both of much for beer. It is nice day today.
I went to work today. My job is as a part-time clerk .
Last week, we finished one of the tasks ahead of schedule.
This week, I have been trying a new task so I communicated with my coworker to work smoothly.
It was fun and a new experience. Since our office is silent and we work on different tasks, I enjoyed talking with my coworker.
When I got back home, I cooked dinner. I made cucumber salad and yakisoba noodles. Both go well with beer. It was a nice day .
The new task is organized documents.
It is so much documents. We scan and change date from paper. And, we rename and classification these documents. At first, we need count for paper documents.
It is simple and easy task, but so many paper inside few boxes.
The new task is organizing documents.
There are many documents. We scan and change data from paper. Then, we rename and classify these documents. At first, we need to count paper documents.
It is a simple and easy task, but there are many papers inside a few boxes.
2. Use ''There'' to indicate the existence of something.
3. Use a plural verb for a plural subject.
4. Use ''many'' with countable nouns.
5. Use ''data'' to mean information.
6. Use ''Then'' to indicate what you do next.
7. Use the present tense for habitual actions.
8. Use ''to'' to indicate what has to be done.
9. ''for'' is not necessary.
10 & 14. Use ''a'' the first time you use countable nouns starting with consonant sounds.
11. Use ''there are'' to indicate the existence of something.
13. Use a plural noun in agreement with ''many''.
Yes, it needs concentration. At first, we are count each 100 sheets and make one block in the box. Next one of the paper grope scan and change to pdf document.
After that we are checking and numbering for each document and group.
After that another people is double check and rename.
It is like a list of names. We have to no mistake and clear help for searching.
Yes, it needs concentration. First, we are count each 100 sheets and make one block in the box. Next one group scans the papers and changes them to PDF documents.
After that we check and number each document and in groups.
After that, other workers double-check and rename them.
It is like a list of names. We must no make any mistakes and have to research to avoid making mistakes.
2. Use ''group'' and note its spelling.
3 & 5. Use singular verbs for singular subjects.
4. Use ''the papers'' as the object of ''scans''.
6. Use ''them'' as the object of the verb ''changes''.
7. Capitalize the acronym.
8. Use a plural noun for general references.
9 & 10. Use the present tense for habitual actions.
11. ''for'' is unnecessary.
12. Use ''in groups'' to show how you do it.
13. ''other workers'' is more appropriate in the context of working in the office.
14. Use a hyphen to form a compound adjective.
15. ''them'' is the object of ''rename''.
16 & 17. Rephrase for clarity.
It was several part period. One part about 3-4days. We have to be finished 800 sheets for per person .
It is preparing time now. I couldn't imagine that I would finish within the timeframe.
It is divided into several parts. One part takes about three to four days. We have to finish 800 sheets per person .
It is the time to prepare. I don't think I will finish my tasks within the timeframe.
I don't do dislike things, and try to grateful everything.
For example. I was hard working but I have a job. I'm so tired but I did do my best.. Like kinds.
I always changing point of view for comfortable day lifes.
Furthermore when I was tired , sleep a lot and loud word of praise myself.
I believe if I am healthy every day, when I feel negative. when that time take good eating time and lot of sleeping, we can be positive again.
I don't do things I dislike, and try to grateful for everything.
For example, I work hard as I'm grateful to have a job. I'm so tired but I did my best.
I always change my point of view for a comfortable daily life.
Furthermore, when I am tired, I sleep a lot and praise myself aloud.
I believe if I am healthy every day, even when I feel negative, I can become positive by eating well and getting plenty of sleep.
2. Use ''for'' to refer to the reason you are grateful.
3. Use a comma to introduce examples.
4. ''was'' is not necessary.
5. Rephrase for clarity and grammatical accuracy.
6. ''do'' is not necessary.
7. Remove the extra periods and ''Like kinds'' as it is unclear.
8 & 13. Use the present tense for something you always do.
9. Use ''my'' to indicate belonging yo you.
10. Use ''a'' the first time you use countable nouns starting with consonant sounds.
11. Use ''daily life'' as the object of ''for a comfortable''.
12. Use a comma after an introductory word.
14. Place the comma immediately after the word.
15. Use ''I'' as the subject.
16. ''praise myself aloud'' is to the point.
17. You may also use ''stay''.
18. Use ''eeven'' for emphasis.
19. Rephrase to make the meaning clear.
関連単語
- consciousness（（名）意識（があること）、感情）
- enlightenment（（名）啓発、啓蒙、悟り）
- spiritual（（名）霊的なこと （形）精神的な、霊的な）
- purposeful（（形）目的がある、意図した）
- philosophical（（形）哲学の、理性的な）
- theological（（形）神学の［に関する・的な］、聖書に基づく）
- fulfillment（（名）満足感、充足感）
- significance（（名）意味、重要性）
- existence（（名）存在、生存）
- reality（（名）現実性）
- keep a diary（日記をつける）
関連フレーズ
- I'm happy and rich and have a beautiful family, but I don't feel fulfilled.（私は幸せでお金持ちで、美しい家族がいますが、充実感はありません。）
- I found the answer to this question this morning when I looked into my infant son's eyes.（私は今朝、乳児の息子の目を見て、この質問の答えを見つけました。）
- Don't you sometimes wonder what our purpose here on earth is?（一体私たちの存在目的は何なのかと時々思いませんか。）
- What is life all about in the overall scheme of things?（人生は全般的な物事の構造の中で一体何を意味するのだろう。）
- It is agonizing to even consider the possibility that nothing in this world has any meaning.（この世界の何も意味を持たないという可能性を考えるだけで苦しいものだ。）
- Why was I born at this particular time and at this particular place?（なぜ私はこの時代のこの場所に生まれたのかしら。）
- Does my life make any difference at all in this world?（私の人生はこの世界で何の影響があるっていうの？）
- What is life all about?（人生にはいったいどんな意味があるの。）
- Sometimes I wonder why I bother to get out of bed everyday.（なぜわざわざ毎日ベッドから出なきゃいけないのかと時々疑問に思う。）
- To answer your question, all you have to do is look up at the night sky.（その答えは、夜空を見上げればいいのです。）
- I've been writing a diary in English for ten months now.（私は10ヶ月間英語で日記を書いています。）
こんな方にオススメ
2 11 16 & 29. Use ''a'' the first time you use countable nouns starting with consonant sounds.
3. Use a hyphen to form a compound adjective.
4. Leave out the phrase as its meaning is unclear.
5. Use lowercase as it is not a proper noun.
6. You may also use ''completed''.
7. ''to'' is not necessary.
8. Use a plural noun after ''one of''.
9. Use a comma after an introductory phrase.
10. Use the verb for something ongoing.
12. Add ''so'' to introduce an explanation.
13 23 & 28. Use past tense verbs for past events.
14 15 18 21 & 26. Spelling corrections.
17. Replace with ''Since'' as you're discouraged from starting sentences with ''because''.
19. Use ''we'' as the subject.
20. Rephrase for clearer meaning.
22. Use the phrase for clarity and grammatical accuracy: ''Go back to home'' is ungrammatical.
24. ''my'' is not necessary: you cook yourself dinner.
25. Use lowercase for common nouns.
27. ''go well with'' is appropriate for something that can be eaten with something.
30. ''today'' is redundant.