英語日記を添削してもらおう

Let's write a diary

英文の日記を添削してもらいましょう。

会話の添削だけではなく、英語日記の添削もしてほしい生徒様にぴったりのレッスンです。

Please write a diary that needs to be corrected.

このレッスンを始める

Writingレッスンの例

Best Teacherで実際に行われている直近のWritingレッスンです。
作成したスクリプトは講師により添削されます。

Please write a diary that needs to be corrected.

There is cargo piled high on the bed of a truck.
This truck is iligul dumping company.

自然な表現

There is cargo piled high on the bed of a truck.
This truck belongs to an illegal dumping company.

1. Add this phrase to say that the company owns or operates the truck, but they are not the same thing.
2. Use an indefinite article before a singular countable noun.
3. misspelling corrected

That seems to be an interesting account of your day. Why do you think the truck is from an illegal dumping company?

Garbage dumping sites designated by the government are expensive. As a result, they are illegally dumped and burned in the desert. The situation was featured on a TV program.

自然な表現

Garbage dumping sites designated by the government are expensive. As a result, garbage is illegally dumped and burned in the desert. The situation was featured on a TV program.

1. Rephrase it this way to make the subject clearer. 'They' could refer to garbage dumping sites

That is concerning. Illegal dumping and burning of garbage in the desert poses health hazards. Have there been any efforts to tackle this illegal activity?

Such cars come many times a day.The cause is cheap clothes purchased from foreign countries. Approximately 80% of the items are unusable and end up in the trash.

自然な表現

So many cars come many times a day. The cause is cheap clothes purchased from foreign countries. Approximately 80% of the items are unusable and end up in the trash.

1. Rephrase it this way to express the volume of cars.

That is very alarming. This shows the issue of excessive waste in our society. Why do you think the government is just allowing this to happen?

The Chilean government has been slow to respond.Clothes that cannot be sold or donated are given to a waste disposal company.

自然な表現

The Chilean government has been slow to respond. Clothes that cannot be sold or donated are sent to a waste disposal company.

1. In the case of unusable clothes, it is more likely they are sent for disposal rather than given away as a gift or act of charity.

It is disheartening to know that the government is so slow to act on this. Are there no efforts to recycle the clothes instead of dumping them?

European and American fashion brands have begun initiatives to reduce their impact on the environment.

This is a story from Chile, South America, which has become a dumping ground for the world of clothing.

自然な表現

1. Here is an alternative phrase: 'to minimize their environmental footprint'

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