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英語日記を添削してもらおう

Let's write a diary

英文の日記を添削してもらいましょう。

会話の添削だけではなく、英語日記の添削もしてほしい生徒様にぴったりのレッスンです。

Please write your original diary.

このレッスンを始める

Writingレッスンの例

Best Teacherで実際に行われている直近のWritingレッスンです。
作成したスクリプトは講師により添削されます。

Please write your original diary.

I hung out with my friend Kazumi today.
We caught up on everything that's been happening recently, so we ended up chatting nonstop.

Today was also my husband's and my 16th wedding anniversary. Congratulations to us!
I wish us another wonderful year together.

自然な表現

1. Here is another way to articulate it: ‘We discussed all the recent events, which led to an uninterrupted conversation.'

Chatting nonstop with a close friend always feels refreshing, and combining that with your anniversary makes it even better. Did you and your husband go out for dinner or do something cozy at home?

We went out for dinner the next day. We love Tonkatsu, so we chose it as our anniversary dinner. That restaurant wasn't fancy, but having favorite food together was really nice. Since oysters are in season, we ordered a tonkatsu set with fried oysters set!

Sadly, we couldn't spent the 16th anniversary with our mothers. My husband's mother passed away two weeks ago. Now, they may be in heaven, but I believe they are always in our hearts and watch over us.

自然な表現

We went out for dinner the next day. We love tonkatsu, so we chose it as our anniversary dinner. That restaurant wasn't fancy, but having our favorite food together was really nice. Since oysters are in season, we ordered a tonkatsu set with a fried oyster set!

Sadly, we couldn't spend the 16th anniversary with our mothers. My husband's mother passed away two weeks ago. Now, they may be in heaven, but I believe they are always in our hearts and watch over us.

1. Only the first word of a sentence, proper nouns, names, most titles, events, periods, the pronoun "I," locations, direct addresses, family relationships, months, holidays, days, and trademark names should be capitalized.
2. Add ‘our,’ which is a first-person plural possessive determiner, meaning ‘belonging to us.’
3. Change to ‘a’ or ‘an,’ which are indefinite articles used before singular countable nouns when you mean ‘one of many,’ ‘any,’ or ‘in general. ’
4. Use the present tense to describe actions happening now, or that are generally true.

It sounds like you shared a lovely meal honoring your anniversary and your favorite food, despite the sad circumstances regarding your mother and mother-in-law. How do you and your husband plan to keep the memories and spirits of your mothers close this holiday season?

We don't do anything special, but we often talk about our memories of them.
That's the best way to commemorate them.
Plus, they would want us to stay healthy and close, so we try to take good care of ourselves.
Anyway, there are only three weeks left until the end of the year!
Since I have so many things to do, I feel a little uneasy.

自然な表現

1. Here is another way to articulate it: ‘Additionally, they would desire us to remain healthy and connected, thus we make an effort to take proper care of ourselves.'

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