ケーキをだまって食べてしまったことを謝罪しよう

Apologizing for eating cake
あなたは彼女のケーキをだまって食べてしまったことを謝罪しています。
食べ物の恨みは大きな問題になりがちです。誠心誠意謝りましょう。
Why did you eat my cake?
 
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Why did you eat my cake?

Squeak, squeak, squeak. I'm a friend of Mickey Mouse. What's yours is mine. I ate it to prevent you from gaining fat, but I'm sorry. I'll get you another cake later. You like cakes with heavy cream rather than the chocolate cakes I ate.

自然な表現

Squeak, squeak, squeak. I'm a friend of Mickey Mouse. What's yours is mine. I ate it to prevent you from gaining fat, but I'm sorry. I'll get you another cake later. You like cakes with heavy cream rather than the chocolate cakes I ate.

1. Here is an alternative expression. "consumed".
What a whimsical introduction! It sounds like you're playing a game or telling a story. Speaking of cakes, what's your favorite flavor? Do you have any special recipes or traditions associated with baking or enjoying desserts?

I'm a sloppy woman, but everyone likes my sloppiness. I like all sorts of cake. Cream puffs are challenging to eat with cutlery. Pies mess the table with crumbs. Rapaciously devouring makes any food yummy. I used to bake confectionery. Now, I just make popcorn and pancakes.

自然な表現

I'm a sloppy woman, but everyone likes my sloppiness. I like all sorts of cake. Cream puffs are challenging to eat with cutlery. Pies mess the table with crumbs. Devouring rapaciously makes any food yummy. I used to bake confectionery. Now, I just make popcorn and pancakes.

1. Changed the word order to make the sentence flow idiomatic.
Baked goods are always great, but popcorn and pancakes are also nice. Do you make them every day or only on special occasions?

I make them only sometimes because people around me are going on a diet, though I don't need to lose weight. Now, I am so into making healthy and nutritious soups. I made mushroom soup yesterday. It's easy to cook. First, boil about 150 grams of mushrooms, 100 grams of rice, and vegetable or chicken stock in a pan. After they are slightly cooled, put them into a blender and mix them. Next, put its liquid back into a pan. Add some milk, salt, and black pepper. Mushroom soup with a rich aroma is done.

自然な表現

I make them only sometimes because the people around me are    on a diet, though I don't need to lose weight. Now, I am so into making healthy and nutritious soups. I made mushroom soup yesterday. It's easy to cook. First, boil about 150 grams of mushrooms, 100 grams of rice, and vegetable or chicken stock in a pan. After they are slightly cooled, put them into a blender and mix them. Next, put its liquid back into a pan. Add some milk, salt, and black pepper. The mushroom soup with a rich aroma is done.

1. Use the determiner "the" to refer to something in particular.
2. Eliminate redundancy by removing this part of the sentence.
  • accordance(一致、調和)
  • uncharacteristic(特徴的ではない、特質のない)
  • incomprehensible(理解し難い、不可解な)
  • atypical(型にはまらない、不規則な)
  • reprimand(叱りつける、叱責する)
  • ensure((物などを)確保する)
  • inexcusable((悪事・過ちなどが度を超して)許せない、弁解できない)
  • inexplicable(説明し難い、解釈し難い)
  • Your point is well taken and I sincerely apologize for your inconvenience.(あなたのご指摘はごもっともで、ご不便をおかけしたことを深く謝ります。)
  • I will promise you that this will never happen again.(もうこのようなことが起きないことを約束します。)
  • Please forgive me.(どうかお許しください。)
  • It is hard to understand you being angry over such a thing.(こんなことで怒っていることが理解し難いです。)
  • I understand that this was a difficult issue for you to forgive.(あなたにとって許し難い問題なのは理解しました。)

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