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I'm from Tokyo.I live in Hino city which is Tokyo's countryside.
I'm from Tokyo. I live in Hino City which is Tokyo's countryside.
Ok! Hino city is a cheaper to live than others cities in Tokyo.By the way,You are from South Africa.Your country is famous for rugby.Last World Cup,South Africa is a world champion!!!
Ok! Hino City is cheaper to live in than other cities in Tokyo. You are from South Africa! Your country is famous for rugby. South Africa is the world champion for rugby!
2. Leave out the indefinite article as it may not be for adjectives.
3. Use ''in'' to refer to a place.
4. Use the singular word as plurality is marked by the noun, ''cities'', ''others'' is used as a pronoun, e.g., ''some went home and the others stayed for the concert''.
5. 9. & 10. Use the correct spacing.
6. Leave out ''By the way'' as you have just been given that information.
7. Capitalise as the word starts the sentence.
8. Use an exclamation mark to indicate surprise.
11. Leave out ''Last World Cup'' as it is unnecessary.
12. Use ''for rugby'' and leave the extra exclamation marks.
Actually,I don't watch rugby.Because rugby is not popular in Japan.There are few tv program in Japan.But I watched rugby World Cup in 2019 held in Japan. I was very excited to watch.By the way, I like soccer the best of sports.How about you?
Actually, I don't watch rugby it is not popular in Japan. There are few rugby TV programs in Japan. However, I watched the Rugby World Cup in 2019 held in Japan. I was very excited to watch it. I like soccer the best of all sports. How about you?
2. Remove the full stop and join the sentences for better flow.
3. Use ''it'' to avoid repeating rugby.
5. Use ''rugby'' to indicate the type of programs.
6. The acronym is always capitalised.
7. Use plural nouns for things in general.
9. Use ''However'' as you may not start sentences with ''But''.
10. Use the definite article for something specific.
11. Capitalise as it is a proper noun.
12. Use ''it'' as the object of the verb ''watch.
14. ''By the way'' is not necessary.
15. Use ''all'' to mean everything of something.
In Japan,World cup is the most famous game.Many Japanese people are bandwagon fan of soccer. During the World Cup games,Many of Japanese people cheer National team of Japan.I watch YouTube for highlights of premier league or Uefa champions league.A month ago,I went to stadium to watch Japan national football team.I enjoyed that.
The soccer World Cup was the most famous tournament in Japan. Many Japanese people like soccer. During World Cup games, many Japanese people cheer for the national team of Japan. I watch YouTube for highlights of the Premier League or Uefa Champions League. A month ago, I went to the stadium to watch the Japanese national football team. I enjoyed that.
2. 5. 11. 17. 18. & 21. Use the correct spacing.
3. Use ''like soccer'' as ''are bandwagon of soccer'' is unclear.
4. Leave out the definite article as it is usually not used for things in general.
6. & 10. Use lowercase as the word is not a proper noun.
7. The preposition is not necessary.
8. Use ''for'' to indicate the purpose of something.
9. 12. & 19. Use the definite article for something specific.
13. 14. 15. & 16. Capitalise on the initial letters of proper nouns.
20. Use ''the Japanese'' to refer to something that belongs to Japan.
Japanese national football team is getting stronger day by day. But other countries are getting stronger as well.So more Japanese players challenge in Europe like premier,la liga(Spain)and seria A(Italy).If not so,Japan national football team win stronger team as Europe countries I suppose.
The Japanese national football team is getting stronger day by day. Unfortunately, other countries' teams are getting stronger as well. Therefore, more Japanese players should play in challenging leagues in Europe, such as the Premier League, La Liga (Spain) and Serie A (Italy). If they do not, Japan's national football team won't win against stronger teams such as Europe countries' teams, I suppose.
2. Use ''Unfortunately'' to introduce something negative as you may not start sentences with the conjunction, ''But''.
3. & 16. Use ''countries' teams'' for clarity.
4. Replace as you are discouraged from starting sentences with conjunctions, ''because, but, and, so & also''.
5. Use ''should'' to introduce a suggestion.
6. Rephrase for clearer meaning and capitalise proper nouns.
7. Spell the word correctly and capitalise it as it is a proper noun.
8. 10. Use the correct spacing.
9. Use ''they do not'' to mean if Japanese players do not play in such leagues.
11. Use an apostrophe and ''s'' to indicate belonging to something.
12. Use ''won't'' to refer to future non-occurring events.
13. Use the preposition ''against'' to indicate something that opposes something.
14. Use a plural noun for things in general.
15. Use ''such as'' to introduce examples.
関連単語
- museum（博物館、美術館）
- generation（同世代の人々、世代）
- extended（延長した、延長された）
- attraction（（引きつける）呼び物、アトラクション）
- rendezvous（（名）ランデブー、会う約束、待ち合わせ〔の場所〕 （動）集合する〔させる〕）
- site（場所、会場）
- entertainment（エンターテインメント、楽しみ、演芸、ショー）
- historic（歴史上の）
- oriented（～指向の、～を重視する）
- quaint（〔ユニークで］面白い、風変わりな）
関連フレーズ
- I'm here on business for a few days.（出張で数日間ここにいます。）
- Do you know a restaurant with nice atmosphere that is far from the crowded city?（都会の人ごみの多いところから離れた趣のあるレストランを知っていますか。）
- Will you take me for a drive around the city until my check-in time for the hotel?（ホテルのチェックインまで、ぐるっと街をドライブしてください。）
- I was transferred here from my company in Tokyo and I'm searching for an apartment for my family.（東京にある会社からここに転勤になりました。それで家族のためにマンションを探しているんです。）
- Is it always this cold here this time of year?（ここはいつもこの季節はこんなに寒いのですか。）
- Have you ever been to Japan?（日本に行ったことはありますか。）
- Can you recommend a nice bar where I can settle for a couple of hours?（2,3時間リラックスして過ごせるステキなお薦めのバーを教えてくれませんか？）
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2. Capitalise on the initial letters of proper nouns.