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I am walking in sustainable solution department which offers the service that promotes our clients company sustainability initiatives from banking perspective for example, business matching between the company who need to solve their decarbonization issues and the company who has a technology to resolve the challenges.
this activity it's very unique comparing to other banking institutions.
Especially my responsibility is a head of the energy transition team.
I work in the sustainable solutions department that offers services that promote our clients' companies sustainability initiatives from a banking perspective; for example, business matching between a company who needs to solve their decarbonization issues and a company who has the technology to resolve the challenges. This activity is very unique compared to other banking institutions. In particular, my specific responsibility is as the head of the energy transition team.
what I like about my department is that my colleagues have a challenging spirit and ambitious because my department is relatively new comparing to other departments so there is no routine work and try to find you new business related to E.S.G. On the other hand what I don't like about my department is that the governance is not firm. However,
I can choose other department I will choose the same department sustainable social department where I can do what I want to.
What I like about my department is that my colleagues have a challenging spirit and are ambitious because my department is relatively new compared to other departments so there is no routine work in trying to find your new business related to E.S.Gs. On the other hand, what I don't like about my department is that the governance is not firm. However, if I could choose another department, I would still choose the sustainable solutions department, where I can do what I want to.
2. 'Be' is needed before the adjective.
4. 'In' refers to the connection here.
5. We use the present simple tense for something that is generally true or permanent, habits and facts. We use the present continuous for something that is happening now or around the time of speaking, or that is temporary.
6. Spelling correction.
8, 13, 17. Comma before the next clause.
9. No line break here.
10, 11, 13, 14. A second conditional is needed here to hypothesise.
12. Refers to one.
15. Refers to the same department as the one you're in (based on what you said in #2).
16, 17. This seems to refer to the likely name of this department.
19. You could also omit "to" here.
at first, we need to clarify what each person do because sometimes some people do the same thing it's not effective. And then after clarifying the responsibility of each person we need to create a list that show who is the right person Which would be helpful for other department to look for the right person quickly. Finally the approval process should be streamlined because in the current system we need to circular documents to three supervisors to get approval before making propose hours to our clients. We need to make you new approval procedures.
At first, we need to clarify what each person does because sometimes some people do the same thing, and it's not effective. After clarifying the responsibilities of each person we need to create a list that show who is the right person, which would be helpful for other departments to look for the right person quickly. Finally, the approval process should be streamlined because in the current system we need to circulate documents to three supervisors to get approval before proposing hours to our clients. We need to make new approval procedures.
3. You need a comma and 'and' to join these two clauses together.
4. 'And' is conjunctive, and not recommended to start a new sentence. 'Then' is not needed with 'after'.
7. No capital letter is required here. It is not a proper noun.
10. Verb required.
11, 12. You just need the gerund here to explain this action.
13. Grammatically okay, but you have not referred to time before and I wonder if you mean "ours" here?
14. No pronoun needed here. Refers to you, not the person you're speaking to.
関連単語
- subsidiaries（小会社等（複数形））
- summarize（まとめる）
- Welfare（厚生）
- clinical trial data（臨床試験データ）
- uncommon（珍しい）
- third party（サードパーティ、他社のOSや機器などに対応する製品を作っているメーカーのこと）
- production control department（生産管理部門）
- stock control（在庫管理）
- account executive（（広告業などの）顧客主任、営業）
関連フレーズ
- Which department do you belong to?（どの部署に属していますか？）
- I am with the internal auditing department.（私は内部監査部門に所属しています。）
- It's important to take charge of one's life instead of making excuses.（言い訳するのではなく、自分の人生を自分で切り開いていくことが大切だと思います。）
- A necessary skill when proof reading is an attention to detail.（校正に必要なスキルは、細部へのこだわりです。）
- In her new position, she will be responsible for the entire sales division.（新職では、販売部門全体の責任者となります。）
- This new job will require me to take on more responsibilities.（この新しい仕事では、より多くの責任を負わなければなりません。）
- I need to make sure that all of my tasks are completed before I go on my extended vacation.（長期休暇に入る前に、すべてのタスクが完了していることを確認する必要があります。）
- I'm stuck inside my office all day.（私は一日中オフィスに閉じこもっています。）
- I can't survive without holidays.（休日がないと生きていけません。）
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2, 5, 12, 14, 15, 24. We use ‘the’ when there is only one of something, or we are referring to a particular thing.
3, 8, 9. Refers to more than one.
4. In a defining clause, use ‘that’. In a non-defining clause, use ‘which’.
6, 13, Normally in the present tense we add 's' to the end of third-person verbs (‘he’, ‘she’, ‘it’).
10. An article is needed before a singular countable noun.
11. You can use a semicolon before the conjunctive adverb to join these sentences together.
16, 20. Keep your sentences together in clear paragraphs to improve readability, rather than starting each one on a new line.
17. Capital for a new sentence.
18. No pronoun needed here.
19. We use '-ed' adjectives for our own feelings. We use '-ing' adjectives to refer to a situation or other influence. Example: "The baseball game was interesting," versus, "I was interested in the baseball game."
21. ‘Especially’ is conjunctive, and not usually used to start a new sentence.
22, 23. Refers to a particular element of what you do.