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自分の部署の仕事を説明してみよう

Describing your department
自分の部署の業務内容は勿論のこと、その部署のカラーやどのような人達が働いていて、どのような雰囲気なのかを伝えることが出来ると会話も弾むことでしょう。
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What department do you work in? What do you do there?
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What department do you work in? What do you do there?

I work in sales department. My company is the apparel company. I am working in the store. How about you?

自然な表現

I work in the sales department. My company is an apparel company. I am working in the store. How about you?

1. You were the definite article (the) used to for all specific nouns.
2. This is the appropriate article to use here. Always make use of an for all vowels.
I work in retail. I own a chain of restaurants around the city. What is the apparel business currently like?

Oh, nice work. The business condition is bad because of COVID-19. However We are a popular brand all over the world, so we will do our best without losing.

自然な表現

Oh, nice work. The business condition is bad because of COVID-19. However we are a popular brand all over the world, so we will do our best to avoid losing business.

1.You must not use a capital letter in the middle of. A sentence.
I understand what businesses have gone through. Do you think you are able to sell your products online?

Our products are sold both in store and online. We will continue to manage our stores while paying attention to infection control.

自然な表現

Our products are sold both in-store and online. We will continue to manage our stores while paying attention to infection control.

1.You were missing a hyphen consider adding it .
So, how are your online sales been recently, if you don't mind me asking? Have you thought about any ways to increase them?

Since online stores are originally popular, customers have bought more products online than before. While working in the store, I recommended many customers to buy in the online store.

自然な表現

Since online stores are originally popular, customers have bought more products online than before. While working in the store, I recommended many customers to buy  -online .

1.The words you used here were unnecessary in this sentence.
Okay, that's really great. For how long have you been working at your company? What do you like most about your job?

I have been working at my company for 6 months. What I like most about the company is that depending on the good results, we can immediately take on new challenges.

自然な表現

I have been working at my company for 6 months. What I enjoy most about the company is that depending on the good results, we can immediately take on new challenges.

1.Well done .This is just an alternative you can use in this context .
  • subsidiaries(小会社等(複数形))
  • summarize(まとめる)
  • Welfare(厚生)
  • clinical trial data(臨床試験データ)
  • uncommon(珍しい)
  • third party(サードパーティ、他社のOSや機器などに対応する製品を作っているメーカーのこと)
  • production control department(生産管理部門)
  • stock control(在庫管理)
  • account executive((広告業などの)顧客主任、営業)
  • Which department do you belong to?(どの部署に属していますか?)
  • I am with (the internal auditing) department.(私は(内部監査)部に所属しています。)
  • take charge of~(〜を受け持つ)
  • proof reading(校正)
  • be responsible for~(〜担当している)
  • require me to~(私に~を要求しています。(~することを必要としています))
  • make sure(確認する)
  • I'm stuck inside my office all day.(一日中オフィスに缶詰になる)
  • I can't survive without holidays.(休みがなくては生きていかれない)

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