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会議で発表者に質問してみよう

Asking a presenter for clarification
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Yes. You talked about the forecast of the future energy market. You expected the energy demand will increase rapidly as the world's population goes up and the competition in procurement of energy resources will be harsh. As you know, China invests massive amount of money for the development projects of energy resources in the world to ensure enough supply to meet its large demand. Do you think this competitive situation will lead the world to war again? Do you think we will make the same mistake?

自然な表現

Yes. You talked about the forecast of the future energy market. You expected the energy demand will increase rapidly as the world's population goes up and the competition in procurement of energy resources will be harsh. As you know, China invests massive amount of money for the development projects of energy resources in the world to ensure enough supply to meet its large demand. Do you think this aggressive situation will lead the world to war again? Do you think we will make the same mistake?

1. Another word you can use in this context.
That's definitely true. I truly hope that we can manage to meet the energy demand. This might create a lot of tension in the world, however, I believe that there are ways conflict can be avoided. What do you think?

I understand. For example, renewable energy resource is a key to solve this problem because it is infinite and if we can make use of it more efficiently and cheaply, our lives will be changed dramatically. However, at this moment, renewable energy is not dependable.
Secondly, we should think about how we can establish the system which deters the nations from pursuing only their own interests.

自然な表現

I understand. For example, renewable energy resource is a key to solve this problem because it is infinite and if we can make use of it more efficiently and cheaply, our lives will be changed completely. However, at this moment, renewable energy is not dependable.
Secondly, we should think about how we can establish the system which deters the nations from pursuing only their own interests.

1. Another word you can use in this context.
That's exactly what I had in mind!
However, there are no natural renewable energy sources that would be enough at the moment. How do you think such a system can be established?

I think the United Nations should have a stronger control on the energy field. Limited countries dominate the world's energy resources now. Therefore, I think an international energy pool is one of the solutions. Any country can use it when the lack of energy resources happens. This system should be led by the UN.

自然な表現

In my opinion, the United Nations should have a stronger control on the energy field. Limited countries dominate the world's energy resources now. Therefore, I think an international energy pool is one of the solutions. Any country can use it when the lack of energy resources happens. This system should be led by the UN.

1. Another word you can use in this context.
That is a good idea. However, do you think that developed countries would agree with such a solution? Moreover, how do you think the leading global companies in that field, would accept such an idea?

I think the level of the development is not related to this issue because all of the developed countries don't have rich energy resources, for example Japan and South Korea. I agree that some leading companies will disagree with this idea, but they have no choice but to follow the international rule considering the contribution to the social development is recognized as a role of corporation these days.

自然な表現

I think the level of the development is not related to this issue because all of the developed countries don't have rich energy resources, for example Japan and South Korea. I agree that some leading companies will disagree with this idea, but they have no choice but to follow the international rule considering that the contribution to social development is recognized as a role of corporation these days.

1. Use "that" when introducing a subordinate clause expressing a statement or hypothesis.
2. No need for an article here since you are referring to an uncountable noun.
You are quite right. They will be forced to obey the rules. However, there can come up with a plan that will benefit them and society.

That is the best way. A comany should make an effort to find the way to achieve both social benefit and their profit. Such companies are highly evaluated by stockholders as their stock price is usually high recently.

自然な表現

That is the best way. A company should make an effort to find the way to achieve both social benefit and their profit. Such companies are highly evaluated by stockholders as their stock price is usually high lately.

1. Spelling correction.
2. Another word you can use here.
  • meet a successful end(成功する終わり方に見合う)
  • perspective(考え方、将来の見通し)
  • go over(調べる)
  • viral market campaign(顧客や有名人等に自社製品を紹介して宣伝してもらうマーケティングのキャンペーン)
  • hit off (折り合いが好い )
  • unresolved(未解決の)
  • clues(手がかり)
  • unique competitive advantage(独自の競争的な利点)
  • the most engaging(もっとも魅力的であるもの)
  • As I mentioned earlier(先ほども言いましたが)
  • I believe that using social networking to target our customers will be essential in increasing sales profits.(我々の顧客をターゲットにするためにソーシャル・ネットワーキングの使用は販売利益を増やすことにとって不可欠であると私は思っています。 )
  • In my opinion, it is a typical method nowadays.(私の考えでは、最近では典型的な方法です。)
  • We expect you to present something more special than the marketing strategies we've seen with other companies.(他の会社で(すでに)見ているマーケティング戦略以上に特別な何かをあなたには示してもらうことを期待します。 )
  • I don't understand what you mean.(あなたの言っている意味が分りません。)
  • Can you give me more specific information?(もう少し特定の情報を与えてくれませんか? )

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