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Yes. You talked about the forecast of the future energy market. You expected the energy demand will increase rapidly as the world's population goes up and the competition in procurement of energy resources will be harsh. As you know, China invests massive amount of money for the development projects of energy resources in the world to ensure enough supply to meet its large demand. Do you think this aggressive situation will lead the world to war again? Do you think we will make the same mistake?

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Yes. You talked about the forecast of the future energy market. You expected the energy demand will increase rapidly as the world's population goes up and the competition in the procurement of energy resources will be harsh. As you know, China invests a massive amount of money for the development projects of energy resources in the world to ensure enough supply to meet its large demand. Do you think this aggressive situation will lead the world to war again? Do you think we will make the same mistake?

1. the procurement you are talking about is specific, so use "the"
2. "amount" is a count noun, so it requires a determiner

Why would you think that this sort of development would actually lead to war? I mean, it seems reasonable to invest in such projects considering the situation. It seems like a responsible thing to do, and I believe that we should all be doing so instead of wasting money on war technology. Would you agree?

I understand. For example, renewable energy resource is a key to solve this problem because it is infinite and if we can make use of it more efficiently and cheaply, our lives will be changed completely. However, at this moment, renewable energy is not dependable. Secondly, we should think about how we can establish the system which deters the nations from pursuing only their own interests.

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I understand. For example, renewable energy resource is a key to solve this problem because it is infinite and if we can make use of it more efficiently and cheaply, our lives will be changed completely. However, at this moment, renewable energy is not dependable. Secondly, we should think about how we can establish a system that deters the nations from pursuing only their own interests.

1. the system you are talking about is not specific yet, so use "a" instead of "the"
2. this is a restrictive clause, which means the clause is necessary to express what you mean in the sentence so use "that" instead of "which"

In what regard, in particular, do you disagree with nations pursuing their own interests?
What kind of deterrence are you suggesting?

In my opinion, the United Nations should have a stronger control on the energy field. Limited countries dominate the world's energy resources now. Therefore, I think an international energy pool is one of the solutions. Any country can use it when the lack of energy resources happens. This system should be led by the UN.

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In my opinion, the United Nations should have stronger control in the energy field. Limited countries dominate the world's energy resources now. Therefore, I think an international energy pool is one of the solutions. Any country can use it when the lack of energy resources happens. This system should be led by the UN.

1. "control" is uncountable, so don't use "a" to quantify it
2. correct preposition for "fields

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