同僚に営業目標を達成できたことを感謝しよう

Thanking your team members
あなたはチームリーダーとして営業目標を達成できたことを感謝しています。
ご存知のようにチームワークはとても重要です。何かを一緒に達成した時はお祝いをしても良いでしょう。海外では個人主義がフォーカスされることもありますが、チームの中で一人一人が自分自身の個性を発揮してそれぞれの持ち場を守るようにしています。あなた自身も自分の個性をチームの中で発揮してチームメートに得意分野をアピールすることが大切です。
Good news! Our department achieved the sales targets last month!
 
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Good news! Our department achieved the sales targets last month!

Great!! I knew we could do it! That makes us the top sales team of the year! That means we can get a 2 month bonus and a 5-day overseas trip. I can't wait to go abroad with my family. Thank you very much for working so hard these days, I know it has been difficult, but we got through it and everything was worth it!

自然な表現

Great!! I knew we could do it! That makes us the top sales team of the year! That means we can get a 2-month bonus and a 5-day overseas trip. I can't wait to go abroad with my family. Thank you very much for working so hard. I know these days have been difficult, but we got through it and everything was worth it!

1. Consider starting a fresh sentence to express your idea here.
It's my pleasure. We sure have worked very hard, and our team deserves this reward. Where will you be going on your trip?

Yeah! Actually, you know, we have the option to donate our 2 month bonus and the money for 5days trip to low performance sales people which they will reduce their salary from next quarter.
Why don’t you choose this option?

自然な表現

Yeah! Actually, you know, we have the option to donate our 2-month bonus and the money for the 5-day trip to low-performing sales people who will receive a pay cut starting next quarter.
Why don’t you choose this option?

1. Your original word choice was inappropriate. Make use of this phrase to give a more appropriate expression here.
Oh, I didn't know that. Thank you for telling me. I will certainly think about it. Will you be doing that?

Sounds good! You must do that.
Are you kidding me? Of course not. A hypocrite does take this option like you :)

自然な表現

Sounds good! You must do that.
Are you kidding me? Of course not. A hypocrite does take this option like you :)

1. Here's an alternative "No, I won't"
Oh, I see. You were joking. Well, I hope you will enjoy your bonus and the five-day trip. It sure is a great reward.

Thanks! I’m serious.

自然な表現

Thanks! I’m serious.

1. Here's an alternative "Thanks a lot"

関連単語

  • competence（能力、資産）
  • evaluation（評価、成績）
  • decade（10年間）
  • aftereffects（爪痕、余波、副作用反応）
  • different views（異なる見解）
  • allergy（アレルギー）
  • relatively（比較的に、相対的に）

関連フレーズ

  • Our department achieved double-digit sales and profit growth last month!（我々の部署は二桁の売上と利益成長を先月成し遂げました！）
  • It makes our lives more convenient. （私達の生活様式をより便利なものに変えます。 ）
  • We owe it to you.（あなたのおかげです。）
  • Does that day work for you?（その日は大丈夫ですか？）
  • Does it work out for you?（あなたにとって大丈夫ですか？（うまくいきますか？） ）

こんな方にオススメ

  • ビジネス
  • 中級
  • 説明/釈明
  • 感謝/謝罪する
  • 社内業務