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医者に自分の症状を伝えよう

Talking about your symptoms
医者に自分の症状を説明してみましょう。あなたが記載した回答に対して、この後講師がどんどん質問していきます。
医者に診てもらうとき、一番困るのが自分の体調や病状を説明することです。専門的な単語も必要になってきますが、知っている言葉を使ってどう表現できるか考えながら説明してみましょう。
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Hello. What seems to be the problem?
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Hello. What seems to be the problem?

I have a stomach ache.

自然な表現

I have a stomachache.

1 - this is one word and should be written together.
Oh, I see what you mean. How long have you been feeling this pain? Have you eaten anything unusual recently?

I think I've been troubled by the problem for years. I didn't eat anything unusual and it is actually not unusual for me to feel bloated after meals even if I didn't eat a lot.

自然な表現

I think I've been troubled by the problem for years. I didn't eat anything unusual and it is actually not unusual for me to feel bloated after meals even when I don't eat a lot.

1 - it's clearer to say 'even when' because you're referring to something that happens regularly
2 - use the verb in the present because you're referring to something that happens often.
How long have you been experiencing this chronic pain exactly? What do you imagine caused the first time you felt it?

Well, it has been 4 to 5 years. The first time I felt a sharp stomach ache was probably after a fast lunch when I ate everything in a hurry. At that time, eating too fast may be the reason for my stomach ache. But after I realized the problem, I try to eat every meal as slow as possible and I rarely felt the sharp stomach ache for recent 2 or 3 years. However, the stomach bloating still comes to me from time to time.

自然な表現

Well, I have been feeling this way for 4 to 5 years. The first time I felt a sharp stomachache was probably after a fast lunch when I ate everything in a hurry. At that time, eating too fast may have been the reason for my stomachache. But after I realized the problem, I tried to eat every meal as slowly as possible and I rarely felt the sharp stomachache for the past 2 or 3 years. However, the stomach bloating still comes to me from time to time.

1 - this is a clearer way to say what you wanted
2, 4, 7 - this is one word
3 - should be in the past because you're referring to something that already happened
5 - should be the past because you're referring to something that already happened
6 - you need an adverb here
8 - you should say 'for the past 2 or 3 years'.
That means you only experience this whenever you eat in haste, is that right? I don't think there's any need for me to prescribe medicine since the problem is caused by your inappropriate habit of eating too quickly.

Well, I am not sure. The problem is that after I changed my inappropriate habit, I still feel my stomach bloated from time to time even though I have paid attention to my eating speed. So I was wondering if it is possible to have a test on my stomach or something to see if there's anything wrong.

自然な表現

Well, I am not sure. The problem is that after I changed my inappropriate habit, I still feel my stomach bloated from time to time even though I have paid attention to my eating speed. So I was wondering if it was possible to have a test on my stomach or something to see if there's anything wrong.

1 - should be in the past because you started the sentence in the past.
I agree. It would be best to carry out a test. Let's schedule it for December 14th; how does that sound? Make sure that you don't eat anything eight hours before the test.

That sounds great. I will keep it in mind. Thank you.

自然な表現

That sounds great. I will keep it in mind. Thank you.

Good. You wrote perfectly here.
  • fever(熱)
  • a sore throat(のどが痛い)
  • nauseous(むかむかする)
  • pain(痛み)
  • wait(待つ)
  • hurt(痛む,痛めつける)
  • serious(重大な)
  • puffy(腫れている)
  • headache(頭痛)
  • toothache(歯痛)
  • I have a fever and sore throat. I have no appetite. (熱と喉の痛みです。あと食欲もないです。)
  • I have been sick for about three days. Sometimes I'm nauseous, too.(ここ3日ずっと病気な感じです。時々胃がむかむかします。)
  • How long do I have to wait?(どのくらい待たなければなりませんか。)
  • My skin is breaking out.(じんましんが出ています。)
  • The pain is right here.(ここがかなり痛いです。)
  • Is it serious?(どこか悪いところあるのでしょうか?)
  • WIll I get better soon?(すぐによくなりますかね?)
  • My eyes are puffy.(目が腫れました。)
  • My muscles ache.(筋肉が痛みます。)

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