学生時代の友人について話してみよう

Talking about your old schoolmates
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友人との思い出から、当時の学校生活など話をふくらませることができるといいですね。
What were your old schoolmates like?
 
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What were your old schoolmates like?

Before yesterday was my birthday, and I spent with my classmate by chance who graduated same school in the old days. Though they didn't know that the day was may birthday, for me it resulted enjoyable day.

自然な表現

The day before yesterday was my birthday, and by chance I spent it with my classmates who graduated from the same school in the old days. Though they didn't know that that day was may birthday, for me it resulted in an enjoyable day.

1. "Before yesterday" could be any moment: 3 days ago, 3 months ago...
2. Word order: since you're using a relative clause later on, you want "who" to be close to "classmates", so move "by chance" to the beginning of the sentence.
3. You need a direct object.
4. There are many, so use the plural.
5. 9. This preposition is needed between that verb and that noun.
6. You are talking about a specific noun, so use the definite article here.
7. Alternative expression: "before me".
8. This demonstrative adjective makes the connection to "day" even stronger.
10. You are not talking about a specific noun you already introduced, so use the indefinite article here.
How did it come to be that you were able to meet with your old classmates and they didn't know that it was your birthday?

It was just spontaneous.We often hang out, and the day which we set few days ago was just my birthday by any chance. I knew it was my birthday of cource, but I didn't mention it, because I didn't want them to think that I expected some gifts or something like that.

自然な表現

It was just spontaneous. We often hang out, and the day which we had set a few days ago was just my birthday by    chance. I knew it was my birthday of course, but I didn't mention it, because I didn't want them to think that I expected some gifts or something like that.

1. You need a space after a periods, commas, colons, semicolons and between words.
2. Use the past perfect for things happening in the past before other things that also happened in the past.
3. You are not talking about a specific noun you already introduced, so use the indefinite article here.
4. "By any chance" is indeed a common expression, but it's used differently. Here, you want to say "by chance" = by coincidence.
5. Spelling.
Oh, I see. I guess that your classmate never knew when your birthday was, even in school. What did you do with your old classmate that made your day so enjoyable?

We regularly walk around Tokyo for hours like a "hiking." This time, after we had a lunch at a casual French restaurant and then traveled riverside area for 4 hours visiting some shrines and historical places. It was comfortable weather day, so we aren't tired at all.

自然な表現

We regularly walk around Tokyo for hours like    "hiking." This time, after we had    lunch at a casual French restaurant, we walked along the riverside area for 4 hours visiting some shrines and historical places. It was a comfortable weather day, so we weren't tired at all.

1. This is a case of “zero-article”: you can skip the article before some nouns, especially abstract ones.
2. Alternative expression: "having".
4. "after having lunch" is a subordinate clause, so you need a main clause now = one that can stand alone: "this time we walked along the riverside".
5. "Travel" is usually used for longer distances.
6. You don't "walk" or "travel" something -> "along" is needed.
7. You are talking about a specific noun, so use the definite article here.
8. You are not talking about a specific noun you already introduced, so use the indefinite article here.
9. Don't revert back to the present, stick to the past tense to talk about actions taking place in the past.
That sounds like a lovely way to spend your day. Four hours of walking around visiting a lot of places must have really tired you out. What was your favorite part of the day?

Every time exploring Tokyo, we visit some shrines. This is my favorite part. We are not religious persons, let alone I'm a christian! However, you bump in to shrine and temples here and there in Tokyo. And Japanese culture based on Shinto and Buddhism , so when I go to there, I feel peaceful.

自然な表現

Every time we explore Tokyo, we visit some shrines. This is my favorite part. We are not religious people, let alone Christians! However, you bump into shrine and temples here and there in Tokyo, and Japanese culture is based on Shintoism and Buddhism, so when I go    there, I feel peaceful.

1. You can also say: "every time when exploring".
2. That's the plural of person.
3. Keep the plural subject.
4. Spelling.
5. 8. Use commas and/or conjunctions or pronouns to connect related sentences for a better flow.
6. You need the verb “to be” for the passive voice.
7. You used "Buddhism", so use "Shintoism" here.
9. No preposition is needed between this verb and "there".
That sounds like a wonderful day. How long have you known each other? Do you plan on doing something similar with your friends again soon?

We've been friends for fifty years! We went to an integrated junior, senior high school and college. In short we spent from the beginning of teen age to the middle of twenty. After graduating this school, we have been keeping friendship.

自然な表現

We've been friends for fifty years! We went to an integrated junior, senior high school and college. In short, we spent from the beginning of teenage years to our mid twenties together. After graduating this school, we have maintained our friendship.

1. Put a comma after each element of a list except the last one (use "and" there ) and where you would naturally make a quick pause when reading the sentence out aloud.
2. Spelling.
3. Use "teenage" as an adjective to describe the noun "years".
4. Use this to express a certain age range".
5. How did you spend them? "Together" answers this question.
6. You could also say "kept".
7. Whose friendship? It's best to specify that.
  • feel a longing to do~(~したいと強く願う)
  • the school song (校歌)
  • keep in contact with~(~と連絡を取り続ける)
  • the class reunion(同窓会)
  • belong to~(~に所属する)
  • look back upon~(~を振り返る)
  • I suppose we will be able to meet again after a year or so.(また1~2年後には集まることができそうです。)
  • The alumni meeting ended with everyone singing the school song together.(同窓会は校歌の大合唱で終わりました。)
  • Do you keep in contact with your classmates from high school?(高校時代のクラスメイトと連絡をとっていますか。)
  • I think class reunions are very important because we can look back upon our youth and reminisce about fond memories.(同窓会は本当に大切ですよ。だって青春時代を振り返ることができますし,懐かしい思い出にふけることもできますし。)
  • I belonged to the golf club when I was in high school.(私は高校時代にゴルフクラブに所属していました。)

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