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好きなアイドルについて話してみよう

Talking about your favorite idol
自分の好きなアイドルを説明してみましょう。あなたが記載した回答に対して、この後講師がどんどん質問していきます。
アイドルといっても男性アイドルや女性アイドルなど、さまざまな種類があります。誰のどんなところが好きか語ってみましょう。
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Who is your favorite idol?
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Who is your favorite idol?

I like Kent Yamazaki Japanese actor.
I'm a fan of him since the movie 'Kingdom'
He has changed his image from a skinny intelligent boy to action star in this movie.

自然な表現

I like Kent Yamazaki, a Japanese actor.
I'm a fan of him since the movie 'Kingdom'.
He has changed his image from a skinny intelligent boy to an action star in this movie.

1. Use a comma to indicate a pause between the different parts of a sentence.
2. Use ''a'' with singular countable nouns.
3. Use a full stop to indicate the end of a sentence.
4. Use ''an'' before words that start with a vowel sound.
That is great! I haven't watched that movie yet. How old is he and when did he start his acting career?

He is 26 years old.
He started work as model of a magazine since 15 years old, and 5 years later he changed his career to actor.

自然な表現

He is 26 years old.
He started work as a model of a magazine since he was 15 years old, and 5 years later he changed his career to acting.

1. Use ''a'' to refer to singular countable nouns.
2. Use the pronoun ''he'' to refer to a man, boy, or male animal previously mentioned or easily identified.
3. Use the verb ''was'' to refer to the past.
4. Use the noun ''acting'' which means the art or occupation of performing fictional roles in plays, films, or television.
That is great! How many movies has he acted so far? Do you think he will feature in Hollywood movies?

He has acted several love romance movies.
He expand his actor's skill in 'Kingdom', he will be good actor more and more in the future.
Some Japanese idol go Hollywood, so if he wants he might go to Hollywood.
But I want him to stay Japan.

自然な表現

He has acted several love romance movies.
He expanded his actor's skill in 'Kingdom', he will be a good actor more and more in the future.
Some Japanese idols go to Hollywood, so if he wants he might go to Hollywood. However, I want him to stay in Japan.

1. Use the past tense ''expanded''.
2. Use ''a'' with singular countable nouns.
3. Make a plural form to fix the agreement mistake.
4. Use the preposition ''to'' when expressing motion in the direction of.
5. This is a better way to start a sentence. Do not begin with conjunction words such as ''but''.
6. Use the preposition ''in'' to indicate within.
That is interesting! I think going to Hollywood will expand his career but it's all up to him. Have you seen him in person?

No, I haven't seen him in person.
He is making next movie of the 'Kingdom'.
He will go propaganda tour of the movie, when the next movie release.
It must be fantastic, if I meet him during the tour!

自然な表現

No, I haven't seen him in person.
He is making the next movie of the 'Kingdom'.
He will go on a propaganda tour of the movie  when the next movie release.
It must be fantastic   if I meet him during the tour!

1. Use ''the'' when talking about something specific.
2. Add the preposition ''on''.
3. Use ''a'' with singular countable nouns.
4 & 5. Remove comma because it is not needed here.
Oh, I see, I also wish that you get a chance to see him when he tours. Have you considered being an actor yourself?

Yes, I have.
That's cool, if I can fight like Milla Jovovich in Biohazard or Angelina Jolie in Tomb Raider.
I had been training my muscle for a while, after I watched the movie.
However the training would not last for longtime, you know.

自然な表現

Yes, I have.
That's cool   if I can fight like Milla Jovovich in Biohazard or Angelina Jolie in Tomb Raider.
I had been training my muscles for a while, after I watched the movie.
However the training would not last for a long time, you know.

1. Remove comma because it is not needed here.
2. Make a plural form.
3. Use ''a'' when talking about something that is not specific.
4. Use adjective ''long time''.
  • goods(グッズ)
  • go all out in~(〜に全力をつくす)
  • necessities(必需品)
  • ill-mannered(マナーの悪い)
  • well-mannered(マナーの良い)
  • S lacks in something(Sはいまいちである)
  • technic(技術)
  • excellent(優れている)
  • beyond my description(言葉になりません)
  • I went to the AKB48 concert last night.(昨晩はAKB48のコンサートに行ってきました。)
  • I went all out in the concert.(コンサートではハッスルしましたよ。)
  • Have you gone to any concerts recently? I go to a concert about once a month.(最近コンサートには行きましたか? 私なんて月一で行ってますよ。)
  • Sometimes in the concert hall, there are some ill-mannered people in the audience. (時々コンサート会場にマナーの悪い聴衆がいますよね。)
  • When I go to a live concert, I always buy items promoting the artist.(ライブにいけば必ずアーティストグッズ買います。)
  • Pen lights are a necessity at any concert.(ペンライトはコンサートの必需品だよ。)
  • His performance is beyond description, especially his excellent guitar technique.(彼の演奏技術は言葉になんてできないですよ。特に彼のギターテクニックはたまらないね。)
  • This performance lacked something.(今回の演奏はいまいちだったね。)

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  • 初級
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