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好きな映画について話してみよう

Talking about your favorite movie
自分の好きな映画を説明してみましょう。
映画が好きな方にとっては話しやすいトピックかもしれません。今まで見た中で感動したもの、面白かったものなどを伝えると練習になります。
What kind of movies do you like?
 
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What kind of movies do you like?

I like foreign movies. Titanic is the most favorite movie.

自然な表現

I like foreign movies. Titanic is my most favorite movie.

1. Using a Possessive Determiner here can enhance the nuance and smoothness of the phrase.
Titanic is a classic movie with an unforgettable story and memorable characters. Many people still enjoy watching it even after many years. Which scene from the movie has stayed with you the most?

The last scene is the most impressive. Old Rose had possessed the neckless and she threw away it into the ocean. That was very surprising when I saw the movie for the first time. I also like the scene that shows photos describing her life after boarding the Titanic. I found that she has done what Jack and she had promised to do.

自然な表現

The last scene is the most impressive. Old Rose had been in possession of the necklace, and she threw it away into the ocean. That was very surprising when I saw the movie for the first time. I also like the scene that shows photos describing her life after boarding the Titanic. I found that she had done what Jack and she had promised to do.

1. It's more natural to use a Stative Verb rather than a dynamic Action Verb here.
2. You misspelled this word.
3. You need a comma before a Conjunction.
4. You must place a Pronoun inside a Phrasal Verb, not outside.
5. Please don't mix the Tenses. Use the Past Tense consistently because you used it the first time.
The ending scene is very emotional, especially when Rose lets go of the necklace and reflects on her life after Titanic. It really shows how her journey with Jack changed her. If you could change one part of the story, what would it be?

The scenes where the crewman shoots Jack's friend and then commits suicide are unnecessary for me. While they effectively convey the panic on board, I would have preferred for them to die in a different way.

自然な表現

The scenes where the crewman shot Jack's friend and then committed suicide are unnecessary to me. While they effectively convey the panic on board, I would have preferred for them to die in a different way.

1 - 2. Please don't mix the Tenses. Use the Past Tense consistently because you used it the first time.
3. "For me" is used to express its effect on you or its benefit for you, whether it's good or bad. "To me" is more to express opinion e.g. "That's dangerous for me." vs. "That sounds difficult to me."
If they were to die in a different way, what kind of fate would you have preferred to see for them instead?

Since the friend was an original character, I wanted him to die while saving someone. The crewman, however, was a real person who actually saved many lives before passing away. Don't you think that it wasn't necessary to discribe his death scene? I've even heard stories that the crewman's family made a complaint after the movie was released.

自然な表現

Since the friend was an original character, I wanted him to die while saving someone. The crewman, however, was a real person who actually saved many lives before passing away. Don't you think that it was unnecessary to describe his death scene? I've even heard stories that the crewman's family filed a complaint after the movie was released.

1. "Don't" and "wasn't" are both negative, so you shouldn't use them together.
2. You misspelled this word.
3. "Make" is too casual in this context.
I can understand your point. Showing the crewman's death has been debated because he was based on a real person. Your idea for Jack's friend also would have made his ending more meaningful. Which other character in Titanic did you find especially memorable, and why?

Mr. Andrew is also unforgettable person. He was the designer of the ship and based on a real person, too. He was very kind to every passenger, including Jack. As most first-class passengers were hostile to Jack, his personality stood out. The scene where he decided to share his fate with the sinking ship was also impressive.

自然な表現

Mr. Andrews is also an unforgettable person. He was the designer of the ship and was based on a real person, too. He was very kind to every passenger, including Jack. As most first-class passengers were hostile to Jack, his personality stood out. The scene where he decided to share his fate with the sinking ship was also impressive.

1. I suppose this is what you meant to express.
2. "Person" is a Countable Noun, so you need an Article (or a Possessive Determiner). Countable Nouns can't stand alone in the sentence.
3. Don't omit "was" here because it would make the sentence quite casual.

関連単語

  • nonfiction（実話）
  • fiction（フィクション，作り話）
  • S be moved（Sは感動させられる）
  • boring（つまらない）
  • imagination（想像力）
  • scale（スケール）
  • broadcast（放送する）
  • show（上映する）

関連フレーズ

  • Yes, I've seen "Titanic", which is a movie based on the sinking of an actual ship.（はい。タイタニックを見ました。これは沈没船に関する実話でして。）
  • No. Actually, I'm not interested in watching movies. I can't remember the last time I watched a movie.（いいえ。自分は映画には関心がなく，いつ最後に見たのかすら覚えていないんです。）
  • I'm not the type of person who is easily moved when watching a movie.（私は映画を観て簡単に感動できるタイプの人間ではなくて。）
  • Do you have any movies that you recommend?（おすすめの映画はありますか?）
  • I think the scenes of this movie are not only beautiful, but also delicate. （この映画のシーンは、美しいだけでなく、繊細さも兼ね備えていると思います。）
  • I thought that movie was boring so I don't recommend it.（その映画はつまらなかったからおすすめはしないよ。）
  • Watching a movie in a theater is much better than watching it on TV because the scale is much different. （映画館で映画を見るのは、テレビで見るのとはスケールが格段に違いますからね。）

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