ライブの感想について話してみよう

Talking about a live concert
音楽ライブの感想を説明してみましょう。あなたが記載した回答に対して、この後講師がどんどん質問していきます。
自分の好きな音楽やアーティストの話は盛り上がりますよね。ライブやコンサートで印象に残ったことを話してみましょう。
How was the concert?
 
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How was the concert?

It was fantastic fan club private live of Full Of Harmony. The set list was almost from their second album in 2001.

自然な表現

It was a fantastic fan club private live show of Full of Harmony. The set list was    from their second album in 2001.

1. You should use an indefinite article before adjectives followed by a non-specific countable noun/pronoun that the adjectives modify.
2. Add this to make the meaning clear.
3. The band's name, "Full of Harmony," is styled with a lowercase "of" for stylistic or branding reasons. Band names and titles can be created and stylized in various ways, and the use of lowercase or uppercase letters in such names is often a matter of artistic choice.
4. Omit "almost". It is disrupting the clarity of your expression.
It sounds like you had a great time at the Full Of Harmony fan club private live! I'm curious to know what it was like to be at such an exclusive event. What was the atmosphere like at the concert? Was it intimate and personal, or was it more energetic and lively?

It was a more intimate and personal live music. They talked about their personal life, making new songs and album, and New design projects between songs.

自然な表現

It was a more intimate and personal live music show. They talked about their personal lives, making new songs and albums, and new design projects between songs.

1. Add this to make the meaning clear.
2 and 3. Since you are referring to more than one life and album, you should use the plural form.
4. Do not use a capital letter in the middle of a sentence except with acronyms and proper nouns.
Did they play any new songs that you haven't heard before? What did you think of their new design projects?

No, they didn't but they sang the Happy Birthday song to Arata, the low part singer. His birthday was 3 November. The beauty of the music consists of its harmony.

自然な表現

No, they didn't, but they sang the Happy Birthday song to Arata, the low-part singer. His birthday was on the 3rd of November. The beauty of the music is in its harmony.

1. You should put a comma before "but" when it is connecting two independent clauses.
2. Add a hyphen here. A hyphen is used to create compound words. Often, the two words joined by the hyphen act as an adjective that describes a noun in the sentence.
3 and 4. This is a much clearer and more natural way of expressing this point.
  • genre(ジャンル)
  • regardless of age or sex(老若男女問わず)
  • all around the world(至るところに)
  • heavy metal(ヘビーメタル)
  • rock music(ロック)
  • idol(アイドル歌手)
  • as~as possible(出来る限り)
  • My favorite genre is heavy metal.(好きなジャンルはヘビーメタルです。)
  • I don't care for classical music because it all sounds the same to me and I get sleepy while listening to it.(クラシック音楽は、どれも同じように聞こえるし、聞いていると眠くなってしまうので、気になりません。)
  • I love Michael Jackson. His music is enjoyed by people of all ages all over the world.(私はマイケル・ジャクソンが大好きです。彼の音楽は、世界中のあらゆる年齢層の人々に楽しまれています。)
  • Which genre of music do you like?(あなたはどのジャンルの音楽が好きなんですか?)
  • Music exists all around the world. (至るところに音楽は存在している。)
  • I think music expands our mind, so we should expose our children to music as much as possible. (音楽は心を豊かにしてくれるものだと思うので、子供たちにはできるだけ音楽に触れさせてあげたいですね。)
  • We should not belittle the music of Japanese idols such as AKB48.(我々はAKB48のようなアイドルの音楽をバカにすべきではない。)

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  • 日常
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  • 自己紹介
  • 趣味/好み