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ライブの感想について話してみよう

Talking about a live concert
音楽ライブの感想を説明してみましょう。あなたが記載した回答に対して、この後講師がどんどん質問していきます。
自分の好きな音楽やアーティストの話は盛り上がりますよね。ライブやコンサートで印象に残ったことを話してみましょう。
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How was the concert?
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How was the concert?

It was amazing and exciting!!!
It was far from reality and it made all of my stress gone away!!!
I went to the concert of AAA which is the group which is popular among young peoples many times!
As soon as I started to be interested in them, I fortunately got a chance to get the tickets.
I went there with my mom and she got into them!
The group will unfortunately dissolve in a year:(
The spring of life kind of goes away although I stopped to be their fan.

自然な表現

It was amazing and exciting!!!
It was far from reality and it made all of my stress gone away!!!
I went to a concert of AAA which is a group popular among young peoples many times!
As soon as I started to be interested in them, I, fortunately, got a chance to get the tickets.
I went there with my mom and she got into them!
The group will, unfortunately, dissolve in a year:(
The spring of life kind of goes away although I stopped to be their fan.

1.2. you are mentioning something for the first time so use ''a''
3. you have already used the relative pronoun, you don't need to repeat it
4.5. use commas before and after linking words in the middle of a sentence
Im glad you enjoyed the concert. Would you know the reason why the group is dissolving, if yes could you please share?

Concerts make us feel special!
To be honest, I know the reason they will dissolve.
The leader of the group got arrested with bodily harm, so it became difficult to continue to singing as a group.

Sadly, there are a lot of crime in celebrity.
the top one is one which is related to drug.

自然な表現

Concerts make us feel special!
To be honest, I know the reason they will dissolve.
The leader of the group got arrested with bodily harm, so it became difficult to continue singing as a group.

Sadly, there is a lot of crime among celebrities.
The top one is one that is related to the drug.

1. to continue+ a gerund, no preposition is needed
2. singular
3. the correct preposition
3. the correct preposition
4. among+ the plural
5. capitalize
6. use that in dependable clauses, use which in independent clauses when fiving additional information
7. a specific crime, use ''the''
I agree with you a lot of celebrities get involved in drug use and even selling which is bad for their business. Whom are you likely to keep following after the group dissolves?

That's true.

I'm not a big fan of any singers, but I would like to go to the concert of MISIA.
She is a singer of R&B with super powerful voice.
Her songs are based on her thinking about peace, so they resonate with me.
She prefer do some activities which are for children in need and LGBT to sing in TV shows, so I cannot enjoy her song a lot unless I go to her concert!

自然な表現

That's true.

I'm not a big fan of any singer, but I would like to go to the concert of MISIA.
She is a singer of R&B with a super powerful voice.
Her songs are based on her thinking about peace, so they resonate with me.
She prefers to do some activities which are for children in need and LGBT to sing on TV shows, so I cannot enjoy her songs a lot unless I go to her concert!

1. any+ singular
2. a general, countable noun, use ''a''
3. the correct phrasing
4. on+ TV
5. there is more than one song, use the plural
Wow, that is very interesting. I also like witnessing shows. I really agreed with you. Being present at a live show really gives me great memories. What about you?

I used to a big fan of the Japanese idol group.
Their concert was the most special one because production like lights, smoke and fires are paramount for them.
To be honest, they don’t sigh and dance hard.
By the way, could I ask you a question?
What does “witnessing shows” mean?
I guess it’s the TV shows which are related to crime.

自然な表現

I used to a big fan of a Japanese idol group.
Their concert was the most special one because production like lights, smoke and fires are paramount for them.
To be honest, they don’t sigh and dance hard.
By the way, could I ask you a question?
What does “witnessing shows” mean?
I guess it’s the TV shows which are related to crime.

1. you are mentioning something for the first time, use ''a''
You are right. The verb "witnessing" usually means seeing a crime or an activity. However, it can also mean to be present at an event as a spectator. Do you understand?

Oh, I didn't know that.
In other words, witnessing shows kind of the live shows. Is it right?
We can see singers singing musics in TV.

自然な表現

Oh, I didn't know that.
In other words, witnessing shows kind of live shows. Is it right?
We can see singers performing music on TV.

1. we don't know what shows in particular, this is not defined
2. we sing songs, play instruments and perform music
3. uncountable
4. on+ TV
  • genre(ジャンル)
  • regardless of age or sex(老若男女問わず)
  • all around the world(至るところに)
  • heavy metal(ヘビーメタル)
  • rock music(ロック)
  • idol(アイドル歌手)
  • as~as possible(出来る限り)
  • My favorite genre is heavy metal.(好きなジャンルはヘビーメタルです。)
  • I don't care for classical music because it all sounds the same to me and I get sleepy while listening to it.(クラッシックは得意ではないんですよ。というのも眠くなるわ,全部同じに聞こえてしまったりで。)
  • I love Michael Jackson. His music is enjoyed by people of all ages all over the world.(私はマイケル・ジャクソンが好きです。老若男女問わず世界中の人々に彼の音楽が影響を与えています。)
  • Which genre of music do you like?(あなたはどのジャンルの音楽が好きなんですか?)
  • Music exists all around the world. (至るところに音楽は存在している。)
  • I think music expands our mind, so we should expose our children to music as much as possible. (音楽は心を広くすると思うんです。だから我々は子供にできるだけ多くの音楽を聴かせるべきです。)
  • We should not belittle the music of Japanese idols such as AKB48.(我々はAKB48のようなアイドルの音楽をバカにすべきではない。)

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