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同僚が子供の出産祝いをくれたことに感謝しよう

Talking with your co-worker about the birth of your baby
あなたは同僚が子供の出産祝いをくれたことに感謝の気持ちを示しています。
日本同様海外でも出産祝いはとても大切です。しかしながらあまり高価なものも相手が気にしてしまいますので、安価でも気持ちのこもった贈りものを心がけましょう。ちょっとしたフォトフレームや可愛い洋服や靴下等でも喜ばれると思います。
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Congratulations on the birth of your baby!

Thank you so much but I doubt this is something trap. What kind of purpose do you have?

自然な表現

Thank you so much but I think this is a trap. What makes you say that?

1. opposite word
2. 'something' isn't an adjective
3. a natural expression
Well, actually I have no ill feelings towards you! Why do you think it's a trap? Are you always so suspicious? Have you had some bad experience in the past? All I wanted to do was to congratulate you! It's a great event in one's life when a new life arrives in one's life!

No, not really but I think all of humans are selfish. Therefore, I don't believe kindness or generosity and so on. For example, sometimes our boss gave us free drinking party but he has another purpose that we work more. Don't you think so?

自然な表現

No, not really but I think all humans are selfish. Therefore, I don't believe in kindness or generosity and so on. For example, sometimes our boss takes us out for drinks but he just wants us to work more. Don't you think so?

1. all + noun
2. "believe in ____"
3. word choice; present tense
4. structure; wording
We, yes I have to admit I think you are absolutely right when business is concerned and office politics. One must be very weary, but there is a thing like true friendship. You know we all have our good sides and, of course, our dark side. Tell me, why do you think that all humans are selfish? It has never even crossed my mind!

I understand what you want. Even though, your opinion is too optimistic to survive in the world. As you may know, there are 600,000 homeless in LA alone. Why such a terrible situation exist? Needless to say, nowadays everyone forget how important sharing our profit. I don't think we can believe one another.

自然な表現

I understand what you want, even though your opinion is too optimistic to survive in the world. As you may know, there are 600,000 homeless in LA alone. Why does such a terrible situation exist? Needless to say, nowadays everyone forgets how important sharing our money is. I don't think we can believe one another.

1. incomplete sentence
2. no comma here
3. sentence structure- need a verb
4. conjugation
5. word choice; sentence structure
There are a lot of people who are selfish. They only think of themselves. However, I believe that there are still people who are kind and generous. Have you never met someone who is kind or generous?

I know your opinion is common but doubting is a good way to reach the truth. In the first place, a person who has general position is doubting or believing, which person could build a better life?

自然な表現

I know your opinion is common but doubting is a good way to reach the truth. In the first place, which person could build a better life, someone who doubts everything or someone who believes everything?

1. wording; sentence structure
Trusting people and being optimistic, and grateful for what we have certainly makes us happy. As for the terrible things going on, people are working out their karma - but our karma is to be as helpful as possible. That's my attitude, not always acted upon of course. We rarely see the true picture, so best to work on ourselves, no?

Okay. Thank you for your explanation. I completely understand your opinion, furthermore your philosophy. Anyway, how much do you want to need from this attitude? If it is quite expensive than I though, I would deny to receive your gift.

自然な表現

Okay. Thank you for your explanation. I completely understand your opinion and furthermore your philosophy. Anyway, what do you want from this attitude? If you buy me an expensive gift, I won't accept it.

1. complete sentence
2. word choice
3. 'want' or 'need', not both
4. wording; structure
  • scatterbrained(そわそわした、頭が散漫な)
  • behave(振る舞う)
  • mad(怒る)
  • tends to~(~しがちな)
  • raise a child(子供を育てる)
  • the best way to do(最良の方法)
  • come across(目にとまる、偶然巡り合う、横切る)
  • suitable(似合う、ふさわしい)
  • It's time to change his diapers.(おむつを交換する時間です。)
  • How do you feel about being a new parent?(新しい親になることをどう思いますか? )
  • I don't feel like I am a father yet.(まだ父親である気がしません。)
  • I can barely take care of myself.(自分のことすらままならないです。)
  • Your son will look really nice in these clothes.(この洋服はきっとあなたの息子さんにお似合いでしょう。 )
  • Babies need time to get used to eating outside of the womb and their systems need time to adjust.(赤ちゃんにとって子宮の外でものを食べるのに慣れるには時間が必要です。彼らの器官には調整時間を必要とするのです。)

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