日本のアニメを紹介してみよう

Introducing Japanese anime to your host family
ホストファミリーに日本アニメを紹介しよう。
日本のアニメは世界的にも高評価を得ています。あなたのお好みのアニメを紹介してみましょう。
What is your favorite Japanese anime?
 
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What is your favorite Japanese anime?

I like Dragon Ball which is an old anime but very interesting.

自然な表現

I like Dragon Ball, which is an old anime but very interesting.

1. A comma was added to separate two clauses.
Another expression: I'm a fan of Dragon Ball
My family loves Dragon Ball a lot, too! What makes you like watching that series? Who is your favorite character?

I used to watch Dragon Ball when I was a junior high school student. I used to like the battle anime. The is the reason to watch Dragon Ball.

自然な表現

I used to watch Dragon Ball when I was a junior high school student. I used to like  battle anime. That is the reason I watched Dragon Ball.

1. Article is not needed when talking about battle anime in general.
2. This is a more natural and grammatically correct phrasing in this context.
That makes sense, the battles are really exciting. Which fight scene from Dragon Ball do you remember as the most thrilling?

I like fight scene against Freeza who is the most favorite character for me.
He is quite unique and memorable.

自然な表現

I like the fight scene against Freeza, who is my favorite character.
He is quite unique and memorable.

1. Should use definite article to refer to a specific fight scene.
2. Comma was added to separate two clauses.
3. This is a more natural phrasing in this context, 'most' is redundant since 'favorite' means you like him the most.
Freeza is definitely a memorable villain with a strong presence. What part of his fight made him your favorite, his strategy, power, or personality?

Definitely, his personality.
He is a very easy to understand.
The real bad guy.

自然な表現

Definitely, his personality.
He is  very easy to understand.
He's the real bad guy.

1. Article is not needed here
2. Subject and a verb are needed here to make the sentence complete.
I get that, his personality really stands out. Do you think any other Dragon Ball villains are as easy to understand and memorable as Freeza?

I think Vezeta is also good.
He has a good pride and easy to understand also.

自然な表現

I think Vezeta is also good.
He has a lot of pride and is easy to understand also.

1. Better wording, 'good pride' is not used in English since 'pride' is considered both positive and negative, in a negative way pride is associated with arrogance.
2. Verb 'is' is needed here.
  • fun(面白い)
  • depict(~を描く)
  • faith(自信,誇り)
  • on line(オンラインで)
  • overseas(海外,海外で)
  • realistic(現実的な)
  • Are there any differences between American and Japanese animation?(アメリカのアニメーションと日本のアニメーションの違いはありますか?)
  • Oh, really? What kinds of anime do you like?(本当ですか?どのアニメが好きなの?)
  • I love "Sazaesan", which is a traditional Japanese animated story depicting a typical Japanese family.(私は、日本の典型的な家族を描いた日本の伝統的なアニメーションストーリーである「サザエさん」が大好きです。)
  • We should support anime because it is an important part of Japanese culture, although some people may disagree.(理解しない人もいるかもしれないが、私はアニメは重要な文化の一つだと思うし、誇りを持つべきだと思います。)
  • You can watch Japanese animation online easily from overseas.(日本のアニメを海外から簡単にオンラインで見ることができます。)
  • Sometimes, animated scenes depict realistic human situations.(アニメは人間の現実的な状況を時折描いている。)

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