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日本の四季を紹介しよう

Introducing Japanese four seasons to your host family.
ホストファミリーに日本の四季に関して話してみよう。
四季について説明してあげましょう。自分の好きな季節を説明するのもよいかもしれませんね。
Can you tell me about Japanese four seasons and what people do and eat during those seasons?
 
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Can you tell me about Japanese four seasons and what people do and eat during those seasons?

I like autumn the best, because it is not so hot and not so cold. Leaves change their color and the scenery of nature becomes beautiful, so we often go to nature and see them. We Japanese have this custom for a long time. Travelers would love that as well.

自然な表現

I like autumn the best   because it is not so hot and not so cold. Leaves change their color, and the scenery of nature becomes beautiful, so we often go to nature and see them. We Japanese have had this custom for a long time. Travelers would love that as well.

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It seems like you enjoy the vibrant beauty of autumn. The changing colors of the leaves and the crispness in the air are indeed captivating. Do you have any favorite places to enjoy the autumn scenery in Japan?

I like to go to Kyoto in this season. Kyoto has many famous places to see changing colors of leaves and l can enjoy that light up shows at the most of them.

自然な表現

I like going to Kyoto this season. Kyoto has many famous places to see the changing colors of leaves, and l can enjoy the light-up shows at most of them.

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Kyoto is a great choice to experience the beauty of the season, with its many stunning temples and gardens adorned with vibrant autumn foliage. Which particular Kyoto landmarks do you find most captivating during this season?

Nanzenji temple is famous for Japanese maple. Japanese maple is one of the popular spices among the trees which leaves change colors. Its leaves change to one brilliant red, so its scenery becomes marvelous.

自然な表現

Nanzenji temple is famous for the Japanese maple. Japanese maple is one of the popular spices among the trees, and leaves change colors. Its leaves change to one brilliant red, so its scenery becomes marvelous.

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In terms of autumnal culinary delights, do you have any particular Japanese dishes that you enjoy savoring during this time of year?

I enjoy some fruits and mushrooms in this season. Autumn has various seasonal agricultural products. going to a farm and picking fruits by ourselves is one of the popular activities.

自然な表現

I enjoy some fruits and mushrooms in this season. Autumn has various seasonal agricultural products. Going to a farm and picking fruits by ourselves is one of the popular activities.

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That sounds like a delightful autumnal experience. Picking fresh fruits from the farm amidst the vibrant autumn foliage must be truly refreshing. By the way, what are some of your favorite autumnal fruits to pick and savor?

Picking apples or grapes is common. Many farms provide general people this activity. I went to pick up apples. I could enjoy rare variety ones and so big ones not to be able to buy at the neighboring supermarket from my home.

自然な表現

Picking apples or grapes is common. Many farms offer this activity to the general public. I went to pick apples and could enjoy rare varieties, as well as ones so big that I couldn't find them at the nearby supermarket from my home.

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関連単語

  • favorite（大好きな）
  • colored leaves（紅葉した葉）
  • appreciate （鑑賞する）
  • had better do~（~するほうがよい）
  • Why don't you do~?（~したらいいじゃないの）

関連フレーズ

  • In spring, we have a party called "Hanami" where we enjoy special drinks and dishes, while we watch the cherry blossoms.（春には、桜を観ながらお酒や料理を楽しむ花見と呼ばれるパーティーをします。）
  • In autumn, you can see the changing colors of the leaves. It's so beautiful.（秋になると紅葉を見ることができ、とても美しいです。）
  • My favorite season is spring because it is also cherry blossom season.（私は桜の季節の春が大好きです。）
  • In the north, there is a lot of snow in the winter so you can enjoy skiing. Also, you can see the beautiful, snow-covered mountains.（北国では多くの雪が降るので、スキーを楽しむことができ、そして美しい雪景色の山々を観ることができます。）
  • Do you prefer hot or cool seasons?（暑い季節と涼しい季節のどちらがお好みですか?）
  • If you prefer summer, you should come to Japan between June and September.（もし暑い季節が好きなら6月から9月の間に日本に来たほうがよいでしょう。）
  • Why don't you visit Japan in the summer and see Mt. Fuji? If you can, you should try to climb it.（夏に日本を訪れて、富士山を見てみませんか？できれば、登ってみてください。）

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