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Yes, Off course! I recomend going to the location of Kamakura city. Beause It is famace as one of the most popular sight seeing spot. And as also, it is popular among Japanese people. It takes about 1 hour and more to get there from Tokyo Station. You can see many temples, and feel Japanese traditional atmospheare during you take a walk there.
Yes, of course! I recommend going to Kamakura City because it is one of the most popular sightseeing spots. Also, it is popular among Japanese people. It takes about 1 hour and more to get there from Tokyo Station. You can see many temples, and feel the traditional Japanese atmosphere while you take a walk there.
Yap, let me see, I recommend Komachi street and Tsuruoka-Hachimangu temple. On that street, there're so many souvenir shops and food shops. You can enjoy making an eating tour. Especially, I like Kokuriko Clape. So, I definitely recommend you go there and please eat butter lemon sugar Clape.
Yup, let me see, I recommend Komachi Street and Tsuruoka-Hachimangu Temple. On that street, there're so many souvenir shops and food shops. You can enjoy going on a food tour. Especially, I like Kokuriko Crepe, so I definitely recommend you go there and please eat butter lemon sugar crepe.
2, 3. This is part of the name of the place, so capitalize the first letter.
4.Alternative: You'll find many souvenir shops and places to eat on that street.
5. "Go on" is a more appropriate verb for "tours".
6. "Eating tour" is not something a native speaker would say.
8. The conjunctions "and," "but," and "so" cannot be used to begin a sentence, so connect them to the previous sentence with a comma or omit them.
Um, let's see, I think there're a lot of awesome private concerns shops and restaurants at Kamakura. Not just traditional Japanese shops but also modern shops. In my opinion, I suggest KODAKA's Bagel. That shop is as yet unknown bakery, but popular among local people. In that shop, bagels are absolutely stunning. It tastes natural sweetness originated from flour. Second, I recommend KOBAKABA breakfast restaurant which has hamish atmosphere. You can eat Japanese conventional set meal there. Like miso soup, unpolished rice, Japanese side dishes, and baked fish.
Um, let's see, I think there are a lot of awesome private concerns shops and restaurants at Kamakura. Not just traditional Japanese shops, but also, modern shops. In my opinion, I suggest KODAKA's Bagel. That shop is a yet unknown bakery, but popular among local people. In that shop, bagels are absolutely stunning. It tastes of the natural sweetness originating from flour. Second, I recommend KOBAKABA breakfast restaurant which has a hamish atmosphere. You can eat conventional Japanese set meals there, like miso soup, unpolished rice, Japanese side dishes, and baked fish.
2. I'm not quite sure what you mean here. What do you mean?
3. The pattern is "tastes of + (flavor)".
4. The sweetness you are talking about is specific, so use "the".
5. You are using this as an adverb, so make it a gerund.
6. "Atmosphere" should always have a determiner.
7. In the order of adjectives, the description comes before the nationality.
8. If there is more than one, use the plural form.
I got it. 3weeks ago, I found a special awsome Italian restaurant on be half of the way to the KODAKA's Bagle. It takes about ten minites on our foots, from Kamakura station's west exit. If you wanna go there, you'll go streight and walk 3 minuets from the west exit of Kamakura station. Then, you'll have to turn right to the coner of the KINOKUNIYA supermarket. And also, after another 7 minites to walk, you can get there. At the restaurant,
there are some dishes which is used Kamakura bagetables. Those are picked up at the today's morning.
I got it. 3 weeks ago, I found a special awesome Italian restaurant halfway to KODAKA's Bagle. It takes about ten minutes on foot, from Kamakura Station's west exit. If you wanna go there, you'll go straight and walk 3 minutes from the west exit of Kamakura station. Then, you'll have to turn right at the corner of the KINOKUNIYA supermarket. Also, after another 7 minutes of walking, you can get there. At the restaurant, there are some dishes that use Kamakura vegetables. They are usually freshly harvested on the morning of that day.
2. Do not add "the" to proper nouns.
3. Spelling.
4. "On foot" is a set phrase; "foot" is not something that needs an article.
5, 6, 8, 10, 14. Spelling.
7. This is the correct preposition for "corner".
9. The conjunctions "and," "but," and "so" cannot be used to begin a sentence, so connect them to the previous sentence with a comma or omit them.
11. Say either this or "After a 7-minute walk"
12. This is a restrictive clause, which means the clause is necessary to express what you mean in the sentence so use "that" instead of "which".
13. Use the active voice because the subject is the doer, not the receiver of the action.
15. This is how you can clearly express what you mean here.
関連単語
- tuna（マグロ）
- tradition（伝統）
- shrine（神社）
- fresh slices of raw fish（刺身）
- amberjack（かんぱち）
- transportation（交通機関）
- complicated（複雑な）
- temple（寺）
関連フレーズ
- Japan has many shrines and temples.（日本には多くの神社や寺があります。）
- There are many must-see places to visit in Japan such as Mt. Fuji, Kyoto, and Kyushu.（日本には絶対に行ったほうがよい場所があるんだ。例えば富士山や京都や九州だね。）
- Do you like traditional Japanese food?（日本の伝統料理は好きですか?）
- People often say that Japanese people are shy and calm, but I don't think they are.（日本人はシャイでおっとりしているとよく言われますが、私はそうは思いません。）
- Tokyo's transportation system is complicated, so you should plan carefully when riding the trains. （東京は交通機関が複雑なので，旅行者の皆さんは電車に乗る際は気をつけてくださいね。）
- Japanese people like to eat raw fish that has been thinly sliced, so you should try it too.（日本人は刺身を好んで食べるんですね。だからもしよかったら一度試してみてね。）
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3. It's already understood that Kamakura City is a destination, so don't add "location of" anymore.
4. This is part of the name of the place, so capitalize the first letter.
5. The conjunction "because" cannot be used to begin a sentence unless it is connected to an independent clause.
ex. Because it's rainy, I don't need to water my plants.
6. If it's popular, it's already understood that it's "famous".
8. The conjunctions "and," "but," and "so" cannot be used to begin a sentence, so connect them to the previous sentence with a comma or omit them.
9. "Atmosphere" should always have a determiner.
10. In the order of adjectives, the description comes before the nationality.
12. This means at the same time something is happening.