日本に旅行するときはどこへ行くべきか教えてあげよう

Tips on traveling in Japan
ホームステイファミリーに日本での旅行についてアドバイスをあげよう。
外国人の方からよく聞かれるのが「日本には何があるの?」「日本はどんなところが面白い?」といった質問です。日本の魅力を伝えられるように練習しましょう。
Do you have any tips on traveling in Japan?
 
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Do you have any tips on traveling in Japan?

I recommend going to an ancient city and going shopping there.
 The ancient capital I especially recommend is Kamakura.
Kamakura is about an hour away from Tokyo, and has one of the highest numbers of cultural assets in Japan.

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I recommend going to an ancient city and    shopping there.
 The ancient capital I especially recommend is Kamakura.
Kamakura is about an hour away from Tokyo and has one of the highest number of cultural attractions in Japan.

1. Sounds less repetitive.
2. Spellcheck.
3. An attraction is something that people can go to for interest or enjoyment, for example, a famous building.
Is Kamakura, Japan far from Tokyo? I am excited for this trip as I want to know more about Japanese culture.

Kamakura is about an hour away from Tokyo by train, so Kamakura is not so far.
Speaking of Japanese culture, I think Japanese food is the best.
For example, there is sushi, unagi, sukiyaki, and so on.
Of course, you can enjoy them in Kamakura.
In addition, when you eat them, you might think that you must use chopsticks, but you
don't have to worry about it!
Most owners will prepare folks and spoons if you ask them.

自然な表現

As I said, Kamakura is about an hour away from Tokyo by train, so it's not so far.
Speaking of Japanese culture, I think Japanese food is the best.
For example, there is sushi, unagi, sukiyaki, and the like.
Of course, you can enjoy them in Kamakura.
In addition, when you eat them, you
don't have to use chopsticks!
Most owners will prepare folks and spoons if you ask them.

1. Add this to indicate that you mentioned something before.
2. Use the pronoun, it, to refer to Kamakura to avoid sounding repetitive.
3. Better phrasing.
It's okay. We have chopsticks in my country too. Please tell me more about what I can see in Kamakura.

There are many old and historic temples and shrines.
Especially famous is the Great Buddha of Kamakura which stands on the grounds of
Kotokuin Temple. It's about 13 meters high.
you can also see historic townhouses in Komachi, Hase, and Kitakamakura, and so on.

自然な表現

There are many old and historic temples and shrines.
It's especially famous for the Great Buddha of Kamakura which stands on the grounds of
Kotokuin Temple. It's about 13 meters high.
You can also see historic townhouses in Komachi, Hase, Kita-Kamakura, and the like.

1. Use the phrase, famous for, to indicate what it is known for.
I would love to visit that place too. I am into visiting historical sites. When going to temples, what are the things that tourists should not do?

Yes, there are some rules that we must follow.
For example, Eating while walking there is prohibited and drones are forbidden.
Then, we can view the womb of the Great Buddha statue, but you cannot use a selfie stick to take pictures when viewing the statue because it might get scratched.

自然な表現

Yes, there are several rules that we must follow.
For example, eating while walking and drones are prohibited.
We can also view the womb of the Great Buddha statue, but you cannot use a selfie stick to take pictures when viewing the statue because it might get scratched.

1. No need to spell the gerund with a capital letter when used in the middle of a sentence.
2. Better word order.
That is a fantastic place to go especially if you need a little peace. Do they allow children inside the statue?

There is no age limit!
In addition, preschoolers are admitted free of charge , but the stairs are steep, so you should watch your step.

自然な表現

There is no age limit!
In addition, preschoolers are admitted free of charge, but the stairs are steep, so you should watch your step.

1. Here is an alternative expression, be careful.

関連単語

  • tuna（マグロ）
  • tradition（伝統）
  • shrine（神社）
  • fresh slices of raw fish（刺身）
  • amberjack（かんぱち）
  • transportation（交通機関）
  • complicated（複雑な）
  • temple（寺）

関連フレーズ

  • Japan has many shrines and temples.（日本には多くの神社や寺があります。）
  • There are many must-see places to visit in Japan such as Mt. Fuji, Kyoto, and Kyushu.（日本には絶対に行ったほうがよい場所があるんだ。例えば富士山や京都や九州だね。）
  • Do you like traditional Japanese food?（日本の伝統料理は好きですか?）
  • People often say that Japanese people are shy and calm, but I don't think they are.（日本人はシャイでおっとりしているとよく言われますが、私はそうは思いません。）
  • Tokyo's transportation system is complicated, so you should plan carefully when riding the trains. （東京は交通機関が複雑なので，旅行者の皆さんは電車に乗る際は気をつけてくださいね。）
  • Japanese people like to eat raw fish that has been thinly sliced, so you should try it too.（日本人は刺身を好んで食べるんですね。だからもしよかったら一度試してみてね。）

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