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日本に旅行するときはどこへ行くべきか教えてあげよう

Tips on traveling in Japan
ホームステイファミリーに日本での旅行についてアドバイスをあげよう。
外国人の方からよく聞かれるのが「日本には何があるの?」「日本はどんなところが面白い?」といった質問です。日本の魅力を伝えられるように練習しましょう。
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Do you have any tips on traveling in Japan?
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Do you have any tips on traveling in Japan?

You should do some research about some famous places in Japan, before coming to Japan before coming to Japan. That will make you enjoy more. For instance, if you like Japanese culture, you should go to Kyoto. So, there are a lot of traditionally built temples and shrines.

自然な表現

You should do some research about some famous places in Japan, before coming to Japan    . That will make you enjoy more. For instance, if you like Japanese culture, you should go to Kyoto. So, there are a lot of traditionally built temples and shrines.

1. I removed this phrase because it was redundant.
Thank you for the tip. I like doing outdoor activities. Do you have any places that you highly recommend?

Yes, I have a lot of recommend places in Kyoto. You should go to temples and shrines. Kyoto is easier to travel to than another place because the train and bus route are not difficult and there are lots of information. So, you will enjoy with no stress. I think that the most popular temple is Kiyomizu temple or Kinkaku temple.

自然な表現

Yes, I have a lot of places I recommend in Kyoto. You should go to the temples and shrines. Kyoto is easier to travel to than another place because the train and bus routes are not difficult and there are lots of information. Therefore, you will enjoy with no stress. I think that the most popular temple is Kiyomizu temple or Kinkaku temple.

1. This is a precise way of expressing what you were saying.
2. "the" is a definite article that is used when you are referring to something specific.
3. Use plurals when talking about things in general.
4. We don't start sentences using conjunctions. In this case, "so" is a conjunction that is why I removed it.
There are a lot of temples in Kyoto, it would be a great road trip. What places would you recommend to enjoy indoors during cold months?

I recommend going to the hot springs during cold months. There are many hot springs all over Japan. The hot springs in Japan are great because you can relax and enjoy the snow view. I really like the feeling of getting in the hot spring at the superb view the surroundings offer.

自然な表現

I suggest going to the hot springs during cold months. There are many hot springs all over Japan. The hot springs in Japan are great because you can relax and enjoy the snow view. I really like the feeling of getting in the hot spring at the superb view the surroundings offer.

1. This is an alternative synonym you could use.
That's nice. I can't remember the last time I went to a hot spring resort. What about the dishes? I'd love to taste some authentic local dishes.

That's great! What a hot spring resort did you go to?
Sashimi is one of a Japanese popular dishes. It is served in thin slices of row seafood. You eat sashimi by dipping soy sauce and wasabi. Have you ever eaten it?

自然な表現

That's great! What    hot spring resort did you go to?
Sashimi is one of the popular Japanese dishes. It is served in thin slices of raw seafood. You eat sashimi by dipping it in soy sauce and wasabi. Have you ever eaten it?

1. I removed "a'' because it was redundant.
2. "the" is a definite article that is used when you are referring to something specific.
3. This is the correct word order, use it to make your sentence precise.
4. Spelling correction.
5. Use "it'' when referring to the thing previously mentioned; "sashimi".
6. Use "in" to specify the use of something.
Well, it was a long time ago so I can't remember the name of the resort. I haven't tried sashimi before. Can it be eaten without the wasabi?

I understand. Yes, it is delicious to eat by dipping only soy sauce. Furthermore, sashimi is served with garnishes such as shredded Japanese white radish and shiso. The garnishes are used for preventing food poisoning as well as making the dish look beautiful.

自然な表現

I understand. Yes, it is delicious to eat by dipping it in only soy sauce. Furthermore, sashimi is served with garnishes such as shredded Japanese white radish and shiso. The garnishes are used for preventing food poisoning as well as making the dish look beautiful.

1. Use "it'' when referring to the thing previously mentioned; "sashimi".
2. Use "in" to specify the use of something.
  • tuna(マグロ)
  • tradition(伝統)
  • shrine(神社)
  • fresh slices of raw fish(刺身)
  • amberjack(かんぱち)
  • transportation(交通機関)
  • complicated(複雑な)
  • temple(寺)
  • Japan has many shrines and temples.(日本には多くの神社や寺がある。)
  • There are many "must see" places to visit in Japan such as Fujisan, Kyoto, and Kyushu.(日本には絶対に行ったほうがよい場所があるんだ。例えば富士山や京都や九州だね。)
  • Do you like Japanese traditional food?(日本の伝統食は好きですか?)
  • People often say that Japanese people are shy and calm, but I don't think they are.(よく日本人はシャイで静かな人たちだと言われますが,実際はそんなことはないと思います。)
  • Tokyo's transportation system is complicated, so you should be careful when riding on a train. (東京は交通機関が複雑なので,旅行者の皆さんは乗る際は気をつけてくださいね。)
  • Japanese people like to eat fresh slices of raw fish so you should try it, too.(日本人は刺身を好んで食べるんですね。だからもしよかったら一度試してみてね。)

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