好きな服について話してみよう

Talking about your favorite clothing store and brand
どんな洋服が好きか説明してみましょう。あなたが記載した回答に対して、この後講師がどんどん質問していきます。
お気に入りの洋服やお店について、いろいろな表現を駆使しながら楽しんでみましょう。
What kind of clothes do you like?
 
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What kind of clothes do you like?

I like tight-fitting and revealing clothes. Also, athleisure fashion dressing Adidas or Nike is my favorite. Both of them have an attraction. Nike is sharp and stylish; Adidas has great designed products in collaboration with fashion designers. Therefore, Nike is more accessible to coordinate with other clothes, whereas Adidas' collaboration items insist on their designs too much. Nike's wear doesn't bore me long, while Adidas's collaboration items bore me quickly. Yet, Adidas often has huge prices down, especially on those products. That's a chance to buy.

自然な表現

I like tight-fitting and revealing clothes.    Leisure fashion wear from Adidas or Nike is my favorite. I find both attractive: Nike's is sharp and stylish and Adidas has great designed products in collaboration with fashion designers. Therefore, Nike's products can easily be combined with other clothes, whereas Adidas' collaboration items are too distinct. Nike's wear doesn't bore me    , while Adidas's collaboration items bore me quickly. Yet, Adidas often has huge prices down, especially on those products. That's the time to buy them.

1. ''Also'' is not necessary.
2. Spelling correction.
3. Use ''wear'' to refer to clothes and garments that we wear.
4. Use ''from'' to indicate the source.
5. Rephrase for clearer meaning and use a colon to introduce an explanation.
6. Use the possessive case to indicate belonging to something.
7. Remove the comma and use ''and'' to join independent clauses.
8. Rephrase for clarity.
9. Use ''too distinct'' to mean stand out, ''items'' can't ''insists'' a they do not talk.
10. ''long'' is unnecessary.
11. Use ''the time'' as it is clearer.
12. Use a plural pronoun for ''products''.
That sounds nice. I guess your wardrobe is either Nike or Adidas. How often do you go shopping, then?

I'm a homebody, so I shop after going out for errands, such as going to the hairdresser or clinic. That is, I browse often and buy regularly. I used to have many clothes, but I now buy only the necessary quantity because I realized that hardly anybody cares about my fashion even if I wear different clothes daily. Fashion is self-satisfaction.

自然な表現

I'm a homebody, so I shop after going out for errands, such as going to the hairdresser or clinic. That is, I browse often and buy regularly. I used to have many clothes, but I now buy only the necessary quantities because I realized that hardly anybody cares about my fashion even if I wear different clothes daily. Fashion is self-satisfaction.

1. Use a plural noun for things in general.
That's a good point. Only celebrities care about not repeating their outfit. What do you wear when you attend parties?

That's true. Regarding it, Steve Jobs is a good example. I want to reduce the time for decision-making as little as possible as he did, so I buy several articles of the same clothes. On special occasions like parties, revealing clothes is my choice.

自然な表現

That's true. Steve Jobs is a good example of that. I want to reduce the time for decision-making as little as possible as he did, so I buy several articles of the same clothes. On special occasions like parties, revealing clothes is my choice.

1. Rewrite for clarity, ''Regarding it'' is not necessary.
  • suit(スーツ)
  • tailor-made jacket(テーラーメードのジャケット)
  • casual wear(カジュアルな服)
  • formal wear(フォーマルな服)
  • the latest trend(最新のトレンド)
  • I often go to the department store to buy clothes.(私はよくデパートに服を買いに行きます。)
  • My wife selects my clothes.((いつも)妻が私の服を選んでくれます。)
  • I like casual clothing so I usually shop at The Gap.(私はカジュアルな服が好きなので、GAPでよく買い物をします。)
  • What kind of clothes do you like?(どんな感じの服装が好きなんですか?)
  • Recently, we've been able to buy clothes at a lower cost.(最近では低価格で服を購入できるようになりました。)
  • I always go to a tailor to help alter my clothes.(私はいつもテイラーにスーツをお願いしている。)

こんな方にオススメ

  • 日常
  • 初級
  • 自己紹介
  • 趣味/好み