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お酒が好きかについて話してみよう
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I used to like drinking. However, I have quitted drinking for a few years because I pay attention my health. How about you?
I used to like drinking. However, I have quit drinking for a few years because I pay attention to my health. How about you?
I often overate salty or fatty foods along with drinking those days. Additionally, I have a constitution that prone to high cholesterol. Therefore, I changed my dietary habits. What is the reason that you rarely drink?
I often overate salty or fatty foods when I was drinking in those days. Additionally, I am prone to having high cholesterol. Therefore, I changed my dietary habits. Why do you rarely drink?
2. This is a more natural expression. The phrase 'have a constitution that prone to' is not natural English.
3. This is the most natural way to ask the question.
I'm dealing with craving by drinking non-alchohol beer. There are various non-alchohol drink. I'm enjoying them even if when I join drinking party.
I deal with my cravings by drinking non-alcoholic beer. There are various non-alcoholic drinks, and I enjoy them even when I attend drinking parties.
2. Used 'my' here for clarity.
3. Since the speaker is referring to cravings in general rather than one specific instance, the plural form "cravings" is more appropriate here.
4, 5. The usual adjective is 'non-alcoholic.'
6. Since the sentence refers to various types of beverages, the plural form "drinks" is grammatically required.
7. This change expresses the idea more clearly and idiomatically. 'Even if when' is incorrect. Use 'even when.' 'Drinking parties' (plural) fits better when speaking generally.
Unfortunately, I've not felt any improvement in my health so far. I expect that it will change eventually.
The frequency joining the drinking party decreased since I had quitted drinking. Especially, I rarely have the opportunities to drink with my colleague recently. However, I'm satisfied because I keep on meeting the closest friends.
The frequency of attending drinking parties has decreased since I quit drinking. In particular, I rarely have opportunities to drink with my colleagues recently. However, I'm satisfied because I still meet with my close friends regularly.
2, 7. “The” is unnecessary in general statements.
3, 8. Use the plural form for general references.
4. Since the sentence describes a change that began in the past and continues to the present (indicated by "since"), the present perfect tense "has decreased" is grammatically required.
5. The past participle of 'quit' is 'quit' in modern English.
6. Both are correct, but 'In particular' fits better when introducing a specific example.
9. This change expresses the idea more clearly and idiomatically. 'Still meet with' better expresses continued contact.
関連単語
- drinking(飲酒)
- champagne(シャンパン)
- tequila(テキーラ)
- whiskey(ウイスキー)
- Japanese sake(日本酒)
関連フレーズ
- I love drinks such as red wine, champagne, tequila, and beer.(私は赤ワイン,シャンパン,テキーラ,ビールといったものを飲みますね。)
- I'm a heavy drinker.(お酒は強い方ですね。)
- I'm a slow drinker.(ちびちび飲む方です。)
- I prefer drinking alone.(ひとり酒が好みです。)
- I like drinking very much.(私はお酒が大好きです。)
- I don't drink alcohol very often.(あまりお酒は飲みません。)
- How much do you usually drink?(どのくらい飲むんですか?)
- I stopped drinking.(お酒はやめました。)
- I'm looking for a wine that will go with Japanese food. (和食に合うワインを探しています。)
- There are many varieties of sake.(我が国には多くの日本酒があります。)
こんな方にオススメ
2. The phrase "pay attention" requires the preposition "to" before its object. Without "to", the sentence is grammatically incomplete.