好きな食べ物について話してみよう

Talking about your favorite food
好きな食べ物について話してみましょう。
好きな食べ物の名前、味、どのようなところが好きか、どのようなときによく食べるかなど、あなたの好きな食べ物について話してみましょう。
What's your favorite food?
 
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What's your favorite food?

I recently have been into rice balls of a rice ball restaurant near my apartment. Their fillings are so unique, and rice itself is delicious. Avtually, I order same fiilings almost everyday, tuna-mayonaise and crea cheese.

自然な表現

I have recently been into rice balls from a rice ball restaurant near my apartment. Their fillings are so unique, and rice itself is delicious. Actually, I order same fillings almost every day, such as tuna-mayonnaise and cream cheese.

1. This is a more natural word order.
2. We tend to use this preposition when we talk about food and restaurants.
3,4,7,8. This is the proper way to spell this word.
5. The word "everyday" is an adjective ("everyday life"), but you need an adverb here.
6. Use conjunctions and linking words to show a logical connection between your thoughts.
Wow! That sounds amazing. I am extremely fond of rice and can have it for both lunch and dinner. What are the other fillings that are available?

They offer many flavor. I can't grasp all kind of their fillings. However, I noticed a sad thing. Honestly, I'm troubled that my physique looks bad, even though I go to the gym and do jogging. To put it specifically, my lower body is big. And after today's lunch, I found it's because of rice balls. I have eaten too much rice!

自然な表現

They offer many flavors. I can't grasp all kinds of their fillings. However, I noticed a sad thing. Honestly, I'm troubled that my physique looks bad, even though I go to the gym and do jogging. To put it specifically, my lower body is big. And after today's lunch, I found it's because of the rice balls. I've eaten too much rice!

1. You need to use plural forms of countable nouns with the quantifier "many".
2. You need to use plural forms of countable nouns with the quantifier "all".
3. You are talking about specific rice balls, so you should use the definite article.
4. It is common to use contracted verb forms in everyday conversations.
I can understand. Too much of anything can be bad. In fact, I was advised to quit eating rice for some time because of my constant cough. Do you plan to cut down on rice balls for now?

 Yes, I do. I will definitely try to have it fewer. By the way, Is your cough due to any kind of allergy? does rice have something to do with a allergy?

自然な表現

Yes, I do. I'll definitely try to order them less frequently. By the way, is your cough due to some kind of allergy? Does rice have something to do with an allergy?

1. It is common to use contracted verb forms in everyday conversations.
2. The construction "try to have it fewer" does not sound natural, so you should use an alternative expression.
3. There is no need to capitalize this word.
4. This is a more natural way to express your thoughts.
5. You need to capitalize the first word of a sentence.
6. You need to use the article form "an" if the next word starts with a spoken vowel.
Hmm, I am not sure if it is an allergy. I have however heard that one should avoid eating rice when one has a cough. Do you like curry and rice?

Yes, I like curry and rice. but for dinner, I don't eat rice but curry sauce like a soup.

自然な表現

Yes, I like curry and rice. Still, for dinner, I don't eat rice but curry sauce like a soup.

1. Avoid starting sentences using the conjunction "but".
Wow! That sounds interesting. Which is your favourite international cuisine? Also, which is the international dish that you like the most?

 I like all international dishes, but if I had to choose the best, I love Italian cuisine the best.

自然な表現

I like all international dishes, but if I had to choose my favorite cuisine, I love Italian food.

1,2. Avoid repeating same words in single sentences if possible.
  • vegetarian(菜食主義者)
  • instant noodles(インスタントラーメン)
  • greasy food(脂っこい食べ物)
  • meat lover(肉が好きな人)
  • be allergic to~(~にアレルギーがある)
  • I'm allergic to fish.(魚アレルギーです。)
  • My favorite food is sukiyaki.(私の好きな食べ物はすき焼きです。)
  • I'm a picky eater.(食にはうるさいほうですよ。)
  • I'm a vegetarian. (私は菜食主義者です。)
  • I can eat just about anything.(私は何でも食べます。)
  • I can't wait to have some noodles.(ラーメンが食べたくて仕方ないです。)
  • I don't like greasy food.(脂っこい食べ物は好きではありません。)

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