腰痛の患者さんを診察してみよう

Examining a patient with backache
あなたは、腰痛を訴える患者さんを診察しています。
腰痛を訴える患者さんを診察しています。腰痛の原因も治療法もさまざまです。患者さんにとって最適な診断をしましょう。
I have a backache. Can you please check it?
 
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I have a backache. Can you please check it?

I didn't diagnose your backache from the appearance.
Can you describe your pain?

自然な表現

I didn't diagnose your backache from the appearance.
Can you describe your pain?

1. These sentences are correct. I will give you an alternative word that you can use. "define."
It is a dull pain that doesn't ease up when I lie down. It is mostly my lower back in the lumbar region that feels the worst.

Have you ever experienced this pain before?
How long have you felt this pain?

自然な表現

Have you ever experienced this pain before?
How long have you felt this pain?

1. These sentences are correct. I will give you an alternative word that you can use. "had."
It often happens after I have taken a long drive with my car. This time it has been going on for about 4 days before I came to you.

Mmmmm, it might come from the atrophy of your muscles relating to your lower back.
In addition, your status when you are driving may not be reasonable.

自然な表現

Mmmmm, it might come from the atrophy of your muscles relating to your lower back.
In addition, your position when you are driving may not be reasonable.

1. The word "position" suits the sentence much better than "status."
2. Maybe the word "good" will suit the sentence much better.
When you say 'status' when I am driving, do you mean my body posture? I do try to keep my spine straight and sit upright, but sometimes I am a bit lazy and forget to do it.

Yes, that's right.
You must be putting pressure on your shoulders when driving, and it affects your lower back.
Then, you are not able to keep a good posture.

自然な表現

Yes, that's right.
You must be putting pressure on your shoulders when driving, and it affects your lower back.
Then, you are not able to keep a good posture.

1. These sentences are correct. I will offer you an alternative word instead of this phrase. "affecting."
Oh, I see. That might be one of the reasons. I sometimes slouch, that's why. What should I do then?

The bone must not be a problem. However, for the records, I will take an x-ray, and then we'll have the results.
The discussion will start after that.
Anyway, I guess a periodical massage may positively affect you.

自然な表現

The bone must not be a problem. However, for the records, I will take an x-ray, and then we'll have the results.
The discussion will start after that.
Anyway, I guess a periodical massage may positively affect you.

1. These sentences are correct. You can also use the phrase "is probably not."
2. You can use "think" also.
  • cause(原因)
  • spine(背骨)
  • muscle strain(肉離れ)
  • spinal nerve(脊髄神経)
  • tumor(腫瘍)
  • When lifting something that is too heavy, remember to lift from the knees.(重いものを持ち上げるときは、膝から持ち上げることを忘れずに。)
  • Can you describe your pain?(どのような痛みか教えてください)
  • Are you taking any medication?(なにか薬を服用していますか?)
  • Have you ever experienced this pain before?(この痛みを感じるのは初めてですか?)
  • The doctor will take an x-ray and then we'll have the results.(先生がレントゲンを撮ってくれて、その結果が出ます。)

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