無料体験レッスンレッスン詳細
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Are you OK? You look pale. As we've already finished today's meeting and disscusued about details of a coming big event. You should go home and take a rest today. Don't worry about everything. I can handle it.
Are you OK? You look pale. As we've already finished today's meeting and discussed _ the details of the upcoming big event, you should go home and take a rest today. Don't worry about anything. I can handle it.
Thank you for your consideration. I'll ask our boss to help your assigment. By the way, do you drink much water? Accoding to the wather report, the high temputure is 37 degree outside. In order to avoid a heat stroke and dehydration, you could drink rehydration solution.
Thank you for your consideration. I'll ask our boss to help with your assignment. By the way, do you drink much water? According to the weather report, the high temperature is 37 degrees outside. In order to avoid _ heat stroke and dehydration, you should drink a rehydration solution.
2. Corrected the spelling error. "Assigment" is incorrect; the correct spelling is "assignment."
3. Fixed the spelling error. The correct spelling is "according."
4. Corrected the spelling mistake. "Wather" should be "weather."
5. Corrected the spelling error. The correct word is "temperature."
6. "Degrees" should be in plural when referring to temperature (e.g., "37 degrees").
7. The phrase "heat stroke" is an uncountable noun in this medical context and should not be preceded by "a."
8. "Could" suggests weak possibility or option, while "should" gives helpful advice, which fits better in a health warning.
9. Added "a" before "rehydration solution" to make it grammatically complete, since we're referring to a type or unit of solution.
Oh, good idea! I will reserve a new venue to prepare this weekend party. How about at 8 A.M? I know a good place. There are some green curtains of shade-producing plants such as bitter melon and morning glories. It can be fun activity.
Oh, good idea! I will reserve a new venue to prepare for this weekend's party. How about _ 8 a.m.? I know a good place. There are some green curtains made of shade-producing plants such as bitter melon and morning glories. It can be a fun activity.
2. Added the possessive form "weekend's" to clarify that the party belongs to or occurs during the weekend.
3. Removed "at" because it's not necessary after "How about" when referring to time.
4. Lowercased "A.M." to "a.m.", which is the standard style in modern usage.
5. "Curtains of plants" is understandable but unnatural. "Made of" clearly explains that the curtains consist of these plants.
6. Added the article "a" before "fun activity" for correct grammar. Countable nouns like "activity" require an article when singular.
関連単語
- prescription（処方箋）
- symptoms（症状）
- a day off（休日）
- take a medicine after meals（食後に薬を飲む）
- over-the-counter drugs（市販薬）
関連フレーズ
- Is there anything I can do for you?（ほかに何か御用はございませんか？）
- Hello, I would like to make a doctor's appointment.（こんにちは、診察の予約をしたいのですが。）
- I hope it will get better.（早く良くなるといいですね）
- I will be talking to my supervisor about what we should do next.（次はどうしたらいいのか、上司に相談してみます。）
- They might need to take your temperature as a safety precaution.（安全のために体温を測る必要があるかもしれません。）
こんな方にオススメ
2. "Discuss" is a transitive verb and does not require the preposition "about." The correct structure is "discuss + noun."
3. Added "the" to specify which details (those of the event).
4. "A coming big event" is grammatically understandable but unnatural. "Upcoming" is the more natural adjective here, and "the" specifies a particular event that both the speaker and listener know about.
5. A comma is needed to separate the dependent clause from the main clause for clarity and correct punctuation.
6. "Don't worry about everything" implies the person should worry about nothing at all, but "anything" is more idiomatic and appropriate in a negative sentence. In English, negatives like "don't" are typically paired with "anything" instead of "everything."