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I watched the North London Derby: football match Arsenal vs Tottenham. Before the game, I was really excited because both are very good form in last 5 matches. In first half, Arsenal dominated the game and scored first, but in the end of the first half, Tottenham equalized the score. After the break, Arsenal scored again, but surprisingly, Spurs make it 2-2 in one minute!! After that Spurs got the upper hand over on the game. Finally, this game ended up 2-2. Now, I'm looking forward to the next derby match!
I watched the North London Derby: Arsenal vs. Tottenham. Before the game, I was really excited because both were in very good form in the last five matches. In the first half, Arsenal dominated the game and scored first, but Tottenham evened up the score in the end . After the break, Arsenal scored again, but surprisingly, Spurs made it 2-2 in one minute!! After that, Spurs got the upper hand over the game. Finally, this game ended up 2-2. Now, I'm looking forward to the next derby match!
Oh, sorry, I didn't say I watched it on TV. To get the tickets should be harder than several years ago. By the way, the ticket to watch the game on the TV was 2,000yen!
Oh, sorry, I didn't say I watched it on TV. Getting the tickets should be harder now than several years ago. By the way, I paid 2,000 yen to watch the game on TV!
Kaoru Mitoma is in the team!! I like to see their style! It can be happened up to other team's conditions!! But I'm sorry I'm a Mancity fan,so it's a easy question for me. City will win the title four in a row. It will be a historical event. Except for City, I want Newcastle, Aston Villa, Westham to win, but it will be very difficult for them because they don't have enough squad to compete with big clubs.
Kaoru Mitoma is in the team!! I like to see their play! It depends on the other team's conditions!! I'm sorry, but I'm a Man City fan, so it's an easy question . Man City will win the title four times in a row. It will be a historical event. Except for Man City, I want Newcastle, Aston Villa, and Westham to win, but it will be very difficult for them because they don't have enough squad to compete with big clubs.
2. Use "depend on" to mean to be determined by something.
3. Add a comma before a conjunction that joins two independent clauses.
4. The conjunction comes between clauses.
5, 8, and 10. This is the correct term.
6. Use "an" since the next word starts with a vowel sound.
7. Remove these words because they are redundant.
9. Add "times" to mean the number of occasions.
11. Use “and” just before the last item to indicate the conclusion of the list.
Liverpool is always menace for us in recent years! Of course Liverpool, Arsenal can be a champions this year.
My most favorite player was Sergio Aguero. He is not tall compared to other Premier League players, like Japanese, but he did the best job in the City for ten years. For example, he is a most scoring foreign player in the PL. In addition, he changed his style as he got older. It's a very attractive point of him.
I like Laporte, Mahrez, but they have gone to Saudi. In current squad, I like KDB the best.
Liverpool has always been a menace for us in recent years! Of course, Liverpool and Arsenal can be champions this year.
My favorite player was Sergio Aguero. He's not tall compared to other Premier League players, like Japanese, but he did the best job in Man City for ten years. For example, he's the most-scoring foreign player in the PL. In addition, he changed his style as he got older. It's a very attractive point for him.
I like Laporte and Mahrez, but they have gone to Saudi. In the current squad, I love KDB the best.
3. Use "a/an" before singular and nonspecified nouns.
4. Add a comma after "of course."
5 and 14. Do not use a comma to join two list items. Use "and" instead.
6. Omit a/an before plural nouns.
7. Remove this word because it is redundant.
8 and 10. Contract these words to sound more casual and natural.
9. This is the correct term.
11. "the + est/most"
12. Hyphenate compound adjectives that come before the noun.
13. Use "for" to express the receiver of the action.
15. Use "the" when an adjective describing the noun clarifies its identity.
16. Use "love" to avoid repetition.
It is the most interesting topic in football. I don't disagree with Saudi Arabia, but they can ruin modern football culture by their huge budget. It's also applied to my supporting team, Mancity. They showed football is not only for Europe. This movement may carry football a new stage.
It's the most interesting topic in football. I don't disagree with Saudi Arabia, but they can ruin modern football culture with their huge budget. It's also applied to my supporting team, Man City. They showed football isn't only for Europe. This move may carry football to a new stage.
関連単語
- fanatic（熱狂的ファン）
- loyal（忠実な、堅実な）
- following（下記）
- excite（興奮する）
- shout（叫ぶ）
関連フレーズ
- I don't like baseball, but I like football.（私は野球が好きではありません。でもフットボールなら好きなんですよ。）
- The game was exciting.（その試合はわくわくさせるものでした。）
- My favorite sport is ~.（私の大好きなスポーツは~です。）
- I like to watch and play soccer.（サッカーを見るのもプレーするのも好きです。）
- I like the Hawks because the team is located near my hometown. （ホークスが好きなのは、チームが私の故郷の近くにあるからです。日本で最も有名で名誉ある作家の一人です。 ）
- I felt disappointed at the result of the game.（私は試合の結果にがっかりでしたよ。）
こんな方にオススメ
2. This is the correct term.
3 and 11. Use the past tense to avoid a faulty tense sequence.
4. "in + form"
5 and 7. Use "the" when an adjective describing the noun clarifies its identity.
6. Numbers smaller than 11 should be spelled out.
8. Use "even up" to mean to become equal.
9. Put these words here for fluency and avoid using too many commas.
12. Add a comma after introductory words.