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読み終わった本の感想を説明してみましょう。あなたが記載した回答に対して、この後講師がどんどん質問していきます。
読書した本の感想について語ってみましょう。面白い、面白くない以外にも共感できたところやそうでないところも盛り込むことで会話が広がります。
You finally finished it? How was it?
 
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You finally finished it? How was it?

I read "Sapiens: A Brief History of Humankind" by Yuval Noah Harari. This book is a New York Times bestseller. I'm afraid I must disagree with the author at many points, but I learned new knowledge from the book. Spaniards brought tomatoes, chili peppers, and cocoa from Mexico to other region regions in the Age of Discovery. The Aztecs in Mexico felt the Spaniards stank horribly because Native hygiene was very advanced. Aluminum was more expensive than gold until the end of the nineteenth century. Napoleon employed aluminum cutlery for his important guests.

自然な表現

I read "Sapiens: A Brief History of Humankind" by Yuval Noah Harari. This book is a New York Times bestseller. I'm afraid I must disagree with the author at many points, but I learned new information from the book. Spaniards brought tomatoes, chili peppers, and cocoa from Mexico to other    regions in the Age of Discovery. The Aztecs in Mexico felt the Spaniards stank horribly because native hygiene was very advanced. Aluminum was more expensive than gold until the end of the nineteenth century. Napoleon used aluminum cutlery for his important guests.

1. More conversational alternative: "I did learn new things from the book"
2. "Knowledge" is not a good word choice. "Information" or "things" are better choices.
3. Repeated word.
4. Generally, only proper nouns and the first word of a sentence are capitalized.
5. "Employ" is not the best choice when referring to objects. Use "used" instead.
It sounds like "Sapiens: A Brief History of Humankind" gave you a lot to think about. Can you share one point where you disagreed with the author?

I can't support his idea about the relationship between chimpanzees and humans or his description of World War 2. However, I agree that he depicts the correlation between money and well-being well. The book's first half irritated me a bit, but the second half was so interesting because there are some points I can approve of.

自然な表現

I can't support his idea about the relationship between chimpanzees and humans or his description of World War 2. However, I agree that he depicts the correlation between money and well-being well. The book's first half irritated me a bit, but the second half was so interesting because there are some points I can approve of.

1. Alternative: nevertheless/nonetheless
2. Alternative: his depiction of/his portrayal of
It’s great that the second half of the book was more engaging for you. What aspects of the second half did you find most compelling or agreeable?

I should have said that I liked his introduction to some study rather than agreed with him. He doesn't state his opinions about that matter. A chapter describes some approaches to how people determine happiness. Philosophers found that happiness depends on the gaps between objective realities and subjective expectations. Biologists concluded happiness is determined by biochemistry. Buddhism and some religions tell knowing thyself is happiness. Also, some people suggest having a way to live brings us happiness, as Nietzsche put it. Also, a study shows that money brings happiness, but social, ethical, and spiritual factors more greatly contribute to it.

自然な表現

I should have said that I liked his introduction to some studies rather than agreed with him. He doesn't state his opinions. A chapter describes some approaches to how people determine happiness. Philosophers found that happiness depends on the gaps between objective realities and subjective expectations. Biologists concluded happiness is determined by biochemistry. Buddhism and some religions believe that knowing thyself is happiness. Also, some people suggest having a way to live brings us happiness, as Nietzsche put it. Also, a study shows that money brings happiness, but social, ethical, and spiritual factors more greatly contribute to it.

1. Use "some" with plural nouns.
2. "That matter" refers to something specific that was mentioned previously but you didn't specify this. It's better to remove this to make the statement generalized to the whole book.
3. "Believe" is a better word choice.
4. "That" is commonly used to introduce a noun clause and also commonly follows the word "believe".
5. Alternative: "There is also a study that shows..." ("Furthermore" is a common alternative to "also" but it's better to vary your constructions)
  • monotonous(単調である)
  • highlight(~を強調する)
  • describe(~を表現する,表す)
  • depict(~を描写する)
  • contents(内容)
  • a [long/short] story(長編/短編もの)
  • a plot(すじがき,あらすじ)
  • an author(著者)
  • The novel I read was boring because the story was uninteresting.(読んだ小説はつまんなかったのよ。ストーリーが単調でね。)
  • He is one of the most famous and honored writers in Japan.(彼は日本で最も有名で名誉ある作家の一人です。)
  • I was inspired by this novel.(私はこの小説に感銘をうけました。)
  • It took a lot of time for me to finish reading this book.(この本を読み終えるのにかなり時間がかかりました。)
  • I especially like this part. (私は特にこの部分が気に入っています。)
  • I think the author should have focused on the main character a bit more.(作者はもう少し主人公に焦点を当てるべきだったと思います。)

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