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Yes, the book is written in English. The title is called ''Harry Potter. I think all the people in the world know this. And most people have watched this movie.
Yes, the book is written in English. The title is ''Harry Potter. I think all the people in the world know this and most people have watched this movie.
I have read that book many times. By reading these books, I can notice the new things that I couldn't discover when I watch a movie. Also there are books written in English and it must be not so easy to read. I want to try it someday.
I have read that book many times. By reading these books, I can notice the new things that I didn't notice when I watched the movie. Also, there are books written in English and they must be not so easy to read. I want to try it someday.
2. The word "also" is an introductory word and place a comma to mark the end of the introductory word and the beginning of the main part of the sentence.
3. The best pronoun to use is "they" which is in plural form since we are talking about "books".
As you know, there are a lot movies for Harry Potter series. I have watched these movies many times, but there were some points that I couldn't understand completely.
Why I choose harry Potter is that situation in Harry Potter is near to our world now although it is fantasy. For example, in Harry Potter there are regulations and schools to be able to learn magic all over the world. These are the things that makes Harry Potter real.
Also I think most children dream to be able to use magic. Harry Potter make it realistic things.
As you know, there are a lot of movies for the Harry Potter series. I have watched these movies many times, but there were some points that I couldn't understand completely.
Why I chose Harry Potter is that the situation in Harry Potter is similar to our world now although it is fantasy. For example, in Harry Potter, there are regulations and schools where people can learn magic all over the world. These are the things that make Harry Potter real.
Also, I think most children have the dream to be able to use magic. Harry Potter makes realistic things.
2. A better and more natural way of phrasing this sentence.
3. Rewrite this phrase in order to correct the wrong word order.
4. Spelling correction.
5. The word "also" is an introductory word and place a comma to mark the end of the introductory word and the beginning of the main part of the sentence.
6. Add the phrase "have the dream" to correct the wrong word order in this phrase.
7. The natural expression is "makes realistic".
I want to be able to fly really fast.
For example, when I wake up late in the morning on the school day, I can reach my school in time if I can fly really fast.
Also if I can fly, I can travel abroad easily without money.
And people who can can fly must be really cool.
I want to be able to fly really fast.
For example, when I wake up late in the morning on a school day, I can reach my school in time if I can fly really fast.
Also, if I can fly, I can travel abroad easily without money.
People who can fly must be really cool.
2. The word "also" is an introductory word and place a comma to mark the end of the introductory word and the beginning of the main part of the sentence.
3. The word "and" is a conjunction and cannot begin a sentence.
4. You have repeated the word "can" in this phrase and you should remove the other "can".
関連単語
- a novel(小説)
- an essay(随筆,エッセー)
- improve(~を上達させる)
- reading(読書)
- interesting(面白い)
- boring(つまらない)
- a long story(長編)
- a short story(短編)
関連フレーズ
- I heard that reading is the best way to improve one's English skills.(読むということは英語力を上げる最良の方法と聞きました。)
- This novel is a collection of short stories from famous authors.(この小説は有名な作家の短篇集なんですよ。)
- This book is [easy / hard] to read.(この本は読みやすい/読みにくいです。)
- I think it's difficult for me to read.(自分には読むのが難しいと思うんです。)
- This novel is a hit among younger people.(これは若者の中で売れ筋の小説です。)
- The book has 212 pages.(本は212ページあります。)
- I have a limited vocabulary, so I have to study words and phrases. (私はあまり語彙力がないので単語やフレーズを学ぶ必要があります。)
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2. The word "and" is a conjunction and cannot be used to begin a sentence, rather, it joins two parts of a sentence together.