好きな音楽について話してみよう

Talking about music
どんな音楽が好きか説明してみましょう。
あなたはどんな音楽が好きですか? 好きな音楽のジャンルやアーティストについて説明してみましょう!
What kind of music do you like?
 
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What kind of music do you like?

I like Japanese R&B music, especially, the Japanese men's R&B group, Full Of Harmony. They released a new song at midnight today, I waited for it just in time, then I downloaded and listened to the song "Flower", so I could go to bed happy.

自然な表現

I like Japanese R&B music, especially the Japanese men's R&B group, Full Of Harmony. They released a new song at midnight today, I waited for it just in time, and then I downloaded and listened to the song "Flower", so I could go to bed happy.

1. Removed the comma after "especially": The comma was unnecessary because "especially" introduces a specific example, not a pause.
2. You can also say, "anticipated it".
3. Added "and" for a better flow.
4. You can also say, "track".
Oh, that song flower, really sounds like a song that will make you go to bed happy. What is the song about? I also enjoy R&B too.

The lyrics of this song are about the main character who had some good times with his girlfriend, but they had to part ways, but the flowers by the window were always watching over them.

自然な表現

The lyrics of this song are about the main character who had some good times with his girlfriend, but they had to part ways. Despite this, the flowers by the window were always watching over them.

1. You can also say, "verses".
2. You can also say, "protagonist".
3. Changed "but" to "Despite this": The original sentence used "but" twice, making it a run-on sentence. Breaking it into two sentences improves clarity. The phrase "Despite this" helps contrast the parting with the ongoing presence of the flowers.
That sounds like a beautiful and emotional song. Do you think the song brings out more feelings of sadness or hope? What's another favorite song from Full Of Harmony?

I feel more sadness than hope from this song. However, also I feel we must be honest and be positive.

自然な表現

I feel more sadness than hope from this song. However, also I feel we must be honest and   positive.

1. You can also say, "sorrow".
2. You can also say, "optimism".
3. You can also say, "truthful".
4. Removed "be" to avoid redundancy.
5. You can also say, "encouraging"
  • classical music(クラッシック音楽)
  • rock music(ロック)
  • X times a [year / month / day]([一年/一ヶ月/一日]につきX回)
  • on the radio(ラジオで)
  • on TV(テレビで)
  • on Youtube(youtubeで)
  • I love to listen to classical music.(私はクラッシックを聞くのが好きです。)
  • I often listen to pop music such as ~.(~といったポップミュージックをよく聞きます。)
  • I've been collecting a lot of CDs since I was a student.(学生の頃からCDをたくさん集めています。)
  • I not only listen to music but I also go to concerts.(音楽を聴くだけでなく、コンサートにも行きます。)
  • Anyway, you should try listening to this genre.(とりあえず君もこのジャンルを試しに聞いてみなよ。)
  • I go to concerts about ten times a year.(年に10回ほどコンサートに行きます。)
  • I like to watch DVDs.(私はDVDを見るのが好きです。)

こんな方にオススメ

  • 日常
  • 初級
  • 自己紹介
  • 趣味/好み