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行ってきた旅行について話してみよう

Talking about traveling
行ってきた旅行について説明してみましょう。
旅行の話題は話を広げやすいと思います。今まで学んだ基本表現を使いつつ、気持ちを表現してみましょう。
Welcome back! How was your trip?
 
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Welcome back! How was your trip?

Now, I'm in Malta Island. It's ninth day today. I brought some books to study during this staying, but I can't focus on it. Every day has been so challenging for me that I don't feel like studying anything actually.

自然な表現

Now, I'm on Malta Island. It's the ninth day today. I brought some books to study during my stay, but I can't focus on them. Every day has been so challenging for me that I don't feel like studying at all actually.

1. Should use 'on' with island, 'in' with country.
2. Should use definite article to refer to a specific day.
3. This is a more natural phrasing.
4. Should use 'them' to refer to the books.
5. This is a more natural phrasing, in any way.
That sounds tough, but it’s okay to take a break from studying while you're traveling. What has been the most challenging part of your trip so far?

Every thing! Taking buses and boats, having meals, going to grocery stores. I have gotten lost many times. When I get some local transportation, my heart pounds wondering if it will take me right place. However, I think I have been doing well so far. I'm proud of myself.

自然な表現

Everything! Taking buses and boats, having meals, going to grocery stores. I have gotten lost many times. When I take some local transportation, my heart pounds wondering if it will take me to the right place. However, I think I have been doing well so far. I'm proud of myself.

1. Should be one word.
2. Better word choice, use public transportation.
3. 'to' is needed to express a location, should use definite article to refer to a specific place you are going to.
It sounds like you’ve been really brave, especially with all the challenges! Do you have any more plans for the rest of your trip?

I'm thinking of visiting a small island, but I had too many new experiences today. I enjoyed them, but at the same time, I got strangely tense. It was strange weather day today, like thunder and strong raining intermittently, neverthless I got a small boat to visit an old city. Now I feel like relaxing before new adventure.

自然な表現

I'm thinking of visiting a small island, but I had too many new experiences today. I enjoyed them, but at the same time, I got strangely tense. The weather was strange today, with thunder and heavy rain intermittently. Nevertheless I took a small boat to visit an old city. Now I feel like relaxing before a new adventure.

1. your expression was rephrased to sound more natural.
2. Better wording 'heavy rain'. Another expression: 'it was raining heavily'.
3. Correct spelling.
4. This is a better word choice, take a train, boat, etc.
5. Article is needed with 'adventure'.
It sounds like you had quite an adventurous day! Do you think you’ll visit the small island tomorrow or take some more time to rest?

I haven't decided yet. Actually, I have decided "what to do" and "where to go" on the morning of the day during this trip. When I get up tomorrow morning, If I dont feel like doing anything, I would be just chill.

自然な表現

I haven't decided yet. Actually, I have decided "what to do" and "where to go" on the morning of each day during this trip. When I get up tomorrow morning, If I don't feel like doing anything, I will just chill.

1. Should use 'each' here, every day.
2. Apostrophe is needed for contraction.
3. Should use future simple for what you will do tomorrow.
That sounds like a nice way to travel, keeping things flexible! What’s been your favorite part of the trip so far?

My favorite part is being able to reach the place I want to go on my own using google maps! I bought a 7days unlimited bus travel card. I'm making the best of this.

自然な表現

My favorite part is being able to reach the place I want to go on my own using google maps! I bought a 7-day unlimited bus pass. I'm making the most of my trip.

1. Should use adjective form.
2. 'bus pass' is most commonly used.
3. Your expression was rephrased to sound more natural.

関連単語

  • fantastic（すばらしい）
  • railroad trip（鉄道旅行）
  • a solitary journey（一人旅）
  • by plane（飛行機で）
  • for the first time in my life（人生初の）
  • a sightseeing spot（観光スポット）
  • an outlook（視野）
  • region（地域）
  • a prefecture（県）
  • an area（地域）
  • local people（地元の人々）

関連フレーズ

  • The trip was fantastic.（旅行はとってもよかったよ。）
  • I went on a railroad trip.（電車に乗って行ってきました。）
  • This was my first plane trip.（今回はじめて飛行機に乗りました。）
  • I traveled abroad for the first time in my life.（人生で初めて海外旅行に行ってきました。）
  • I went to some famous sightseeing spots such as the Eiffel Tower.（エッフェル塔などの有名な観光地にも行きました。）
  • Through my trip, I broadened my outlook.（今回の旅で、私は自分の視野を広げることができました。）

こんな方にオススメ

  • 日常
  • 初級
  • 自己紹介
  • 最近の出来事