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I'd like to discuss the idea that advertising harmful substances such as alcohol and tobacco should be more heavily restricted. In my opinion, there should be heavier regulations for advertising such products. The primary reason is that younger childeren are easily affected by such advertisements on TV and smartphones, potentially leading them to bad health and reduced learning ability. What do you think about this problem?
I'd like to discuss the idea that advertising harmful substances such as alcohol and tobacco should be more heavily restricted. In my opinion, there should be stricter regulations for advertising such products. The primary reason is that younger children are easily affected by such advertisements on TV and smartphones, potentially leading them to poor health and reduced learning ability. What do you think about this problem?
I have no doubt that community programs, such as drinking and smoking prevemtion classes or parental guidance, have positive effects on them. Helps from adults around children is essential for these education.
I have no doubt that community programs, such as drinking and smoking prevention classes or parental guidance, have positive effects on them. Help from adults around children is essential for this education.
This corrects a spelling error. The correct spelling is "prevention" with an "n" before the "t."
2. "Helps" → "Help"
"Help" is the correct uncountable noun form. "Helps" as a plural noun is nonstandard; "help" remains singular when referring to assistance in general.
3. "these education" → "this education"
"Education" is an uncountable noun that requires the singular demonstrative "this," not the plural "these."
Reviwing the contents of a textbook and curriculum of schools is good as a first step. It would also be beneficial to change the format
of classes, such as by having public health nurses and doctors participate, or by switching to active learning to provide opportunities for students to think for themselves.
Reviewing the contents of textbooks and curricula of schools is good as a first step. It would also be beneficial to change the format of classes, such as by having public health nurses and doctors participate, or by switching to active learning to provide opportunities for students to think for themselves.
This corrects a spelling error. The correct spelling is "reviewing" with an "e" after the "i."
2,3. "a textbook" → "textbooks"
The plural "textbooks" is more appropriate since schools use multiple textbooks across different subjects, making the statement more comprehensive and realistic.
4. "curriculum" → "curricula"
The plural "curricula" matches with "textbooks" and is more accurate since schools have multiple curricula for different subjects and grade levels.
Particularly, storytelling has most powerful impact on telling children danger of harmful substances. If possible, someone who have overcome the addiction of those dangerous substances should participate in the class.
In particular, storytelling has the most powerful impact on explaining to children the dangers of harmful substances. If possible, someone who has overcome addiction to those dangerous substances should participate in the class.
"In particular" is more formal and appropriate for this context. It's the standard phrase for emphasizing a specific point in academic or serious discussions.
2. "most powerful impact" → "the most powerful impact"
The definite article "the" is required before superlatives like "most powerful" to make the phrase grammatically correct and natural.
3,4. "telling children danger" → "explaining to children the dangers"
"Explaining to children" is more natural than "telling children," and "the dangers" (plural with article) is grammatically correct and more comprehensive than "danger."
5,6. "who have overcome the addiction of" → "who has overcome addiction to"
The singular "has" agrees with "someone," and "addiction to" is the correct preposition. "The addiction of" is grammatically awkward and unnatural.
I guess that it is difficult for children to strongly determine not to take harmful substances in the future, but they could image clearly the negative effect.
I guess that it is difficult for children to make a strong determination not to take harmful substances in the future, but they could imagine clearly the negative effects.
"Strongly determine" uses an adverb with a verb awkwardly. "Make a strong determination" is the natural noun phrase construction for expressing a firm decision.
2. "image" → "imagine"
"Image" is a noun, but the context requires the verb "imagine" to express the mental action of visualizing or picturing something.
3. "effect" → "effects"
The plural "effects" is more appropriate since harmful substances typically have multiple negative consequences, making the statement more comprehensive and accurate.
関連単語
- manage to do~（なんとか~する）
- listen to~（~を聞く）
- to some degree（ある程度は）
- a little bit（ちょっとだけ）
- a pronunciation lesson（発音の授業）
- a speaking lesson（会話の授業）
- keep a diary（日記をつける）
関連フレーズ
- I have been listening to the news in English on BBC for three months.（3ヶ月前からBBCの英語のニュースを聞いています。）
- I can speak English to some degree if I speak slowly.（ゆっくり話せば、ある程度の英語は話せます。）
- I have been studying English for almost 6 years.（6年間英語を勉強しています。）
- People can't continue doing something for a long period without relaxing and having fun.（人は何かをするときには、リラックスしたり楽しんだりしないと、長く続けることはできません。）
- I started studying English again last October.（私は10月からまた英語の勉強を始めました。）
- I've been taking online lessons for more than nine months.（私は9ヶ月以上オンラインでの授業を受けています。）
- I've been writing a diary in English for ten months now.（私は10ヶ月間英語で日記を書いています。）
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"Stricter regulations" is the standard expression when discussing tighter rules or controls. "Heavier regulations" is unnatural and not commonly used in this context.
2. "childeren" → "children"
This corrects a spelling error. The correct spelling is "children" with an "i" before the "d."
3. "bad health" → "poor health"
"Poor health" is the standard medical and formal expression. "Bad health" sounds informal and is less commonly used in serious discussions about health issues.