今日あったことについて話してみよう

Talking about your day
今日の出来事を話してみましょう。
今日はどのようなことがありましたか?印象に残っている出来事を話してみましょう。
How was your day today?
 
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How was your day today?

My husband started learning pickleball, and he gave me a paddle and suggested I play it, too. There is a space in front of my apartment building, where cars not allowed to drive and bikes hardly ride. I tried to play pickleball with my husband in this space. I had a great fun and decided to take it up.

自然な表現

My husband started learning pickleball, and he gave me a paddle and suggested I play it, too. There is a space in front of my apartment building, where cars are not allowed   and bikes rarely pass through. I tried to play pickleball with my husband in this space. I had a lot of fun and decided to take it up.

1. Verb 'are' is needed here.
2. 'drive' was removed since people drive cars, cars don't drive themselves. Just 'cars are not allowed' implies that people are not allowed to drive cars there.
3. This is a more natural phrasing in this context since people ride bicycles.
4. 'lot of fun' is more natural and is most commonly used.
It’s great that you and your husband can enjoy it together, especially with such a convenient space right outside your apartment. Do you think you’ll stick with it and maybe even join a local group or play regularly?

I intends to take pickleball lessons the same as my husband. I used to play tennis, but I quit many years ago. Now, it is too tough for me to play it. Pickleball is easier for everyone to play. Compared to tennis, the courts are smaller, and the paddles are lighter than tennis rackets. The balls are lighter, and the bounds are softer. Even seniors find it easy to take up.

自然な表現

I intend to take pickleball lessons the same as my husband. I used to play tennis, but I quit many years ago. Now, it is too tough for me to play it. Pickleball is easier for everyone to play. Compared to tennis, the courts are smaller, and the paddles are lighter than tennis rackets. The balls are lighter, and the bounces are softer. Even seniors find it easy to take up.

1. You should use the base form 'intend' with pronoun 'I'.
2. This is the correct word choice in this context to describe how the ball moves after hitting the ground.
Pickleball really is more accessible than tennis, especially for people getting back into sports after a break. It’s awesome that your tennis background might give you a bit of an edge, too! Do you know when your lessons will start, or are you still looking for a coach or group nearby?

Anyway, I booked a trial lesson of the school that my husband go. My husband has been tennis for many years, and in pickleball he would be much better than me. However, he also just started, so the difference of our skill levels is much less than it of tennis. I want to enjoy it with my husband.

自然な表現

Anyway, I booked a trial lesson at the school that my husband goes to. My husband played tennis for many years, and in pickleball he is much better than me. However, he also just started, so the difference in our skill levels is much less than it is in tennis. I want to enjoy it with my husband.

1. 'at' should be used to indicate a location.
2. 'goes' should be used after singular subject, 'to' is needed here, goes to school.
3. 'played' should be used here, play sports.
4. 'is' should be used to express a fact.
5. Preposition 'in' should be used to express a difference
6. 'it is' was added to refer to the difference in the tennis skills.
  • a farewell party(送別会)
  • a welcome party(歓迎会)
  • a former colleague(かつての同僚)
  • presentation(発表、プレゼンテーション)
  • club activities(部活)
  • excursion(小旅行、遠足)
  • ordinarily(いつものように)
  • We had a farewell party.(送別会をした。)
  • I went to the bar and had three beers.(パーに行ってビールを3杯飲んできたところよ。)
  • I went for a drink with my former colleague.(かつての同僚と飲んできたんだよ。)
  • I went to the gym and swam in the pool.(ジムで泳いで来たんですよ。)
  • I felt better after going to the bar.(飲み屋に行ったら気分が晴れました。)

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  • 日常
  • 初級
  • 自己紹介
  • 最近の出来事