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今日あったことについて話してみよう

Talking about your day
今日の出来事を話してみましょう。
今日はどのようなことがありましたか？印象に残っている出来事を話してみましょう。
How was your day today?
 
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How was your day today?

I have day off today because I have to take care of my third daughter. Today is the last day of the school so the nursery school is also closed. The teachers have to prepare the new chemist for school.

自然な表現

I have the day off today because I have to care for my third daughter. Today is the last day of    school, so the nursery school is also closed. The teachers have to prepare for the new semester of school.

1. The definite article "the" was added to refer to a specific "day off".
2. The definite article "the" is not necessary when referring to "school" in a general sense.
3. The comma was added to separate the independent clauses in the sentence.
4. The preposition "for" is correct here. It is commonly used after the verb "prepare".
5. the preposition "of" is correct here to indicate possession or association.
That is a busy but special day! I hope you’re enjoying the time with your daughter. How are you spending the day together?

We went to the shopping malls and buy some items at MUJI. They offer sales about 10 percents off.

自然な表現

We went to the shopping mall and bought some items at MUJI. They were offering a sale with about 10 percent off.

1. "mall" is correct in singular since a specific shopping mall is being mentioned.
2. "bought" is in the correct verb tense (the past simple) that maintains the parallels structure with "went".
3. "were offering" maintains the past tense and indicates an ongoing action at the time of the shopping trip.
4. "a sale with" was introduced to improve clarity and sentence structure.
5. Singular "percent" is correct when referring to multiple percentage points.
 That sounds like a nice shopping trip! I’m not familiar with MUJI—what kind of store is it, and what do they sell? Did you find anything interesting there?

We can buy snacks, home goods, food, stationery, trip organizers, fashions, and interiors. Yes, I bought maybe 5 goods

自然な表現

We can buy snacks, home goods, food, stationery, trip organizers, fashion items, and interior goods there. Yes, I bought about five items.

1. "Items" and "goods" were added for clarity.
3. The adverb "there" was added to refer to a specific place or location where the items can be purchased.
4. "about" is more appropriate when estimating quantity.
5. Numbers 0-9 should be spelled in written English.
6. "Items" is a more appropriate expression in this context.

関連単語

  • a farewell party（送別会）
  • a welcome party（歓迎会）
  • a former colleague（かつての同僚）
  • presentation（発表、プレゼンテーション）
  • club activities（部活）
  • excursion（小旅行、遠足）
  • ordinarily（いつものように）

関連フレーズ

  • We had a farewell party.（送別会をした。）
  • I went to the bar and had three beers.（パーに行ってビールを3杯飲んできたところよ。）
  • I went for a drink with my former colleague.（かつての同僚と飲んできたんだよ。）
  • I went to the gym and swam in the pool.（ジムで泳いで来たんですよ。）
  • I felt better after going to the bar.（飲み屋に行ったら気分が晴れました。）

こんな方にオススメ

  • 日常
  • 初級
  • 自己紹介
  • 最近の出来事