今日あったことについて話してみよう

Talking about your day
今日の出来事を話してみましょう。
今日はどのようなことがありましたか?印象に残っている出来事を話してみましょう。
How was your day today?
 
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How was your day today?

On Saturdays, I often go to my friend's private clinic to help him out. I usually take the train there. The train usually isn't crowded, but there were a lot of travelers with large suitcases. Then, I realized that the summer holiday period called "obon" had started .

自然な表現

On Saturdays, I often go to my friend's private clinic to help him out. I usually take the train there. The train usually isn't crowded, but there were a lot of travelers with large suitcases. Then, I realized that the summer holiday period called "obon" had started.

1. Here is an alternative expression. "usually".
2. There should be no space between a sentence and its ending punctuation, whether that's a period, a question mark, or an exclamation mark. There should also be no space before a colon, semicolon, or comma.
It must have been easy to notice that Obon had started with so many travelers carrying large suitcases. I hope your trip to the clinic went smoothly. What do you usually do during Obon when you have some free time?

I sometimes used to go to my parents' home during Obon when I had some free time, but no one lives there now. My father passed away last December and my mother lives at a nursing home now. Many people who come from the countryside usually go to their hometowns. I live in my hometown now, so I don't need to do that.

自然な表現

I sometimes used to go to my parents' home during Obon when I had some free time, but no one lives there now. My father passed away last December, and my mother lives at a nursing home now. Many people who come from the countryside usually go to their hometowns. I live in my hometown now, so I don't need to do that.

1. Use a comma to indicate a pause between parts of a sentence.
I understand. Since you already live in your hometown, Obon must feel a little different from when you visited your parents. What do you usually enjoy doing during Obon these days?

We work or stay at home during Obon because there are so many tourists in my area. We usually take a summer vacation during other periods because we avoid the crowd, and the higher transportation and hotel prices.

自然な表現

We work or stay at home during Obon because there are so many tourists in my area. We usually take a summer vacation during other periods because we avoid the crowds and the higher transportation and hotel prices.

1. Use the plural noun "crowds" to refer to crowds in general.
  • a farewell party(送別会)
  • a welcome party(歓迎会)
  • a former colleague(かつての同僚)
  • presentation(発表、プレゼンテーション)
  • club activities(部活)
  • excursion(小旅行、遠足)
  • ordinarily(いつものように)
  • We had a farewell party.(送別会をした。)
  • I went to the bar and had three beers.(パーに行ってビールを3杯飲んできたところよ。)
  • I went for a drink with my former colleague.(かつての同僚と飲んできたんだよ。)
  • I went to the gym and swam in the pool.(ジムで泳いで来たんですよ。)
  • I felt better after going to the bar.(飲み屋に行ったら気分が晴れました。)

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  • 日常
  • 初級
  • 自己紹介
  • 最近の出来事