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週末の過ごし方について話してみよう

Talking about how you spend your weekends
週末の過ごし方を説明してみましょう。あなたが記載した回答に対して、講師がどんどん質問していきます。
週末は何をして過ごしますか? 週末の過ごし方は人それぞれです。あなたはアクティブに過ごす派ですか?それともゆっくりと過ごす派ですか?
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What do you do on weekends?
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What do you do on weekends?

I often wake up so late on Saturday mornings. I get out of the bed before eight o'clock on Sunday mornings to throw garbage away. Then I return to my bed to enjoy sleeping without worrying anything. After all, I sometimes spend Saturday mornings without doing anything until noon.

自然な表現

I often wake up so late on Saturday mornings. I get out of bed before eight o'clock on Sunday mornings to throw away the garbage. Then I return to my bed to enjoy sleeping without worrying about anything. After that, I sometimes spend Saturday mornings without doing anything until noon.

1. Better word order.
2. Add the definite article "the' when referring to something specific or a specific group.
3. Add the preposition "about" to indicate the subject of the worry.
4. Better word choice
Wow, you have such a relaxing weekend routine, what do you do when you wake up at noon? Do you have lunch or go out to grab a snack?

Yeah. I usually go out ot grab a food. I usually go to bed between twelve and one at midnight. I feel regrettable to sleep without doing something valuable before twelve. Sometimes I regret not going to bed early when I get up the next morning. My family are all awake so late at night. My son and daughter, who are both students, are too. I'm afraid that they should go to bed by twelve at the latest. However, they spend their hours using their smartphones until midnight.

自然な表現

Yeah. I usually go out to grab some food. I usually go to bed between twelve and one at midnight. I regret sleepping without doing something valuable before twelve. Sometimes, I regret not going to bed early when I get up the next morning. My family members are all awake so late at night. My son and daughter, who are both students, are too. I think that they should go to bed by twelve at the latest. However, they spend    hours using their smartphones until midnight.

1. Spellcheck.
2. Food is uncountable so you can say some food or simply say something to get.
3. Use the simple prefer tense when talking about a present situation.
4. Additional expression.
5. Better word choice.
6. The pronoun is redundant here.
It's a habit I guess, many people have trouble going to sleep as most people spend a lot of time checking SNS on their smartphones. Do you do any chores on the weekend?

I don't do other chores on the weekend. On the weekday, I usually wash and shave my face, and have breakfast. Then I used to go to the office by train until this March. Now the coronavirus has spread. The company asks our employees to work from home, so I don't need to shave my face. My beard has grown long.

自然な表現

I don't do other chores on the weekend. On weekdays, I usually wash and shave my face, and have breakfast. Then I used to go to the office by train until this March. Now the coronavirus has spread. The company asked its employees to work from home, so I don't need to shave. My beard has grown, it is now long.

1. Use the plural form when speaking in generel terms.
2. It is a past event so use the past tense.
3. Additional expression.
  • celebrate(祝う)
  • gather(集める)
  • cottage(別荘)
  • weekend(週末)
  • every weekend(毎週末)
  • I spent my weekend reading a new novel.(私は週末新しく出た小説を読みました。)
  • I went to a concert this weekend.(私は週末コンサートに行きました。)
  • I enjoyed cooking in my house.(家で料理して楽しんだんですよ。)
  • I want to go shopping next week.(来週は買い物に行きたいです。)
  • I took a walk with my dog around my house.(家の周りを犬と散歩しました。)
  • My hobby is~.(私の趣味は~なんです。)
  • All I do on weekends is sleep.(週末は寝てばかりです。)
  • I'll just stay home.(ただ家にいますね。)

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