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My company is car manufacturer which provides many type of vehicle over the world.
I am in charge of car display design, speed gauges or navigation screens are I am involved now.
My company is a car manufacturer which provides many types of vehicles all over the world.
I am in charge of car display design, speed gauges or navigation screens are what I am involved in now.
I think our products are provided focus on reliability.
So prices are not low, but they ensure safety driving.
I think our products provide focus on reliability.
So prices are not low, but they ensure safe driving.
2. 'safety' is a noun, but we need an adjective here to describe the noun 'driving', so we should use 'safe'.
Yes, we have a large market.
Especially our products are popular in ASEAN.
We have product lines both luxury and affordable.
Thinking of the car as a transportation service instead of personal belonging is important.
Now, you generally use owned car which you buy.
But in the future, it will be change.
You will use them over subscription service.
So I need to design products and services for many users to use.
Thinking of the car as a transportation service instead of personal belonging is important.
Now, you generally use an owned car which you buy.
But in the future, it will be changed.
You will use them over a subscription service.
So I need to design products and services for many users to use.
2. The past participle 'changed' is needed here to properly form the passive voice in the future. Passive form is structured like this: 'Subject+to be+past participle'.
3. 'subscription service' is singular and countable, so we should use an article before it.
If you own a car, you have to pay a lot which are Insurance, car inspection, parking and taxes.
These payments are very expensive for the frequency of use.
Now you can use easily car sharing service through smartphone when you need.
So I think car sharing service will become more big in Japan.
And I may be involved in the development of a new service.
If you own a car, you have to pay a lot for insurance, car inspection, parking and taxes.
These payments are very expensive for the frequency of use.
Now you can use easily car-sharing services through a smartphone when you need.
So I think car-sharing services will become bigger in Japan.
And I may be involved in the development of a new service.
2. Capitalization of insurance is not needed.
3. 'car-sharing' is a compound adjective, and we use hyphens to form those adjectives.
4. Either use plural 'services' which is more suitable for this context since you are referring to services in general, the plural form is usually used when making general statements, or use an article before the noun phrase if you want to use the singular form.
5. 'smartphone' is singular and countable, so we should use an article before it.
6. The same as correction number 3.
7. The same as correction number 4.
8. The comparative form of 'big' is 'bigger'.
関連単語
- inroad（進出）
- co-worker（同僚、（一緒に仕事をする）協力者）
- duration（持続（期間）存続（期間））
- reliable option（信頼性の高いオプション）
- specifications（仕様書）
- Accordingly（従って、それに応じて）
- expiry period（満了期間）
- parcel（小包）
- ~ish（接尾辞で、およそ～ぐらいの、～のような）
- good deal（お買い得、得な取引）
- profitable（有益な）
- similar plans（同様の計画）
関連フレーズ
- bring out success（成功を引き出す）
- What's the purpose of (this new service)?（この新しいサービスは何が目的なんですか？）
- Give it your best shot.（試しにやってみよう、挑戦しよう）
- Are you planning to launch~?（〜に（仕事などに）乗り出す、発射する）
- What price ranges will it cover? （どのような価格範囲をカバーするか）
- Will it be affordable?（手頃な価格でしょうか？）
- prepare for~（〜を準備する）
- How much time do you require?（どれぐらいの時間が必要ですか？）
- Can you explain (in details)?（(詳しく)説明してくれますか？）
- from domestic to overseas（国内から海外へ）
こんな方にオススメ
2. 3. 'many' should be followed by a plural noun, so we need both 'types' and 'vehicles' here.
4. 'all' is needed here, we usually say 'all over the world' or 'around the world'.
5. 'what' is needed here as the object of the verb 'involved'.
6. The preposition 'in' is needed here, we say 'to be involved in something'.