Original

夢中になっていることについて話してみよう

Having an interest in something
あなたは、夢中になっていることについて話してます。
夢中になっていること、興味を持っていることについて話す機会は多くあると思います。休み時間、仕事後、自分の趣味などを話し周りの人と話すことによって、さらにいい関係を作っていきましょう。
Icon
What are you excited about?
Icon
 
このレッスンを始める
Writingレッスンの例
Best Teacherで実際に行われている直近のWritingレッスンです。
作成したスクリプトは講師により添削されます。
What are you excited about?

I am excited about playing "Mine craft." It is a game, and I received it for my Christmas present. I wanted it so much, and I watched many YouTube videos that show people playing Mine craft. I just got it today because my parents bought me it, and I'm going to play it this afternoon. I am really excited about it.

自然な表現

I am excited about playing "Minecraft." It is a game, and I received it for my Christmas present. I wanted it so much, and I watched many YouTube videos that show people playing Minecraft. I just got it today because my parents bought me it, and I'm going to play it this afternoon. I am really excited about it.

1. This is the correct spelling of the name of a game
Sounds like you have an awesome Christmas and you got exactly what you wanted from Santa. I have not heard of Mine Craft tell me briefly what the game is about?

Okay. Mine craft is a game that the player can make things as they want. There is an adventure mode and creative mode, and I like to play the adventure mode. In the adventure mode, the players can make things, and also can adventure. There are some zombies and all kinds of monsters. In the creative mode, players can fly around and make things they want, without monsters.

自然な表現

Okay. Minecraft is a game that the player can make things as they want. There is an adventure mode and a  creative mode, and I like to play the adventure mode. In the adventure mode, the players can make things, and also can go on an adventure. There are some zombies and all kinds of monsters. In the creative mode, players can fly around and make things they want, without monsters.

1. This is how the name of a game is written
2. You are missing an indefinite article 'a' here
3. You need to put verb 'go' + preposition 'on' + indefinite article 'an'.
That is very exciting and a lot of work to be creative you must have an interest in order to play the game. What special thing did you do you like doing with your new game?

Well, I started playing it now, and it was really fun. I found 2 pyramids within 10 minutes. It is very rare, because many players are struggling to find pyramids. In pyramids, there are some traps, but there are treasures, too. I found gold and iron ingots, and many other treasures. I also found a village, and it was really big. I like this game a lot.

自然な表現

Well, I started playing it recently, and it was really fun. I found 2 pyramids within 10 minutes. It is very rare, because many players are struggling to find pyramids. In pyramids, there are some traps, but there are treasures, too. I found gold and iron ingots, and many other treasures. I also found a village, and it was really big. I like this game a lot.

1. This is a better adverb to use for this context, it means 'Not long ago', 'at a recent time'.
Wow I am excited just by reading about your game I am glad it makes you happy. Do you have any other hobbies besides playing games?

Yes, I like to read books. My favorite book is "Swallows and Amazons." It is written by a British author, so the background is similar to the U.K. I really liked the story, which is about 4 children called "Swallows" going to a little island until their summer vacation ends. Then, they meet 2 children who call themselves "Amazons," and the 6 children adventure all around the island, and also the port.

自然な表現

Yes, I like to read books. My favorite book is "Swallows and Amazons." It is written by a British author, so the background is similar to the U.K. I really liked the story, which is about 4 children called "Swallows" going to a small island until their summer vacation ends. Then, they meet 2 children who call themselves "Amazons," and the 6 children adventure all around the island, and also the port.

1. This adjective is more fitting for a noun 'island'.
I love getting book recommendations, it is one of my resolutions so I am excited you told me about this book I am going to look for it. It sounds awesome. IS it your favorite book or is there another book you have read? How many books do you read a year?

I'm called a bookworm, so I don't know how many books I read in one year. Also, I have many favorite books, for example, "The Famous Five" and "Sherlock Holmes." I really like these three books, so I think I have read it for about 3 times each. So, I recommend you these three books if you want to read a English book.

自然な表現

I'm called a bookworm, so I don't know how many books I read in one year. Also, I have many favorite books, for example, "The Famous Five" and "Sherlock Holmes." I really like these three books, so I think I have read each for about 3 times , so, I recommend you these three books if you want to read an English book.

1. This is the correct word order here.
2. Put a comma before a conjunction 'so' .Avoid beginning a sentence with a conjunction.
3. If a following word starts with a vowel, use indefinite article 'an'.
  • quality time(充実した時間)
  • intriguing(興味深い)
  • a good chance to~(~する良い見込み)
  • hobby(趣味)
  • entertainment(エンターテインメント、楽しみ、演芸、ショー)
  • be stunned by 〜(〜に仰天する)
  • never seen anything like it(そのようなものを一度も見たことがない)
  • be motivated by 〜(〜により、モチベーションがある)
  • have to deal with an unprecedented case(事例のないことに対応しなければいけない)
  • be devoted to〜(〜に専念する)

こんな方にオススメ

  • 日常
  • 中級
  • その他
  • シーンリクエスト
  • 雑談する