現在の心配事について話してみよう

Worrying about something
あなたは、現在の心配事について話しています。
何か気がかりなこと、心配事は日常生活の中にあります。話を聞いてもらうだけではなくて、解決策などもしっかりと話し合えるようにしておきましょう。
What things make you feel worried?
 
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What things make you feel worried?

Well, a woman once said, "Snoring. It's a disgusting habit. Only the lower classes do it." I don't know whether snoring is limited to the lower classes or not, but truth be told, I have been annoyed with my snoring habit, especially in the case that I travel and share a room with a few friends. In such a case, we mostly discuss and drink heavily until midnight. It is perfectly obvious that I snore that night and the friends in the same room must be suffered from my snoring. Sometimes I snore myself awake. How about you?

自然な表現

Well, a woman once said, "Snoring. It's a disgusting habit. Only the lower classes do it." I don't know whether snoring is limited to the lower classes or not, but truth be told, I have been annoyed by my snoring habit, especially in the case that I travel and share a room with a few friends. In such a case, we mostly discuss and drink heavily until midnight. It is perfectly obvious that I snored that night and the friends in the same room must have suffered from my snoring. Sometimes I snore myself awake. How about you?

1. Annoyed "by" something.
2 3. You are referring to the past.
Well, I snore too but I don't think it has anything to do with someone's social class. Have you considered looking at some of the ways to stop snoring?

Yes, I bought a medicine. However, I don't believe in its effectiveness, so I only tried it once or twice so far, I still keep it though. Once I suddenly woke up in the middle of night because I got a smash on the face by someone. It was my wife. She was suffering from my snoring for several days in succession. I had sinus problems for years when I was a child. Probably it could have something to do with my snoring. Do you have something thought to be causally related to your snoring?

自然な表現

Yes, I bought some medicine. However, I don't believe in its effectiveness, so I only tried it once or twice so far. I still keep it though. Once I suddenly woke up in the middle of night because I was hit in the face by someone. It was my wife. She was suffering from my snoring for several days in succession. I had sinus problems for years when I was a child. It could have something to do with my snoring. Do you have something thought to be causally related to your snoring?

1. Use "some" when mentioning medicine for the first time.
2. Begin a new sentence
3. Paraphrased for accuracy and clarity to express your point.
4. Omit "probably" since you say "could".
When did you start snoring?
I have a hypertension and I think this has something to do with my snoring.

Oh, you have hypertension? In contrast, I have low blood pressure rather than high blood pressure, so I'm not certain, but in my view, blood pressure may not have something to do with snoring. Anyway, as you pointed out, I don't feel at least that our social class has something to do with the disease as well.

自然な表現

Oh, you have hypertension? In contrast, I have low blood pressure rather than high blood pressure, so I'm not certain, but in my view, blood pressure may not have anything to do with snoring. Anyway, as you pointed out, at least I don't feel that our social class has something to do with the disease as well.

1. Use "anything" in a negative expression.
2. More natural word order.
  • deadline(締め切り)
  • discuss(意見を交わす、議論する)
  • concern(s)(不安、心配、関心事)
  • in mind(念頭に)
  • overthinking(考えすぎ)
  • Did you manage to do everything I asked for?(お願いしたことは全部できましたか?)
  • It makes me wonder if you were paying any attention at all.(全く気にしていなかったのかと疑ってしまうほどです。)
  • Her photography captured the beauty of ordinary life.(彼女の写真は、平凡な生活の美しさを捉えています。)
  • I suffer from indecisiveness.(優柔不断で悩んでいます。)
  • It is argued that the opposite could apply as well.(その逆もあり得ると論じられています。)

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