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あなたは、今やらなければいけないことについて話しています。
学校、会社、旅行先など様々な場面でその時にやらなければいけないことを伝えることは大切です。シチュエーションを変えて繰り返し受講し、相手や場面が変わることでどのように表現を変えると良いか、という点も意識して受講するととても良い学習となります。
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What are you up to?

I have to get a driver license in the US. I have done reservation for the exam. I am going to take it the late September. According to the blog, studying takes 2 days, so it is no problem. In addition, I am studying the license for my architecture professional work. I am thinking of getting it by the end of this year. Moreover recently, I am interested design competition. Do you know "KOKUYO DESIGN AWARD 2020"?

自然な表現

I have to get a driver license in the US. I have done the reservation for the exam. I am going to take it the late September. According to the blog, studying takes 2 days, so it is no problem. In addition, I am studying for the license for my architecture professional work. I am thinking of getting it by the end of this year. Moreover recently, I am interested in a design competition. Do you know "KOKUYO DESIGN AWARD 2020"?

1. Use the definite article "the" to modify "reservation"
2. Use the preposition "for" after "studying" when you are explaining the thing you are studying towards. E.g, She is studying for her math exam
3. Use the preposition "in" after "interested". Use the indefinite article "a" to modify "design competition"
Wow, you seem to be quite busy lately. I'm afraid I had never heard of that award before. What is it about?

"KOKUYO" is Japanese stationary company. Their product is various. There are notebooks, pens, erasers, office equipments, and so on. The company holds the design competition of stationary every years. Do you know "KADOKESHI"? If you don't know, you should check it. This is an unique eraser, and this was born in previous the award. Anyway, this theme is "heart". What do you have an idea?

自然な表現

"KOKUYO" is a Japanese stationery company. They make a lot of products. There are notebooks, pens, erasers, office equipment, and so on. The company holds the design competition of stationary every year. Do you know "KADOKESHI"? If you don't know, you should check it. This is a unique eraser, and this was created in the previous year. Anyway, this theme is "heart". Do you have an idea? 

1. Use the indefinite article "a" to modify "Japanese stationery"
2. This is the proper spelling of the word
3, 7, 8. These are clearer ways to express these ideas
4. "Equipment" is an uncountable noun so it is always in the singular form
5. "Every" is a singular word so you should put the noun in the singular form
6. Use the indefinite article "a" instead of "an" because "unique" starts with a consonant sound
I am thinking that this is a very good design, and they also looked into incorporating foreign designs into our products?

Yes, many foreigner participate in the competition. I was sure the number was 40% of total in last one. Please look at the website. It has translate future to English and Chinese. Anyway, when you look at the heart graphic, what do you have an idea?

自然な表現

Yes, many foreigners participate in the competition. I was sure the number was 40% of total in last one. Please look at the website. It is translated into English and Chinese. Anyway, when you look at the heart graphic, what do you think?

1. You said "many" so the noun that follows should be in the plural form
2 and 3. These are clearer ways to express these ideas
I'm very glad that a lot of foreigners participate in the competition. How do you delete increase the numbers from 40%?

Yes, I think so. Nowadays, I am glad that international competition is increasing. I am fun to see the work that was designed by foreigner who has various backgrounds. Sorry, I am not sure your question. What is the "delete"?

自然な表現

Yes, I think so. Nowadays, I am glad that international competition is increasing. It is fun to see the work that was designed by foreigners who have various backgrounds. Sorry, I am not sure about your question. What is the "delete"?

1. You should say "it is fun" because you are describing an experience
2. You should use the plural form of "foreigner" because there are multiple foreigners that design for this competition
3. You should use the third person plural conjugation of "to have"
4. Use the preposition "about" to form a proper sentence
Sorry for this mistake. I was asking how you increase the number from 40% to get them higher? What do you think?

It is simple. The reason is some architecture foreign website. In foreign competition field, the award tend to fairly judge without applicant's background so that these are popular.

自然な表現

It is simple. We use foreign architectural websites. In the foreign competition field, the award tends to fairly judge without applicant's background so that these are popular.

1. This is a clearer way to express this idea
2. Use the definite article "the" when modifying a specific field
3. This is the proper way to conjugate for the third person singular
  • beforehand (前に)
  • interested in (興味を持っている)
  • catch up with the rest of my tasks later(残務は後で巻き返します(追いつきます) )
  • priority(優先事項、重要度の高いもの)
  • imperative(命令、指示、規則、原則)
  • intend to do 〜(〜をするつもりである)
  • attempt to do 〜(〜を試みる)
  • end up rescheduling (結局リスケジュールすることになった)
  • make a to-do list(やることリストを作る)
  • it is essential to do(それをすることは重要である)

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