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ペットについて話してみよう

Talking about your pet
あなたは、ペットについて話しています。
海外では、変わった動物を飼っている方々も多くいるようです。ご自分のペットについて話しながら、相手のペットについても尋ねてみましょう。
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Do you have a pet?
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Do you have a pet?

No, so I have wanted to have a rabbit or as a pet for a long time, but I can't do it because my environment is not ready for it.
For example, all of my family are busy and won't have time enough to take care of them:( besides, my mother strongly disagree with having a pet, particulaly rabbit.

自然な表現

No, but I have wanted to have a rabbit as a pet for a long time, but I can't do it because my environment is not ready for it.
For example, all of my family members are busy and won't have time enough to take care of them:( besides, my mother strongly disagrees with having a pet, particularly rabbit.

1. You need a linking word that is going to make a contrast.
2. OR doesn't fit in the context here, just delete it.
3. This noun is necessary here.
4. You need to add -s at the end of a verb when you have the third person singular in the present simple tense.
5. An adverb is needed here, so you need to add -ly.
Oh, why would you like a rabbit for a pet? Is there something special about rabbits that you really like?

I found such a cute rabbit on Instagram and realized the cutuness.
Now, I have followed many Instagram accounts of people who have rabbits.
The faces are really lovely, but rabbits are so famous for pets which are difficult to take care of them because they are too delicate and easily get an ear's symptom:(

I wanna Holland Lop which are rabbits with lop ear!
I'm interested in giant rabbits too!!

Do you have any pets?

自然な表現

I found such a cute rabbit on Instagram and realized how cute they are.
Now, I have followed many Instagram accounts of people who have rabbits.
The faces are really lovely, but rabbits are so difficult to keep as pets because they are too delicate and easily get an ear's condition:(

I want to have Holland Lop which are rabbits with lop ears!
I'm interested in giant rabbits too!!

Do you have any pets?

1. Your expression is odd, please use something like this.
2. This is a more natural and simpler expression you should use here.
3. A symptom is just a part of any condition or disease, which describes it, so here 'condition' is more suitable.
4. Your expression is informal and it would be okay to use it in everyday communication with your friends of family.
5. Rabbits have two ears, so the plural form is needed here.
Can you tell me what an ear's symptom is? I do have dog. I named him Milo after a famous dog in movies.

Yes, ticks live in the inner of a rabbit's ear by eating the earwax.
Rabbits cannot easily clean their earwax and it is more difficult for the owner to realize it and clean them, so the symptoms tend to be serious. For example, they feel a strong itch and they hurt their ears, then they suffer from external otitis and the virus spread through their entire body :(
I know symptoms are so dangerous for all pets, but rabbits are really delicate, so stresses makes them suffer from intestine symptoms.

Oh, it is a great name:) What breed is he?

自然な表現

Yes, ticks live in the inner part of a rabbit's ear by eating the earwax.
Rabbits cannot easily clean their earwax and it is more difficult for the owner to realize it and clean them, so the symptoms tend to be serious. For example, they feel a strong itch and they hurt their ears, then they suffer from external otitis and the virus spreads through their entire body :(
I know symptoms are so dangerous for all pets, but rabbits are really delicate, so stress makes them suffer from intestine symptoms.

Oh, it is a great name:) What breed is he?

1. This noun is needed here.
2. You need to add -s at the end of a verb when you have the third person singular in the present simple tense.
3. No need to use the plural form here. Now, that you have a singular form you should add -s at the end of a verb.
I see. I never thought that rabbits are very high maintenance pets. He's a Jack Russell Terrier, he always likes to sleep beside me every night. Did your mother ever tell you why she doesn't want to have pets?

Jack Russell Terrier is so cute!
I like their ear's shape. When did you start to have him?
Many owner sleep with their pets like you!
I really want to do it too:(

I discussed it with my mother a lot of times, but the difficulties to take care of rabbits is the biggest reason which she disagrees with it, besides, I spend most of time outdoor, so she has to take a lot of duties for them:(
I wish I could get enough time for them:(

自然な表現

Jack Russell Terrier is so cute!
I like their ear shape. When did you get him?
Many owners sleep with their pets like you!
I really want to do it too:(

I discussed it with my mother a lot of times, but the difficulties to take care of rabbits is the biggest reason which she disagrees with it, besides, I spend most of the time outside, so she has to take a lot of duties for them:(
I wish I could get enough time for them:(

1. No need to add an apostrophe and s here.
2. This is the verb you need to use here.
3. You used 'many' which is why you need to use the plural form here.
4. The definite article is needed here.
5. This is a more natural expression.
I see. I still hope that you will be able to take care of the rabbits that you like. It could still be possible to happen in the future. Right?

That’s right!
In the future, I will definitely have a rabbit!
I would like to go to a rabbits cafe to know them after this pandemic is over!

自然な表現

That’s right!
In the future, I will definitely have a rabbit!
I would like to go to a rabbits cafe to get to know them after this pandemic is over!

1. To learn something about them. That is how you should convey this message.
  • bark ((犬など)吠える)
  • veterinary(獣医)
  • rare pet(珍しいペット)
  • lifestyle (生活習慣)
  • have loved(愛していたら)
  • feed pets(ペットに餌をあげる)
  • having a hard time disciplining my pets (ペットのしつけをするのに苦労する)
  • let a pet stay inside your home(ペットを家のかなに入れる)
  • walk a dog (犬の散歩をする)
  • adopt a pet from a shelter(ペットを保護施設から引き取る)

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