先生に宿題を持ってくるのを忘れたことを伝えよう

Telling the teacher about forgetting to bring your homework
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Where is your homework?
 
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Where is your homework?

I forgot present homework. I made a misstake for the deadline. Incidentally, what day is the weekly homework deadline? I thought it's Wednesday tough. The present contents was drawing of natures, wasn't it? I decided where I drew, and I prepared art tools. I'm sorry. Next time, I'll bring both of this week's one and the next week's. Are there what I can?

自然な表現

I forgot my homework. I made a mistake for the deadline. What day is the weekly homework deadline? I thought it's Wednesday. The present homework is drawings of nature, wasn't it? I decided on my subject, and I prepared art tools. I'm sorry. Next time, I'll bring both this and next week's homework. Would that be okay?

1. "Present" is misused here. This should be a determiner for "homework".
2. Spelling mistake.
3. "Incidentally" is misused.
4. This doesn't fit the construction.
5. This needs rephrasing to correct the construction. "Nature" is a non-count noun. Non-count nouns do not have plural forms.
6. This needs rephrasing. You can use the word "subject" to refer to something you are drawing or painting.
7. This also needs rephrasing to correct the construction.
8. It's not clear what you mean here. I assume you're asking if this is okay.
I understand you forgot. The deadline for the assignment is Tuesday, not Wednesday. The assignment was indeed a nature drawing. While it's unfortunate you missed the deadline, it's good you'd already planned your location and gathered your materials. Would you happen to have any questions about the late submission policy?

How is this late submission supposed to affect a record? I'd like to proceed to the next level of education as planned, so I'm worried about not being able to do it. Actually, it was not good about the first semester record. I wasn't used to taking classes in English and I can finally get listening to lessons in English. It was a long way to being used to taking lessons.

自然な表現

How is this late submission supposed to affect my record? I'd like to proceed to the next stage of my education as planned, so I'm worried about not being able to do it. Actually, my first semester record wasn't good. I wasn't used to taking classes in English and I am finally used to listening to lessons in English. It was a long way to get used to taking lessons.

1. Use "my" because you're referring to your record.
2. This needs rephrasing. It's better to refer to it as the "next stage" instead of "level".
3. This needs rephrasing to correct the construction.
4. This needs rephrasing. The phrase "used to" is a good fit here.
5. "Get used to" is the right choice here.
This is the beginning of the new semester, so even though you certainly didn't get the best of starts, I am ready to turn a blind eye this time, but be sure to complete both this week's and next week's homework by next Tuesday!

Thank you so much. I'll take care of the deadline next time and I'm sure to do both of homeworks of two weeks. I guess the next week's assignment is the reserch in European paintings though, I'm looking to search with books in this library. I wonder I shoud use what of books. It's so many books that I choose for this homework. How should I choose the books for a research?

自然な表現

Thank you so much. I'll make sure not to miss the deadline next time and I will submit both assignments next week. If I remember correctly,    next week's assignment is the research in European paintings. I'm looking forward to researching in this library. I wonder which books I can use. There are so many books I could use for this homework. How should I choose the books for this research?

1. This needs rephrasing to correct the construction.
2. "I guess" can be used here but the phrase "if I remember correctly" is a better choice.
3. There's no need for an article here.
4. Spelling mistake.
5. "Though" is misused here and it's better to separate this as another sentence.
6. You were probably trying to use the phrase "looking forward to" here.
7. "Researching" is the better word choice.
8. This needs rephrasing for clarity and to correct the construction.
9. This also needs rephrasing to correct the construction.
10. Use "this" to specifically refer to your homework.
Why don't you start at the school library? There are many books there. I'm sure you're going to find something you can use!

That's great! It's good I can look over a lot of references and investigate deeply. Then I can use the desk in the library, so I seem to get many researches done in one day. I tend to do other things when I'm at home. Isn't there any solutions of a problem that I can't stop playing with my smartphone at home? I feel guilty about it but I can't stop it.

自然な表現

That's great! It's good I can look over a lot of references and investigate deeply. I think I'll do as much as I can in the library for one day. I tend to do other things when I'm at home. Do you have recommendations on what I can do to limit playing with my smartphone at home? I feel guilty about it but I can't stop it.

1. This is too wordy and confusing, so it needs to be rephrased. You don't have to say you will use the desks there because it's already implied.
2. This is also too wordy and needs rephrasing to correct the construction.
Noticing the distraction is already a good first step. Try setting study time blocks and keeping your phone in another room. Apps that limit screen time can also help. Want to talk more about study tips?

Since I can't keep concentrating, I'm helped by dividing study time by bricks. It's good my phone leaves from me, too. I'm not good at setting rewards to me. I always use my phone halfway and I can't make my motivation. I get feeling good when I eat sweets. I wonder the good way is that I can eat sweats if I achieve the goals. So I'll try my best.

自然な表現

Since I have a hard time concentrating, dividing my study time sounds helpful. It also sounds helpful to place my phone in another room. I'm not good at setting rewards for myself. I always use my phone halfway and I can't find motivation. I feel good when I eat sweets. I wonder if I can reward myself with sweets if I achieve my goals   I'll try my best.

1. This needs rephrasing to correct the construction. The right term is "time blocks" not "bricks".
2. This is confusing so it needs rephrasing.
3. This also needs rephrasing to fit the construction correctly.
4. "Find" is more commonly used when referring to "motivation".
5. This is wordy. You can use "feel" instead of using two verbs.
6. This needs rephrasing for clarity and to correct the construction.
7. "So" is misused here. There's no need for it.
  • evaluation(評価、成績)
  • forgive(免除する、許す)
  • undeliberately(意図的でない)
  • penalty(ペナルティー)
  • grade(成績)
  • I was supposed to call her but I was busy.(彼女に電話するはずだったが、忙しかったんだ。)
  • I should have finished it earlier.(もっと早く完成させるべきだった。)
  • I heard their conversation by accident.(彼らの会話はたまたま聞いた。)
  • I left it on the table.(テーブルの上に置いておきました。)
  • He promised he would not let it happen again.(二度とこのようなことが起こらないようにすると約束してくれました。)

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