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子どもの欠席を学校に連絡しよう

Contacting the school to tell them about your child's absence
あなたは、子どもが欠席することを伝えるために学校に電話をしています。
日頃お世話になっていることを伝え、欠席の理由や、数日間休む必要があればその旨をしっかりと伝えましょう。その日に学校の行事やテストがある場合は、今後の対応についても相談してみるとよいでしょう。
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Good morning. This is Hokuto's mother.
He suffers from heat stroke, so he cannot go to school today.
If he doesn't get better, I would like to let him rest for some day.

自然な表現

Good morning. This is Hokuto's mother.
He's suffering from heatstroke, so he cannot go to school today.
If he doesn't get better today, I would like to let him rest for a few days.

1. It is an ongoing event that started in the past and is still going on so we use the present continuous tense.
2. Spellcheck.
3. 'Days' is a countable noun so it is better to use the quantifier for countable nouns.
4. You are referring to more than one so we use the plural form.
I see. I'm sorry to hear that. What happened to him? How did he come to have a heat stroke? I hope he will feel better soon.

He has had a fever since yesterday and feels dizzy.
He and I went outside for a long time 2 days ago for the first time in 2 months, so he could not adapt himself to the environment.

自然な表現

He has had a fever since yesterday and feels dizzy.
He and I stayed outside for a long time 2 days ago for the first time in 2 months, so he could not adapt himself to the environment.

1. This is a much better word choice. 'Stay' means to be or remain in a place.
I see. I understand. That's really very sad. Did you go and see the doctor at the hospital? I hope he gets well soon.

Not yet, so I'm taking him there at noon.
He is worried about skipping the class.
Are there anything for her to catch up with class?

自然な表現

Not yet, so I'm taking him there at noon.
He is worried about skipping class.
Is there anything he can do to catch up with the missed class?

1. Anything is singular, so we need to use a singular verb 'is' Anything means any one thing.
2. This is an alternative expression.
3. Add this to specify which class you are talking about.
Yes, but I can give you some copies of the lessons that we will discuss. So please tell him not to worry too much. Do you think he could attend the classes next week?

Thank you for your kindness. I'm relived.
I'll tell your words to my son.
If he gets better, he will go o school tomorrow!

自然な表現

Thank you for your kindness. I'm relieved to hear that.
I'll tell him what you said.
If he gets better, he will go to school tomorrow!

1. Spellcheck.
2. This is an additional expression you could add here to make your sentence clearer.
3. This is a much better word order.
4. Spellcheck.
  • school policy(学校の規則・校則)
  • late for class(クラスに遅れる)
  • a doctor's appointment (医者の予約)
  • stomach ache(腹痛)
  • sick(病気・具合が悪い)
  • catch up with class( 授業に追いつく)
  • skip a class(クラスを休む)
  • a truant student(無断欠席生徒)
  • Is there a makeup class for students?(欠席生徒のための補講クラスはありますか)
  • will not be able to go, because 〜(〜なため、行けない)

こんな方にオススメ

  • 日常
  • 上級
  • その他
  • シーンリクエスト
  • 現地生活
  • 家族/友人