子どもをお泊まりに行かせてよいか尋ねてみよう

Asking if your child could go on a sleepover at his/her friend's house
あなたは、子どもを泊まりに行かせてよいか尋ねています。
子供の普段の入眠時間や食べ物のアレルギー、歯磨きなど、特別に気をつけてほしいことなどがあれば事前に伝えましょう。翌日何時頃迎えに行くべきかなど、いくつか質問をするのもよいでしょう。
Does your child want to come over to our house for a sleepover?
 
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Does your child want to come over to our house for a sleepover?

Does your child want to come over to our house for a sleepover? Yes, he does. Yet, I have some concerns about if I can send him to your place. He doesn't understand he lives by a different set of rules than you do. I'm worried if he annoys you. Although I have told him to respect the way things worked in others' homes, he frolicked too much at a relative's place the other day.

自然な表現

   Yes, he does. Yet, I have some concerns about if I can send him to your place. He doesn't understand that he lives by a different set of rules than you do. I'm worried if he annoys you. Although I have told him to respect the way things work in others' homes, he frolicked too much at a relative's place the other day.

1. No need to repeat the question again.
2. (that) as the relative pronoun to show what he doesn't understand.
3. Use the present tense to show something that doesn't change, a routine.
4. This sentence is correct and very well-written, and you can also say (he was very active) for a similar meaning that is more common to say.
Kids can get too playful sometimes. It's okay. He seems to get along really well with my son. I'm sure it won't be a problem. Does he have any allergies?

Thank you. He has no food allergies but is allergic to dust and furry animals like dogs and cats. Please never allow him to jump on the bed or play with pillows. After that, he can't stop caughing for a while.

自然な表現

Thank you. He has no food allergies but is allergic to dust and furry animals like dogs and cats. Please never allow him to jump on the bed or play with pillows. After that, he can't stop caughing for a while.

1. This sentence is correct to use, and you can also say (After that, he has a problem with coughing) or (After that, he starts coughing a lot) for a simpler sentence.
I understand. It's a relief we don't have a pet at home. My boys have been begging me to adopt a dog, but I think it's not the right time yet. What's his favorite food? Can I give him some snacks throughout the day?

Fortunately, he likes all kinds of food, from green peppers to grilled fish. Well, he told me before that the pancakes you made were so delicious. Please refrain from giving him snacks except for after dinner. He wants to be a baseball player, so I am teaching him nutrition education. He is too little to learn it in theory but is acquiring a good balanced diet habit.

自然な表現

Fortunately, he likes all kinds of food, from green peppers to grilled fish. Well, he told me before that the pancakes you made were so delicious. Please refrain from giving him snacks , except for after dinner. He wants to be a baseball player, so I am teaching him nutritional education. He is too little to learn it in theory but is acquiring a good balanced diet habit.

1. Use the comma (,) here to separate the phrase (except) as it is an exception from what was said.
2. Correct adjective form with (al) added to describe the noun (education).
  • trouble(トラブル)
  • pick-up time(迎えに行く時間)
  • drop 〜 out at 〜(〜で〜を降ろす)
  • food allergies(食物アレルギー)
  • address(住所)
  • Would it be possible if my kids could stay here for a few minutes?(私の子供たちがここに数分滞在することは可能でしょうか?)
  • Let me know if something happens.(何かあったら教えてくださいね。)
  • I am worried that there won't be enough for everyone.(みんなの分が足りるかどうか心配です。)
  • I'm concerned about who would let kids play at a park at this time of night.(こんな時間に公園で子供を遊ばせる人がいるのかと心配になります。)
  • Can my kids stay over?(子供たちが泊まっても大丈夫ですか。)

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