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外国人と相撲を見に行こう

Taking a foreigner to watch Sumo wrestling
あなたは、外国人と相撲の観戦に行きます。
相撲観戦がより楽しくなるように、事前に簡単なルールを説明してあげましょう。また、料金や席の情報などを教えてあげてもよいでしょう。
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What do you know about Sumo?
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What do you know about Sumo?

I know how to score the game. A white star means a victory mark, Black star means a defeat mark in a sumo bout, and a gold star means a big win against a yokozuna by a maegashira sumo wrestler. There are 82 techniques of a winning trick.
There are about fifty stables and a stable master trains his disciples in which tuition is supplied from a sumo society. The sumo wrestlers must live together in the training stable while they are in the lower divisions.

自然な表現

I know how to score the game. A white star means a victory mark, a black star means a defeat mark in a sumo bout, and a gold star means a big win against a yokozuna by a maegashira sumo wrestler. There are 82 winning techniques.
There are about fifty stables and a stable master trains his disciples in which tuition is supplied from a sumo society. The sumo wrestlers must live together in the training stable while they are in the lower divisions.

1. Your original sentence was not clear, consider rearranging your words this way to clearly express yourself.
Wow! That is interesting. I can not wait to watch my first sumo match. How many minutes does one match last?

Sumo has an official ranking chart of sumo wrestlers. It reflects changes in rank due to the results of the previous tournament such as a grand champion, a champion, a champion second-class, a champion third-class, the top division, a second-highest division, and the third-highest division. The tournaments are held six times a year fifteen days each in January, March, May, July, September, and November. When a wrestler puts a body part anywhere without feet on the ground or stepped out from the fighting field, another wrestler would win the match.

自然な表現

Sumo has an official ranking chart of sumo wrestlers. It reflects changes in rank due to the results of the previous tournament such as a grand champion, a champion, a champion second-class, a champion third-class, the top division, a second-highest division, and the third-highest division. The tournaments are held six times a year, for fifteen days each in January, March, May, July, September, and November. When a wrestler puts a body part anywhere without feet on the ground or steps out from the fighting field, the other wrestler ___ wins the match.

1. Fix the agreement mistake here by making use of the singular form. You are referring to a singular noun.
2. This verb was unnecessary here.
3. Fix the agreement mistake here by making use of the plural form of this verb.
Oh, I see. Who is the best sumo wrestler at the moment? Do you think we will be able to get tickets to watch the match?

One match has one round and one match takes a couple of moments, some of the time only a second!! You will be thrilled though we are supposed to get tickets after the pandemic.

自然な表現

One match has one round and one match takes a couple of moments, some of the time only a second!! You will be elated though we are supposed to get tickets after the pandemic.

1. Well done, alternatively you can make use of this word.
  • one of the most popular sports(最も人気のあるスポーツのひとつ)
  • defeat〜(〜を負かす)
  • championship(優勝)
  • match(試合)
  • tournament (トーナメント)
  • performance has deteriorated(最近パフォーマンスが良くない)
  • Sumo has been a popular Japanese sport for centuries(お相撲は何世紀にもわたって日本で人気のスポーツである)
  • amazed by the game (その試合に驚かされる)
  • the arena is packed with people(会場は人でいっぱいだ)
  • the tickets are sold out(チッケトは売り切れだ)

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