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タイムマシンがあったら、どの時代にいきたいか話してみよう

Which period do you want to visit with a time machine?
あなたは、タイムマシンを使っていつの時代にいきたいか話しています。
過去に戻りたいと感じる方と未来に行ってみたいと感じる方で分かれるのではないのでしょうか。それぞれの時代でどんなことをしたいか、していたいかについて話してみましょう。
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Which period of history would you want to visit if you had a time machine?
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Which period of history would you want to visit if you had a time machine?

I would like to go to the "azuchi-momoyama period." This is because I really like sengoku warlords of Japan. My favorite warlord is "Sanada" and "Date Masamune." I watched a drama called "Sanadamaru," and I really liked the warlords in that drama. Which period of history would you like to go?

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I would like to go to the "Azuchi-Momoyama Period." This is because I really like the Sengoku warlords of Japan. My favorite warlord is "Sanada" and "Date Masamune." I watched a drama called "Sanadamaru," and I really liked the warlords in that drama. Which period of history would you like to go?

1. 2. 3. 5. Capitalize the first letters of these words.
4. Add a definite article before 'Sengoku'.
What would you like to do if you go back to that period of history? I would like to go back to the time when Albert Einstein discovered the quantum theory of light.

Wow, that's interesting. I would like to meet the warlords I like and if I can, I would like to be one of their servants. In the azuchi-momoyama period, many strong warlords can win wars because their servants are superior. For example, ninjas are one of their servants, and Sanada was very strong because their ninjas helped them out a lot. So, I would like to become a superior servant of one of the most famous and strong warlords.

自然な表現

Wow, that's interesting. I would like to meet the warlords I like and if I can, I would like to be one of their servants. In the Azuchi-Momoyama Period, many strong warlords can win wars because their servants are superior. For example, ninjas are one of their servants, and Sanada was very strong because their ninjas helped them out a lot. So, I would like to become a superior servant of one of the most famous and strong warlords.

1. 2. 3. Capitalize the first letters of these words.
Well if you went back in time you would definitely be the best servant because you know all the strategies they can use.
Would you also like to become a ninja?

Yes, I would like to become a ninja, too. Ninjas are very useful, because they can become warlord's servants if they give them money. Ninjas have to go inside their enemy's premises and gather information for their master. There is a lot of danger inside the premises of enemies, because there might be some traps to catch ninjas. However, I think it is very thrilling, so I would like to become a ninja, too.

自然な表現

Yes, I would like to become a ninja, too. Ninjas are very useful  because they can become warlord's servants if they give them money. Ninjas have to go inside their enemy's premises and gather information for their master. There is a lot of danger inside the premises of enemies  because there might be some traps to catch ninjas. However, I think it is very thrilling, so I would like to become a ninja, too.

1. 2. Remove a comma because it is unnecessary.
Well i would like to become a samurai. So we would be like sworn enemies? I mean that is what i read.

I don't think so. This is because ninjas and samurais can become an ally, too. If we are both the servants of a same warlord, we are an ally. Though, if we're on a different warlord which is an enemy, we could be a enemy. However, even if we are on a different warlord, if the warlords are allies and want to take down another enemy warlord, we could become allies, too.

自然な表現

I don't think so. This is because ninjas and samurais can become an ally, too. If we are both the servants of the same warlord, we are an ally. Though, if we're on a different warlord which is an enemy, we could be an enemy. However, even if we are on a different warlord, if the warlords are allies and want to take down another enemy warlord, we could become allies, too.

1. Use definite article before 'same'.
2. Use the article 'an' before the word 'enemy'.
Ohh, so both samurai and ninjas are like mercenaries? Be it as it may, both sound so cool. The discipline and tradition of these people amazes me.

Yes, it really amazes me, too. Japanese are known to be very strict to both themselves, and others. So, I think that people should learn this spirit to become a good person.

自然な表現

Yes, it really amazes me, too. Japanese are known to be very strict to both themselves  and others. So, I think that people should learn this spirit to become a good person.

1. Remove a comma because it is unnecessary.
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  • hypnosis(仮定)
  • century(世紀)
  • history (歴史)
  • era(時代・年代)
  • There are many unique aspects of Japanese history(日本には多くの独特な歴史がある)
  • no future is set(未来のことはわからない)
  • next to impossible(ほとんど不可能である。)
  • If I could travel through time, I would like to 〜(もしタイムトラベルできたら、〜したい)
  • the law of physics(物理学の法則)

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