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Hirosaki City, known as "the city of castles, cherry blossoms, and apples,'' is a city with a history, tradition, and culture that flourished as a castle town of the Hirosaki clan. However, the purpose of my visit to Hirosaki was to tour Western-style houses. The stylish buildings we encounter in Hirosaki, such as Western-style buildings with pointed roofs and brick churches, have been around for over 100 years and transport us to a nostalgic world. I traveled to Hirosaki during the apple season to see a Western-style house that I had seen in a magazine.
Hirosaki City, known as "the city of castles, cherry blossoms, and apples,'' is a city with a history, tradition, and culture and it flourished as a castle town of the Hirosaki clan. However, the purpose of my visit to Hirosaki was to tour Western-style houses. The stylish buildings we saw in Hirosaki, such as Western-style buildings with pointed roofs and brick churches, have been around for over 100 years and they transported us to a nostalgic world. I traveled to Hirosaki during the apple season to see a Western-style house that I had seen in a magazine.
Hirosaki, the castle town of the Tsugaru domain, has been focusing on education since the Meiji period, aiming to become the ``academic capital of Hirosaki.'' It is said that Christianity was introduced early on by inviting foreign teachers, and that unique Western-style buildings were built on the wave of civilization and enlightenment. This town, located 700km from Tokyo, is most famous for its cherry blossoms at Tsugaru Castle, but I was always more interested in the Western-style buildings that appear in stories. I have always wanted to see them in the northern countries that I have only seen in photos.
Hirosaki, the castle town of the Tsugaru domain, has been focusing on education since the Meiji period, aiming to become the ``academic capital of Hirosaki.'' It is said that Christianity was introduced early on by inviting foreign teachers and that unique Western-style buildings were built on the wave of civilization and enlightenment. This town, located 700km from Tokyo, is most famous for its cherry blossoms at Tsugaru Castle, but I was always more interested in the Western-style buildings that appear in stories. I have always wanted to see them as they are like buildings in the northern countries that I have only seen in photos.
The building I most wanted to visit was the former Hirosaki City Library, a Western-style building located in Otemon Square. It was built in 1906 by master craftsman Sakichi Horie and was used as the city library until 1931. It was a beautiful three-story wooden building with twin octagonal towers on either side, based on the Renaissance style. Although Japanese styles were incorporated in various areas, the high level of Western techniques was evident. The interior was opened to the public, and the pastel-colored interior walls were truly adorable. I'm sure I won't get tired of watching it every day.
The building I most wanted to visit was the former Hirosaki City Library, a Western-style building located in Otemon Square. It was built in 1906 by master craftsman, Sakichi Horie, and was used as the city library until 1931. It was a beautiful three-story wooden building with twin octagonal towers on either side, based on the Renaissance style. Although Japanese styles were incorporated in various areas, the high level of Western techniques was evident. The interior was open to the public, and the pastel-colored interior walls were truly adorable. I'm sure I won't get tired of watching it every day.
Another thing I like is Hirosaki Catholic Church. It was built in 1910 by Tsunekichi Yokoyama based on Father Auger's design. All Gothic wooden altars were made of oak wood, and were valuable in Japan, which did not have a tradition of Gothic architecture. It still has tatami flooring, a vestige of the days when people worshiped while sitting on the floor. The stained glass windows depicting scenes of the Creation, the city of Hirosaki, and Mt. Iwaki were a must-see. It was a truly Japanese church with a fusion of Japanese and Western styles.
Another thing I liked is the Hirosaki Catholic Church. It was built in 1910 by Tsunekichi Yokoyama based on Father Auger's design. All Gothic wooden altars were made of oak wood, and were valuable in Japan, which did not have a tradition of Gothic architecture. It still has tatami flooring, a vestige of the days when people worshipped while sitting on the floor. The stained glass windows depicting scenes of the Creation, the city of Hirosaki, and Mt. Iwaki were a must-see. It was a truly Japanese church with a fusion of Japanese and Western styles.
There are many Western-style buildings in the city that have been carefully maintained and preserved, such as the United Church of Christ in Japan Hirosaki Church and the Aomori Bank Memorial Hall.
Now, let me tell you a different way to enjoy this town. In fact, Hirosaki, the ``apple town,'' is also the ``apple pie town.'' There is a guidebook that introduces 41 types of apple pie. It displays the intensity of sweetness, sourness, and cinnamon flavor, encouraging you to find your favorite apple pie. I'm sure you'll find your favorite apple pie.
There are many Western-style buildings in the city that have been carefully maintained and preserved, such as the United Church of Christ in Japan, the Hirosaki Church and the Aomori Bank Memorial Hall.
Now, let me tell you a different way to enjoy this town. In fact, Hirosaki, the ``apple town,'' is also the ``apple pie town.'' There is a guidebook that introduces 41 types of apple pies. It displays the intensity of sweetness, sourness, and cinnamon flavor, encouraging you to find your favorite apple pie. I'm sure you'll find your favorite apple pie.
関連単語
- expression （表現）
- touch up （修正）
- proofreading（校正、訂正）
- grammar（文法）
- preposition （前置詞）
関連フレーズ
- What would be the best expression to use for this occasion?（このような場合、どのような表現が最適でしょうか？）
- I would like you to especially check that document that I have attached.（特に、添付した資料を確認していただきたい。）
- Would you tell me what thesaurus I should use for 〜 Would you tell me what phrases I could use at my work to sound more professional when speaking to clients?（仕事で、顧客とよりプロフェッショナルに話すようにするため、どのような言い回し表現を使えば良いでしょうか。）
- What would be a more natural expression for sentence number one?（最初の文をより自然な表現で書くとどのようになりますか？）
- Please tell me what I should pay close attention to when I write an essay.（小論文を書くときに注意すべきことを教えてください。）
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2. Use ''and'' to join independent clauses: ''that'' is ambiguous as it is not clear whether it refers to ''culture'' or the city.
3. Use ''it'' to refer to the city.
4. Use the past tense verb ''saw'': ''encounter is used for people or problems that one faces.
5. Use ''they'' to refer to the houses.
6. Use the past tense for past events.