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始業時間に遅れたことを謝罪しよう

Apologizing for being late
謝罪理由は正確に端的に誠意を持って相手に伝えましょう。またその遅れによって補わなければならないことも相手にしっかりと伝えましょう。
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You are late! What happened?
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You are late! What happened?

Yes, I am late. I don't have any excuse, moreover I am not going to apologize about it.

自然な表現

Yes, I am late. I don't have any excuse; moreover, I am not going to apologize for it.

1. A comma, by itself, cannot join two independent clauses. Use a period, a semicolon or a conjunction instead.
2. [apologize for (doing) something]
Excuse me? Are you joking? You must be. Adjust that tone and let's try again? You're late. Why is that?

No, it's serious. I don't want to bind the time. Human should be more freely. I have read Rousseau's book last night. We must go back to nature right now. You just don't recognize how unnatural life we have.

自然な表現

No, it's serious. I don't want to be bounded by time. Humans should be more free. I read Rousseau's book last night. We must go back to nature right now. You just don't recognize how unnatural a life we have.

1. If someone's life or situation is 'bounded' by certain things, those are its most important aspects and it is limited or restricted by them.
  1.1. Or perhaps you mean 'mind the time.'
2. Use plurals when referring to more than one person or thing.
3. Use an adjective to describe a noun.
4. We use the past simple to talk about definite time in the past -completed/finished actions- (often we specify when something happened, e.g. yesterday, three weeks ago, last year, when I was young).
5. Use 'a/an' before a singular countable noun.
That may be true, but this is the world we're living in, and when you agreed to work here, you agreed to be here when your shift begins, and you're an hour late, and you were being rude.

Apparently, your perspective is completely bad effected from modern society. You know, our job is not important, moreover bullshit. Our job only makes capitalist richer. After industrial revolution, human being is robbed. We have to regain it. Don't you agree with me?

自然な表現

Apparently, your perspective is completely affected by modern society. You know, our job is not important, moreover, bullshit. Our job only makes capitalists richer. After the Industrial Revolution, human beings were robbed. We have to regain it. Don't you agree with me?

1. 'Effect' is a noun while 'affect' is a verb. If something 'affects' a person or thing, it influences them or causes them to change in some way.
  1.1. If something is done 'by' a person or thing, that person or thing does it.
2, 5. Use plurals when referring to more than one person or thing.
3. Use 'the' in sentences or clauses where you define or identify a particular person or object.
4. Always capitalize proper nouns.
6. Unclear what you mean by 'it'. A pronoun an only be used once you have stated the noun you are referring to.
Ok, please go to HR. I'm not taking or listening to any more of this. If you'd also like to resign, you can let them know. You're also going to be dismissed for today and will not be paid for the hours missed today.

I'm sorry to hear that. I don't pursued you anymore. Our vision gap is too deep to agree. You are really poor person. (Strip my suits, then I am in mine underwear). I am going to go back forest. Forest is our fundamental womb. I will be literally nakid. I am so thrilled, right?

自然な表現

I'm sorry to hear that. I won't try to persuade you anymore. Our vision gap is too deep to agree. You are a really poor person. (Strip my suits, then I am in my underwear). I am going to go back to the forest. The forest is our fundamental womb. I will be literally naked. I am so thrilled, right?

1. You use 'will' to indicate someone's intention to do something.
2. If you 'persuade' someone that something is true, you say things that eventually make them believe that it is true.
3. Use 'a/an' before a singular countable noun.
4. A speaker or writer uses 'my' to indicate that something belongs or relates to himself or herself.
  4.1. 'My' is used before a noun. 'Mine' is used instead of a noun.
5. [go back TO a place]
6. Use 'the' to refer to something which has already been mentioned.
7. Misspelled 'naked.'
(Speechlessly stares blankly) Ok, I think you need to visit a mental clinic, and I'm also taking this to be your resignation.

You will know I am right shortly. By the way, when have we farewell party for me? As you may know, I only accept organic restaurant. Please be careful about GMO foods and so on.

自然な表現

You will know I am right shortly. By the way, when is my  farewell party? As you may know, I only accept organic restaurants. Please be careful about GMO foods and so on.

1. Better wording. Also 'when will my farewell party be?'.
  • consequently(その結果として)
  • terrible stomach ache(ひどい胃痛)
  • try not to have any accidents(事故にならないように)
  • snowstorm(吹雪)
  • Without telling me(私に言うことなく)
  • waste your time(あなたの時間を無駄にする)
  • Beyond your control (あなたのコントロール(管理)を越えて)
  • Didn't you say that it would start at nine thirty?(9時半に始まると言われませんでしたか?)
  • Please try not to take too long.(長くかかりすぎないようにして下さい。)
  • if that's the case(もしそうなら、だとしたら)
  • Even though you came a bit later than expected,(たとえあなたが予想より少し遅くに来たとしても、 )
  • It's my fault.(それは私のせいです。)
  • I will try not to be late next time.(次回は遅れないようにします)
  • You should have called us before the meeting to let us know that you would be late.(会議が始まる前に、あなたが遅れるであろうと我々に連絡するべきでした。)
  • The call was from the client.(その電話はお客様からのものでした。)

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